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PART 1









This OS is after where's the party tonight sequence..




~RUSWA~

Love is a small word
But
A small four letter word can depict the feelings that are relates to him and his heart...
He had known that he was a stone hearted a ruthless and man who can never love..
He remember her saying him in hoshiarpur..

" AAP JAISE INSAN SE KOI PYAR NAHI KAR SAKTA "

it was turning out to be true .. She doesn't love him.. But what are those emotions that are in those eyes.. Those almond eyes which are always in the terms of helping everyone and giving him some kind of peace and solace are dull.. Her eyes were dull than the vibrant and meaningful.. Her tears always hurt him.. The unknown feelings that he was fighting from the time he saw her were now surfaced and when they were surfaced it was already over ...

She was gone..
Forever
Ever..

His life was again dull.. But why what was his mistake. He had opened his heart for the love that was waiting to claim him and change him and his life.. Isn't he the one who was eagerly waiting to accept her and everything related to her then why did all the things aee changed.. She was changed .. Why cant she understand why cant she say that she also feel same..


Maan Singh khurana the man whom the world fears was hiding his fears.. The biggest fear of loosing her.. The love of his life.. His geet..

Last night encounter made maan anxious and broken.. He knew that pari will do something that will make geet come to him and that happened he was truly happy after geet seeing her and that cute pout and those faces that she makes made him loose all the time.. Disc was not the part of MSK 's life but for his life his love geet he chose to test her.. But things fall apart..
Those tears killed him.. Her words were still ringing in his ears...

"MAAN SIR MERE AUR PAAS MAT AAIYE MEIN SEH NAHI PAUNGI"

Taking one more drink he just gulp the whole contents... He was defeated he was loosing his love his geet... The way she left telling him that she didnt deserve him her life those unknown responsibilities made his heart shrunk.. His geet was just eighteen year old girl who had shown immense courage by coming alone to Delhi after her family abandoned her
It was some days and maan had decided to tell daadi the truth about him loving geet and pari... And he was about to do the same when KC had organized a party for the successful completion of the million dollar project and the theme arranged was of golden era..
Geet from the day maan had shown his feelings clearly was avoiding him and has started searching a new job just to make sure that she was able to hide her feelings that love and admiration for the man who taught her to live and love.. But the commitment that she had for her unborn was making her drown in a guilt.

It did pain a lot when your love is not reciprocated and here she was making maan feel that she didn't love him... It was more like killing the same love that she was having in her heart.. The heart which now thinks for him.. Loves him unconditionally , beats for him was crying in the pain of agony that it will be parted from her..

But the truth was that she can't burden him with her responsibilities.. Wiping the tears that trickled down her cheek geet got ready in a stark white Saree she wore the bangles and matching earrings.. The slight nudge that she felt on her stomach the day her encounter with maan in disc was now keeping her resolution high and making her determined that she have to leave him.. And it will be best for him... Pinning her Saree in the most exquisite way she made her way to the party hall.. Everyone was there as according to the theme.. Ladies in sarees and the guys in the suits..
Her eyes searched for him but he was not there...

She saw pari coming in a peach net saree and looking around for maan but even she couldnt find..

Geet " apko iss dard ka hissa nahi bana sakti hun main maan.. Janti hun kitna pyar karte hain aap mujhse par wo dard jo aapko hoga mere uss ateet ki parchai se wo mein sehen nahi kar paaungi.. Isliye aapke pyar ki ruswai kar rahi hun.."

While geet was in her thoughts .. His eyes were struck on her.. She was looking an angel but that was now beyond his reach.. His eyes tried to pull away but that love sidnt let him.. He saw the thin layer of tears that was hidden beneath the kohl in her eyes.. His eyes went to the unknown caressing of her hands on her stomach like assuring herself and baby...
There was a guilt that he read and it was the moment he knew that she was his.. Forever and ever..



