~MG SS~ ADHOORI ZINDAGI~ PT12/PG150 /Thread 2 added pg 157 3sep - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Jeevana.

morning 6 ka train hai 😆


tho aap ka wait padna hi hogi

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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
jaldi update kar de...
tab tak I will edit my page...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Interesting hai...
ab tho next part dede...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
me waiting pooja
jaldi update de
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
jst read d prologue and buddy, you made me curious to know more.

So pls cont. soon and kill the curiosity.

Waiting for next part.

Thanx for Pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

ADHOORI ZINDAGI



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Hello a big sorry for being late all due to bloody power cuts here is the part1 enjoy.

PART 1
She was in her lavishing make up room sitting by the window that was giving her clear view of what's going in the world around her which is not less than a hell to her. The world which gives her name, fame and also worshiping her like an angel. She has everything and anything in her life, which is a dream, comes true in everyone's life.
But what about her . Is she happy??????? Is this her dream?????? These questions of her can never be answered. She felt like she was living someone's life with dead soul. A dead smile came to her lips at her own fate and life. She saw a mother and daughter playing. She unknowingly goes to her past memories that were now just a beautiful dream to her.
Maa?????
Maa????
Where are you????
I told you know that I will win this time. Just wait and see I will win today at any cost.

A 3 yrs little girl said to her mother in her babyish language was playing hide and seek with her maa in there lavishing palace. She was the little princess of this palace. She was wearing a Barbie doll dress looking like the real Barbie descended from Barbie land with skin and soul. Her maa is enjoying her challenge just goes little far away from her angel. After searching a lot the little Barbie doll didn't caught her mumma.
She started crying with her cute chubby cheeks. Her face color faded due to her hiccups.
She again called her maa
A women cladded with beautiful sari that was complementing her beauty came to her little angel hurriedly seeing her cry.

Beta I am here Na see, your mamma is here only. Angel plz don't cry. You challenged me Na so I was just trying to play safe nothing else. So plz now stop crying like cry baby.

The word cry baby makes her stops angel hiccups instantly, she just pouted by listening to that word. Her mother just smiled at her daughters pouting face.

So my angel got angry

asked mamma very cutely. She just nodded her saying yes.

Maa ab tum Isa haso mat

The little girl said still pouting
Her mom just muffled her smile seeing her little shrine.

Ok baba you are my sweet angel not cry babay so give me a smile now.
The girl just gives her an innocent smile.
Maa do you know I got scared when I didn't find you

she said very cutely. The mother can sense her daughters fear, she just hugged her.

Beta there is nothing to get fear when your mumma is with u so don't be scared any time she said.

Mumma promise you will be with me always. My teacher said promises made were never be broken, so promise me now.

Mother smiled at her innocent daughter places her hand in hers daughter's tiny hand.

Maa then where is my promise??

She came back reality with the sound of horns that was passing beside her room in that big film studio. The people were in their own world doing their work with happiness with new hope and dreams in their life's. It meant nothing to her its looks like they were also playing there charters like her with the mask of happiness.
She is the famous bollywood actress "Geet kapoor".


