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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

little tiny comment diya hai

more later...

me off to go shopping with hubby😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: mayyo

I wasn't planning to post it every time!

You should 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: dqno1

You should😃

Posted it this time. But is there any point posting it every time? I mean, jisne dekhni hogi usne pehle hi dekh li hogi..

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saf24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Congrats on the new thread. Superb update. Aww both Maan and Geet feel something for each other but they are too conscious around each other to say anything. Aww Maan keeps getting interupted every time he tries to tell Geet what he feels. Beautifully written update. Looking forward to what is in store next.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

😃 maan decided to propose to geet and his attemps. geets hallucination 😳 everything in this update was too cute, adorable ,lively. Fabulous update loved it 😊

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HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

It was a fantastic update Maari

filled with such sweet adorable moments that I had this smile plastered on my face throughout reading the update

😊

Maan and Geet's reactions, their introspection, their feelings all so seemed natural and earnestly portrayed😃

The kiss so special☺️

Aayush and Anaya are such darlings wanting to make the most of Geet's time here and make her remaining days memorable😳

Maan struggling voice out his feelings to Geet but not getting an opportunity and when he is on a verge of confessing...🤢

Maari😡

Geet shares her innermost feelings with her diary, her confidant😊

Geet wants to visit their secret place and Maan all willing to accompany and their bonding now more stronger that Geet has started sharing many things with Maan.

The trust so pure😊

G too plans a surprise for Geet and Ryan is so cute😛

It was such an awesome update

and I feel Maan is planning something for the graduation day😳

Maari Please I do want him to confess his true feelings to her before she leaves😕

Loved the update

It was indeed a treat and hope the next one doesn't have any jhatka's

Update soon

😃

Now that I have managed to comment finally😉😆

Maari

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mayyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: dqno1
Thap Thap Thap

😃

😲 😲 😲

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mayyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: dqno1

😊

so many sweet moments..

i loved it a lot...

detailed comment soon

itna chota update😲

and you had to stop there😲

esp loved the secret place and their visit there😃

Chhota?! You call this chhota?? It is above 9000 freaking words! Yes, I had to stop there because it was important. Didn't want to break the next part into two by including some of it here, though that was my original plan. Glad you liked it, Avi! 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: mayyo

Chhota?! You call this chhota?? It is above 9000 freaking words! Yes, I had to stop there because it was important. Didn't want to break the next part into two by including some of it here, though that was my original plan. Glad you liked it, Avi! 😊

phir bhi kam hai. mujhe aisa laga toh main kya kar sakti hu😲

daant ne ki zaroorat nahi hai 😭

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Onir
Congrats!!! 🤗

One more thread added to this story... 😃 and many more to come.

Now we can start our chattar pattar here. And ladai bhi with my daily dose of entertainment. 🤣

Dekho how she is doing gussa Doc.. bechari bholi bhali avi ke kya din aa gaye hai 😭

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