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Edited by suhaaana - 10 years ago
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RUSWA

PART 2




Gulping the drinks one by one maan was still thinking how to tell her how to confess his feelings and make her accept her feelings.. He still remember that few days ago she was searching a job and somehow he had made some excuses and stop her leaving him.. She was not only leaving the job but she was leaving him , she was making him to do the things that he wouldn't do obviously..

Maan gulped one more drink.. The success party was at its peak.. when the couples were called on the dance floor.. All the while geet was hiding from him.. She was trying to stop her heart from beating too fast like she guessed his restlessness.. Or was she trying to run from the emotions that were erupting in her heart and was effecting him..

Geet looked at the couples on the dance floor and she expected maan and pari.. But she didn't noticed his eyes which were constantly on her..

Pari approached maan but seeing him not even looking at him she followed his gaze.. And asked him..

Pari : go and ask her dreamy.. She too loves you..


Her words made maan stunned and seeing pari encouraging him he stood up and went to her with small and steady steps.. Geet was already tired.. And she was about to turn and leave when a hand caught her.. She knew this touch and his hand..

Maan slowly held her from her waist and pulled her with him.. The song.. That was changed made geet to see at maan in desperation..

Mere Mehboob Qayamat Hogi
Aaj Rusva Teri Galiyon Mein Mohabbat Hogi
meri Nazrein To Gila Karti Hain
tere Dil Ko Bhi Sanam Tujhse Shikayat Hogi
Mere Mehboob...

Geet in a sheer attempt tried to leave but maan didn't let her her attempts were going futile and he brought her more close so that her front was plastered to his hard torso..
His dark chocolate brown eyes were complaining and she knew his feelings too well..
Maan's hold on her waist tightened as she averted her eyes.. Again denying.

Teri Gali Maein Aata Sanam
Nagma Wafa Ka Gaata Sanam
Tujhse Suna Na Jaata Sanam
Phir Aaj Idhar Aaya Hoon Magar Yeh Kehne Main Deewana
Khatam Bas Aaj Yeh wehshat Hogi
Aaj Rusva Teri Galiyon Mein Mohabbat Hogi
Mere Mehboob...

Each wording of the song was the depiction of his heart and his raw feelings.. His each and every action always prove how much she was in her.. His actions were always bigger than his words .. But he certainly didn't knew that this inability to speak his intentions his feelings will take her away from him..
How much he was hurted when he found that she was searching a new job..
Maan swayed her in a soft tune..and asked her making her heart bleed..
Maan : itna due kyun Jana chahti ho geet..
Geet still remained quiet making him frown and he twirled her and brought her again in his embrace..


Mere Mehboob
Mere Mehboob Qayamat Hogi
Aaj Rusva Teri Galiyon Mein Mohabbat Hogi..
( song from movie MR X IN BOMBAY )..

She was quite and finally when she saw pari looking at them she spoke to maan making him angry..
Geet : this isn't right sir.. Pari is going to be your fianc and she won't like this..
Maan sneered ..
Maan : fake fiance .. Its just her Job .. And she isn't anything till now geet until I approve.. Aur mera dil kya chahta hai.. Tum ache as janti ho..

He said the words and left her on the dance floor alone.. And left the party while stumbling .. A little tipsy.. But he was hurt with her words but he was still maan Singh khurana he won't let her go.. At least not this easily..

Geet seeing the golden opportunity was leaving the party and was in the party hall.
When a hand caught her.. Geet was shocked beyond limits seeing her..



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Next : MSK's actions..

