If Only You Saw Me (15) Link to sequel, Pg:165 - Page 132

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

<div align="center"><font color="#6600ff" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">I watch you</font></div><div align="center"><font color="#6600ff" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">walk away from me</font></div><div align="center"><font color="#6600ff" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">every cell in my body seeks</font></div><div align="center"><font color="#6600ff" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">just one look for me</font></div><div align="center"><font color="#6600ff" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">just one sip of happiness from your lips</font></div><div align="center"><font color="#6600ff" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">just one decision that would have made me complete</font></div><p align="center">
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speech less avi...

u know na that am not at all a poetic person... aadhi tho sar ke upar se guzarthi hain... but i was not only able to understaand it but also enjoy it... loved these last lines as still my mood is teary reading mari making my maan cry

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

hai mari
Hi and welcome to the story!
this story was bookmarked long before... sorry i took this long to start reading... but once i started u had hooked me up to this that i read the whole story in 2 days...
Please don't apologise. I am just glad you did read it. 😊
i loved a lot and lot of things in this story... but the most thing i loved is its simplicity... reading the story, made me live all the characters as i was able to relate to with...
Thank you, Lakshmi! It is always a pleasure to have a reader say they relate to the story or they were able to live the characters.
maans mom was a a character who i envy... a mom who is more a freind to her sons and also the dotting mother when the situaiton needs... the bond which she and maan shares is purely enviable...
It is enviable indeed, and their bond is based on a real-life bond in my house: of my brothers amd my mother. 😃
ayush... u made me fall for him... the liveliness in him when he comes to the pic makes all others smile... i loved anya too... their bond is cute, fighting for each and every thing...
I'm really happy you liked them too.
maan and geet... kya kahooo ab inke baare mein... i loved the whole process of loving and falling in love with... after 3 years of silence the way u made geet gel up with others is commendable ... maan as geet stated is such a gentle man ... bikul perfect... his love and care for his mom, his respect and love to his brother, his care for his freeinds... kaun pyaar nahi karega isse ... am latooo on him yaar...
Personally, I'm lattoo on him too. 😳
i loved the date part a lot... not a dreamy one but realistic and a perfect day ...
I am glad!
each time when maan just try to convey his feelings to geet, i felt like shaking him up and tell him go man go... but as the days started ticking , i was like what is mari doing?? geet is going to leave😆
Pehle Maan ke liye advice aur phir beech mein Mari aa gayi? 😆
geet was like a fairy... beautiful in and out... the way she carries off herself ... the way she understands maan... and drools on him😆... her shyness and her power to blush with a look of maan😉... a perfect daughter and sister... love her too... but though i understood may be y she wanted maan to not wait for her... but her outright rejection makes me think y was the need to be so harsh on maaan??😭
Even the most cautious people make grave mistakes, which they would regret for a long long time to come...
the last part made me teary... the confession for which he yearned to do for 3 years ... and the reply he got was heart wrenching... my heart cries for this maan ... in the whole story this maan stole our heart ... and at the end when it was time that he got his well deserved love ... and which i expected too... the reply shattered maan and me too...
I'm sorry that it made you teary. Frankly, I could not make myself write this part for so long that i had to go back and read the previous chapter when I finally started working on it. It was the most difficult chapter of this story.
am so eager now to read the sequel... hope to start it soon... because i know once i start, i will not be able to stop like this one...
I hope the sequel will make up for all the teariness this story ended with. 😃
thanks for such a lovely story... for taking me back to some of my memories... for making me fall for maan more... for making me envy for ths geet... for getting to know all the awesome freinds like aysuh and anya... for give me a love story to dream for...🤗

Thank you so much, Lakhsmi, for leaving such kind words even when you could have easily shown up directly for the sequel. 🤗

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

for you marii...

thanks for the reply...

see u soon at ur next stroy... will try to read it sooonn...

Originally posted by: dqno1

If Only You Saw Me

Love, like the red rose on your breakfast tray

as we decide to make this a sunday in bed again

Me with my papers, you with the book you are reading

your head on my belly, your face towards me

because you can't bear my sight away from your eyes.

We could have had that

If Only You Saw Me

Passion, which grows ever stronger

like our breaths

when we see each other

from across the room

Not knowing where I end and you begin

We could have had that

If Only You Saw Me

Contentment, watching the flames glow brighter in the fireplace.

Wrapped in each other's arms in that blue and white comforter again

Growing old together.

We could have had that

If Only You Saw Me

I watch you

walk away from me

every cell in my body seeks

just one look for me

just one sip of happiness from your lips

just one decision that would have made me complete

If Only You Saw Me

Avi 🤗...thank u for this lovely poem...agree with u about this Maan ...he is the best 👍🏼...poor Geet.. she could have had all the loving moments u described in your poem and more...if only she had seen and felt his love with her heart...sighhh...what a mistake she unknowingly made...let us see what life and Mari have in store for them...this is for you with all my love ❤️

Originally posted by: --Ratna--

Mari 🤗...hi dear...finally finished this awesome story...bookmarked it ages ago...around part 5 real life became crazy busy 😕...after almost a year i started reading and finished it in 2 days...all i can do is bow down in awe of your talent ...

Thank you so much, Ratna! I feel flattered. 😳

What an amazing story...could not stop reading once i started ...u narrate the story so beautifully i could relate to each and very character...they felt so real ...as if they are part of my life...literally lived the story with Maaneet...laughed with them 😆 and cried along with them 😭...awesome work my dear 👏

It is always a pleasure for a writer to hear their readers say they could relate to the story and the characters! 😃

Loved the friendship that slowly developed between Maan and Geet...then came Anaya and Ayush ...what awesome foursome they made...it is rare to see this kind of bonding...unforgettable friends...how true this quote is...

I really agree with this quote. Indeed, as hard as true friends are to find, they are even harder to let go!

So many characters...G...sweet and fun loving cousin...Mrs.Khurana...kindhearted and jovial...Ranbir...responsible and so in love with Zara...Jess the irritating nieghbour...Raya...adorable sis...Mrs.Handa...warm and caring mother...Neil the flirt...Zynah the shy and reserved...Anaya's family...Ayush's parents...all beautifully weaved in to the story...funfilled carefree college days...budding love stories...blossoming frienships...proposal and wedding...dates and outings...lovely thoughtful gifts...exams and graduation...finally the heartfelt confession...the heart breaking rejection...sad farewell...broken friendships...how much was filled in 24 parts...simply superb 👏

Thank you! 😳

Poor Maan...his love is rejected...he is all 💔..my heart aches for him...what unbearable pain he is enduring 😭

Poor Geet...what a loss...she was not ready to receive something so precious...Maan's love❤️...why did she have to think so much...why did she not listen to her heart

Maybe the time was not right for them 😕...whatever the reason they will never forget each other and their lives have been changed forever...waiting to see what happens next in the sequel of their lovestory

Yes, it was not their time to be together, due to which both have suffered. But be assured, their time will come. 😃

Words are not enough to thank u for giving us this beautiful story...loved all the poems u used in between.❤️...made this for u to show my appreciation...red rose musical globe thank you...with love just for u Mari...hope u like it 😳...will see u in the WH thread ...tc 😊