She is epitome of beauty. we can say an angel descended from heaven .she acted only few films up to now but seeing her fan following and the awards, rewards no one can say she is the new star of film industry. The room was filled with her pics that were telling her success of her filmy life.
It was the story the outer world believes. It meant nothing to her it was fake just her life. The life that was filled with mask of happiness but in true sense it was filled with darkness oozing around its shel. Her own image was looking like a puppet in the hands of the cruel world. She doesn't want this life that was giving her nothing but hurt and unbearable pain. To her she was just "Geet handa" the cute angel of her mother. Believes in fairy tales just like all girls of her age.
Unable to bear those thoughts that will gives nothing but tears in her beautiful hazels she shuts the window, but can say in true senses shutting windows of her dreams, her happiness. She leaned on the chair and closed her eyes to keep hold on her thoughts, but unknowingly going to Deep Ocean of thoughts.
She was deeply thinking of the dream she got last night she smiled with pain at her own thoughts. Every day she got only night mares not dreams what else she can expect in her hopeless dark life. But in her whole dark shades of life she didn't get any sort of this type of nightmare , where she herself was lying lifelessly in some one's hands.
She was trying hard to remember everything but it was going in vein. She remembers nothing but the words that he said to her, the beautiful night mare she ever got in her whole life.
Yes you are my love
I love you
Love, the word every soul craves to listen by their beloved ones. But the mere word was killing her dead soul. She can't get love of any ones from this cruel world, then why that dream came, why she was unable to remember anything but only his words, they were echoing in her ears. Her helplessness was not at all helping her but only adding to her misery. In her own miseries and helplessness she at one's throws away the table that was kept beside her. But she forgets that a small soul was suffering because of her agony, the golden fish was lying on the floor trying hard to breathe in that vacuum. Geet got stiffened seeing that small soul suffering because of her. She carefully picks that small fish in her trembling hands very safely kept it in water bowl. She was looking at that small soul very lovely a faint smile came to her lips. She was thinking, At least she got the opportunity to save this small life hoping this tiny soul will get long blessed life.
Her chain of thoughts was broken by the sound of door being opened with bang looking like another storm was making their way to her life. She realized where she was right now. Now her expressions changed very drastically, she doesn't even have to give a thought to know whose that was. No one dare to disturb her peaceful time, expect one who is the whole reason of her life destruction. Her face was firm, the pearls that were flowing up to now were dried now. She was just sitting on the floor lifelessly with expressionless face.


A lady in her late thirties cladded with netted sari straight away entered in to the room with devilish smirk that was written all over her face. She gives a mean look to geet.



Geet was staring at some random corner aimlessly without bothering what happening in her surroundings. The lady muffled her hair slightly and gives a peck on geet hair. Geet gives her a look that was filled with hatred. But that lady just ignores her look, by her looks indirectly saying that it won't work geet. Geet just snapped her hand that was muffling her hair and the lady got angry but did nothing . Very calmly with dangerous tone just said

"Geet beta gar challen?"

Geet gives no response just stares at the same corner, the lady got mad this time for her behavior. This is the daily routine for both of them , the lady just got irritated with her stubborn behavior of this girl daily. But she is doing this for her own sake. She said or did nothing just stare at geet some time.
She brought a gold covered box from her hand bag gives a evil smirk to geet. Geet who is not bothering about anything up to now instantly stares at her. The lady gives a look saying you deserve it. Geet try to defend her nodded her head in no, asking don't do this to her. But that devil was not in her soul it was surrounded by evil soul didn't bother about geet pleading eyes. Without and delay she straight away injected her. With tears flowing in her hazels geet lifelessly lied on the floor. The lady face was blooming with happiness just like she won some battle.
In the same mean time a man in his deep slumber jerked open his eyes. He was swetting badly in that air cooled room unknowingly a tear escaped from his eyes. He was thinking what happened so suddenly all these were happening. He came back to reality with the announcement, then he realized he was in his private cube of aero plane, in just few minutes he was at lost reaching his home town Delhi.
He was happy to meet his family after soo many years , but deep in his heart he was fearing for memories that was hunting him that was cause of his departure.Putting all his fears and pain aside, He was enjoying the view of the land by seeing through window. It was his fav time pass in the journey from his childhood, forgetting about the cause of disturbance of his peaceful sleep.





prev: Prolo next.part 2


Ok guys I hope all of u liked it. This is not any dark story. Just wait and see the story to be unfolded.
A special thanks to all who clicked like buttons and given the valuable comments. Sdlife di, jeevana di, hinal maaneet dona di a big hug to all of you.

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Edited by Twilightsparkle - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

hey fia u changed the name??????
nice yar
and thanks for the comment
be with me in this journey
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
wowww
congrats awesome part
par who is dat woman who is aftr geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
awesome update...
prologue was geet's dream :O
now who is this evil lady??????
she drugged geet????
poor geet she is so sad abt her life...
is that maan??!!
like is not working pooja...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
ohh my god so wat was tat injection and who is tat lady

cant be her mother na..

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