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Edited by suhaaana - 10 years ago
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PART 3


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Shock would be an understatement for geet.. The one she saw was not than any nightmare.. Seeing her in front of her all the atrocities she faced all these days came in front of her , her begging in front of her family.. Attempts to save herself and her unborn were flashing in front of her eyes.. she wanted to run away and wanted to go the man who always helped her , she somewhere wanted her Maan sir there ... Her heart knew that he was the one who could save her from the lady in front of her..
NAINTARA
NAINTARA KHURANA

She was standing in front if geet.. Geet wanted to leave when a hand pulled her..
NAINTARA : him sahi the Dev ke LIYE aayi hain aap yahan .. NAINTARA was fuming in anger.. The day she saw geet in Delhi she knew that she was there to seek revenge after all what all Dev and she did to her was worst even there will be no mercy for them when they will stand in front of god..
And then Dev how can she forget , her husband spent a night with her and the dam girl was pregnant with his child . that was main reason of jealousy.. Naintara was somewhere jealous of geet's baby.. Since it was the khurana hier and the khurana empire will belong to its hier ..
Geet : you are shameless naintara and what are you doing here .. This party is for the respectable people and you by your deeds is not one.. The woman who can make her husband sleep with some other girl for money is no less than.. Geet was about to utter the word when naintara raised her hand to slap but geet hold her hand..
Geet : you are nothing naintara and this is the truth.. You are a bloody cheater and a shallow woman.. And where is your so called husband .. Did you sent him to some other woman..
Geet asked and naintara this time tried to push geet.. But she managed to hold herself..
Naintara : hold your tongue geet.. And dont forget that you are talking to naintara khurana.. And why haven't you aborted this so called baby till now.. This is a bloody B***
Geet : naintara ..
Geet was enraged..
Naintara : why are you shouting this is the truth.. Apna naam toh kisi KO de nai Saki iss bache KO kis ka naam dogi... Dev toh hame divorce nai denge
Geet : even i dont want to give my baby the name of that man.. Wo toh kisi Kabul hai hi nai.. Spineless creature..
Listening to the whole commotion pinky who had seen naintara pushing geet called maan and everyone..
Naintara : shut up.. Who are you .. Kya aukaat hai tumhari.. Ek chote sheher ki ladki hamse naintara khurana se ...
Naintara couldn't complete when maan pulled geet towards him and warned naintara..
After leaving the party maan was alone in the bar.. He had booked a suite for him and was there but couldn't stay there too without seeing her.. He was about to leave to KM when he saw naintara in the hallway harassing geet.. His geet and seeing geet's face drenched in tears his anger blew up and something triggered his senses..
He marched to them and pulled geet to him.. It was such a powerful pull that made geet to fall on him..
Maan : naintara stay away..
Naintara was scared seeing maan's red eyes.. They were having blood.. Why not she hutted his love and maan Singh khurana never spares who hurt his dear ones and geet was the lady love of his life..
Naintara : maan veerji..
The words snapped geet's concentration and she saw at him.. Now it made sense to her.. He was MAAN SINGH KHURANA AND DEV... DEV KHURANA.. THEY ARE BROTHERS..
Maan : I told you naintara that stay away from geet and what did you say that she is nor having anyone ...
No one expected what happened next..
The taveez that was in maan's hands , he was so angry on her that he was about to threw it away and was fisting it in his palm .. It was almost drenched in his blood and with the same he filled her maang..
Maan : geet ke saath ab MAAN SINGH KHURANA ka naam Jud gaya hai.. So dare you come close to what belongs to me.. and don't even think of hurting her.. Maan Singh KHURANA know how to take care of the person who tends to harm his wife..
All those commotion brought a lot of attention and the media was present as Sasha has already called them as she was with naintara..
The media was all clicking the pictures.. It was a breaking news as the business tycoon MSK married his secretary that too in this dramatic way..
Geet was numb she couldn't say anything but Adi called maan's bodyguards and maan took geet with him and the official statement was given by Dev as he was called by Adi..
Daadima was too shocked she knew that maan will marry , after all her acting did have positive effect on her grandson but this much it was beyond her imagination too..
Dev : daadiji , bro his secretary.. Media wants there answer aap dengi.. I don't think bro will say anything..
Daadima called Adi and asked him to arrange a press conference ..
Meanwhile she knew that she has to question maan what was the need to create such drama..
The business world knew that MSK got married but why and this way was still unknown.. They were given the statement that both maan and geet loved each other ...
And the one who was shocked beyond limits was naintara..

