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Posted: 10 years ago
hey I want to read ur every story...I think second life was urs too...sorry I am not good with remembering names...plz update & pm me ur all works including completed ones...
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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful parts..

me too waiting for the updates...
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typing update
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~A TORN RELATION~





PART 35

THANK YOU EVERYONE FOR WAITING FOR ME..
INITIALLY I WAS PLANNING TO GIVE SUMMARY TO ALL THE FFS BUT SOME OF YOU DIDNT WANTED SO I HAVE TYPED.. PLEASE SPARE TYPOS AFTER A LONG TIME I HAVE TYPED THIS FF

HOPE YOU WILL LIKE IT



geet didn't even look at him and this time she with due intention of hurting him wiped the blood making him feel the pain.. she applied the ointment and even if this was not enough she forcefully fed him the painkiller ... and he without any protest had it seeing her angry eyes .. he couldn't believe that his innocent love can be so much angry an she can even show him that too the extent that will keep him shut...

geet was about to leave but he held her hand and she jerked him ..

geet : don't touch me till you don't get cured ..i hate blood and you stink...

maan's eyes went wide and he tried to make her understand..

maan : geet , listen to me..

geet : kyu.. you are worthy for this.. you deserve this but not these wounds samjhe aap..

her words made him clear that she will punish him not him ... he has no rights on himself its hers..

Something that her twisted words conveyed him made him really contented.. her ignorance and that gussa was what he couldn't bear that will be his punishment rather than the punishment that he gives himself in order to repent his actions are only hurting her .. and when she turned her face that was the moment he understood that what actual repentance meant ...

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Whole night they were tossing and turning .. maan wounds were sore and geet she couldn't sleep.. she suddenly sat up and in a futile attempt to get the glass of water her hand touched the glass and it fell down making maan to run to her on the bed.. he looked at his wife her hand was having a cut.. the glass fell from her hands but she unknowingly touched the glass making her hand bleed..

Maan immediately brought the first aid and was about to wipe her blood but she hold his hand and whispered in a terrified voice

Geet : I killed him..

That was what he heard in the first attempt but again let it go.. he knew that was something related to any dream that she saw but he didn't ask .. he very carefully took out the glass off her hand making her yelp in pain..maan made her drink water and again when he was about to move she hold his hand and asked in a almost pleading way..

Geet : can you please stay here I am ..i can't sleep she asked with much hesitation , there relation was not what it should have been but it was far more complicated.. maan wiped the sweat beads from her face and made her lie covering her with the duvet.. he was doing all the things when she didn't first leave his hand and next she was not ready to close her eyes..

Maan : geet please sleep .. kya baat hai..

Geet immediately snuggled close to him.. her all fears , maan was not getting anything of her behavior least he knew that the deep dark fears and incidents had made her so weak and helpless that she was now seeking her warmth in the person who was unknowingly involved in making her deep fears strong but he was now himself is the reason of getting her out of her susceptibility ...

Geet : maan.. promise me..

The hazels were scared like anyone will punish them.. she asked with a weak voice that can make anyone shiver of what she was anticipating...

Maan calmed himself he was getting scared seeing her .. how does she sleep all these nights he had seen her from day one she was away from him it was coz of the mean night but why is she this much drowned in fear he was not getting..

He hold her hand making sure that even his touch will not scare her.. and kissed her forehead , lately he had discovered that these small gestures from his side make her calm.. this was kind of reverse psychology that was working on her , she was finding the solace in his arms..

Maan : I promise mishty I won't .. batao kya hua..

Geet : maan I killed him.. I pushed him that day and ..and he was bleeding... mujhe bahut darr lagta hai maan..

She said hiding herself in him.. he was shocked beyond limits .. what was she saying was not making any sense to him.. who did she killed and why would she ..

Maan st : should I ask her.. he was not in a situation.. whatever she had done he can deal with that later but her words had actually shocked him beyond limits.. she had killed someone.. was this an illusion he was himself confused ...

Maan : geet I am here.. nothing will happen to you.. and you did nothing of that samjhi.. he made her looked at him and told her.. she meekly nodded her head like a baby ... now sleep mishti.. baby too needs sleep.. he again tried to make her lie on the bed but she didn't let him go.. instead she clutched his shirt more to her and slowly closed her eyes but sleep was far away from both of them maan was caressing her hairs just like a baby and she was trying to forget herself ...

FLASHBACK CONTINUES

( refer last update for FB )

veer : you know what sweety no one is here ..

geet : leave me i beg infront of you

veer twist her hands and kissed her lips but she didnt open her mouth ...

veer : not until i have you ...

geet was struggling and veer's hands were holding her tightly she was backing herself.. geet somehow clutched her towel and it was losing too from her grip and in a moment veer pushed her on the bed .. geet was crying and pushing him with her one hand and he was all over her trying to get a hold on her and he was about to take off the towel geet somehow get the flower vase that she on the side table and hit him hard.. he immediately slapped her hard was about to hover over her when she pushed him on the bed headboard making him bleed and he soon lost his consciousness .. a terrified geet immediately took her clothes and went to next room.. that was god's grace that it was all empty and the next room was open she changed and left the place ..

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Next : In new thread

Maan forcing geet to abort the baby.. will she agree

Doubts that few readers have

Veer khurana and vishal khurana(VICKY) are different


Edited by suhaaana - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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After a very long time... very nice update... feeling pity for geet, without any fault of her she is struggling... waiting to know when will maan come to know the truth of veer khurana..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part..
Geet in angry avatar and Maan amused with that..
Geet not able to sleep bcoz of her fears but Maan is providing her his warmth..
so in order to save herself from veer she pushed him and he started bleeding..
precap is superb..
Edited by Preeti_Maaneet - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Preeti_Maaneet

Awesome part..
Geet in angry avatar and Maan amused with that..
Geet not able to sleep bcoz of her fears but Maan is providing her his warmth..
so in order to save herself from veer she pushed him and he started bleeding..
precap is superb..



thnaks simran
well precap is must u c😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
after so long time u update...
poor Geet...
nice update...

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