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Edited by suhaaana - 10 years ago
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PART 4





Whole commotion was captured by the camera , the clicking of the pictures and the reporters were throwing questions one by one but MSK was quite .. He didn't think to answer anyone.. His actions proved much more than his words would have..
Rep 1 : how long you two have been in this secret relationship MR KHURANA..
Rep 2 : what was the sudden need of this MSK..
Questions after questions but maan had already gone taking his geet with him..
All the frustration.. Geet's constant denial and his drinks made him to take the decision that was too quick to be formulated.. Though even maan knew that this was no marriage but his actions were for the world and specially for the people like naintara who think that they can hurt geet.. Maan Singh KHURANA will never let anything touch her..
Maybe he was sounding possessive but without the much need possessiveness passion cannot be achieved...
On the other hand .. Dev was preparing with daadima for the answers unknown to him that who will his bhabhiji.. He was somewhere too excited to meet his bro's Secretary but the mess he created in an innocent life was still not acceptable and forgivable..

Maan and geet reached the outhouse where geet was staying.. Both were quiet and the silence was before the storm that would either break them apart or bring them much closer..
Maan came in the room where she was sitting kneeling down keeping her hands on her knees .. And when came and tried to touch her .. Then he was met with the much angry geet..
Though there was a complete silence but the frantic sounds of their heartbeats Could be heard.. One was anticipating the outcome of his sudden action and one was trying hard not to see him as the culprit.. But the human mind and the hard time was making her to make him stand on the same platform where she wanted Dev and naintara.. He did cheated her by keeping her in dark.. He was there present in Mukeria ( this was the name mentioned in GHSP , I don't know maybe it comes in hoshiarpur)

Geet : you know Dev ..
Maan was first confused as why geet was asking about his brother.. As far as he know she haven't meet him and maan never allowed Dev to even come near geet.. Owing to his own possessiveness for geet ...
Maan : why are you asking this . he asked..
Geet : because if I had known that you are the brother of that deciever than I should have stayed away from you... I would have never come to you.. But why I am saying this to you.. You are no less than him.. Her all thoughts were diverted to dev's infidelity and she couldn't even think what maan did to her.. How he helped her and most importantly how he helped her from her own Kin who were eager to kill her...
This was no new to her..
Geet's accusations were not known to maan.. And he questioned her..
Maan : geet.. What did Dev do and what are you saying it is not making any sense to me..
Geet : MR MAAN SINGH KHURANA do you think that you can still make me a fool.. Don't you know what your brother did and why I am saying this to you.. You must be knowing all the things since you were too there in hoshiarpur when Dev married me.. And don't say that you didn't knew that you cheated me.. He married me despite of having a wife made me pregnant and left alone so that my family can kill me..
Maan was devastated knowing the truth..
He hold her and asked her getting angry..
Maan : you think that you will say all absurd and I will believe.. Don't forget that you are talking about my brother..
Geet was hurt.. she was wounded with the truth that was now surrounding her life and it actually made so much rude that she didn't even respected the man who saved her life..
Geet : and now you did one more drama..
Maan clenched his fist listening to her words .. His feelings and dev's betrayal were judged on the same basis..
Maan : drama .. You think that this was all planned..
Geet : isn't it MAAN.. You always preach righteous and ask fight for your right but you yourself are supporting the culprit.. I never thought that you will play like this with my feelings.. I had started to trust you..
Their was a resentment in her voice..
When your biggest nightmare mixes with your small impending happiness then it takes all the sense of thinking correct..
The anger filled hazels met his chocolate brown eyes..he knew that making her feel loved and most importantly his were the first and foremost thing he had to do.. Her words were ringing in his ears...
And in a heated moment of passion he grabbed her by her waist.. Maan was pinning her hands holding them with his one hand and her eyes went wide when her lips were touched with his rough ones..
Maan was not at all gentle because his heart was not at all at peace.. She was squirming in his hold but soon his passion over powered her anger.. She didn't knew how and when she felt for the man in front of her but the very moment she was loosing herself in him..
Maan increases the pressure on her lips making her gasp for air and soon they were lost nibbling and kissing each other passionately ...
Maan mumbled in the kiss..
Maan : tum sirf meri ho ...
The moment it didn't matter him if she was used , cheated or was pregnant but with the raw flow of emotions he wanted to claim her more passionately and intimately.. But geet was certainty not ready that he got to know with the sudden push that he get..

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Next : last part..
I hope so..


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Edited by suhaaana - 10 years ago
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Maan knew that she was hurt but he can't let her by any cost.. Maan's dominating nature made geet to push him away from her and she glared at him and she actually didnt think that he will kiss her when she was angry.. She was hell frustated first all the revelations and then the dusht danav who was all ready to eat her alive..
Geet : chi.. This is all you can think I knew that all men are like this and how can you even think of me like this... She again started.. And this time maan knew that he cannot shut her mouth..
Maan : this is all i can think because i am there for you just like the day you fell in water and cried for help.. This is all my right just because i know that you too reciprocate these feelings MS. GEET HANDA.. I dont think that i need to give you any explanations .. And keep me out of the mess dev khurana did..
He just said it too calmly..
But she was too shocked of his this non chalant attitude.. How can he be so cool and unaffected but she didn't knew that his inside was burning just to kill Dev and naintara right there and right now just for the ordeal she went through.. But for her justice she needed MSK with her.. Though he is but geet needs to accept him just like he did..
Geet didn't hear any of his words and she just packed her bags.. She was about to move when maan's words halted her at her place..
Maan : so I was right..
You are running getting scared of the situation isnt it geet..
The smirk that he was having irked her.. And she dropped her bag and went towards the mansion followed by maan..
Maan knew that Dev and dadima would be there and he can't let her face the situation all alone.. But she needs to take the lead he had already called the police ..
Geet as soon as entered the mansion the sight greeted her burn her inside and the guy who was responsible her spoilt life was there ..
She without any further delay went towards him but couldn't say anything as daadima was there.. Daadima was about to address her when maan too arrived and announced..
Maan : daadi we are getting married with all the rituals tomorrow.. His words only earned him a deadly glare from her.. But he least care now..
Daadi faking anger..
Daadi : you should maan.. After all you left no chance to make yourself and geet a news.. Listening to geet Dev who was on the cell phone talking to naintara turned and the color on his face changed from shock to scared..
Geet : so you are here.. Where is your wife and mother.. I must say you are such a spinless pervert that needs women to support you.. And look now you are with daadima..
She couldn't get enough and slapped him not once or twice but he was literally beaten.. And geet would have killed him if daadi and naintara didn't stop her..
Daadi : geet .. What is all this and maan why are you standing there.. Take this girl out..right now..
Naintara tried to push geet.. When geet slapped her too..
Geet : this was for the accusations you hurled on me.. and you are worst than him..
Naintara : GEET...She shouted..
Geet : naintara don't make me kill you.. You two left no stones to make me kill by my family.. Geet would have said something when police arrived and maan asked her to file FIR against both..
Daadima was shocked beyond limits but maan's one gesture made her to stay quite..
Dev and NT were taken by the cops and geet she was all ready to go but maan didn't let her.. This time she said that he is trying to mend the mistakes his brother did but maan didn't find it important to answer her..
Next day , though forcefully he married her..
It took some fifteen days for him to make her understand and realize his feelings but he didn't let his love fell weak in front of her hatred.. At the end of fifteen day geet realized him and the maan Singh KHURANA she loves .. And how can she let him suffer she gladly accepted him and didn't let his love to fell weak in front of the situations...


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So this was the END

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Edited by suhaaana - 10 years ago
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read it in anniversary thread it was amazing thnx for posting it again very nice part eagerly waiting 4 next
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very nice...
cont soon...
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Originally posted by: Drashtilove

read it in anniversary thread it was amazing thnx for posting it again very nice part eagerly waiting 4 next

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Originally posted by: Rosmitha

very nice...

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