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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
poor geet
maan and maan ka gussa😡
who is new guy now???
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -MSKdeewani-

nice update

poor geet
maan and maan ka gussa😡
who is new guy now???


If you read it again, you will see that I mention his name
You can locate his identity in the character sketches
He is a very important character
Hope that helps x 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Eagerly waiting for the next part ... btw Ryan is back .??? huh ?? why ??
and Hate Maan .. I dont think I can accept him with Geet in story ..
btw I miss Pierre .. where's he ?? 😆

UPdate jaldi 😃
Edited by -SilverPearl- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
whose with Geet under that umbrella ?? 😆
waiting...to ...read ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 16
The silent tears


PIERRE!!!!! Geet eyes closely shut as the strong arms embraced her. Her limbs started to falter as she slumped slowly into his chest. With a slow, heavy sigh, she drifted into what seemed like a long sleep. The water dripped across her body, trying to soaking in all her numbness. The sore purple marks seemed to illuminate as the cold droplets glided with her skin. The cries of the cloud resonated with the panicking howls deriving from Pierre. Grief stricken, he paced around Geets chest whilst trying to resuscitate her. The despair grew as Geets skin grew more translucent. All Pierre could think about was holding her in his arms, and never letting her go. She was everything to him.😭😭😭

The sobs grew louder and louder as the rain fell on them ferociously. The thought of Geet leaving him was unbearable. As the lighting began to lash put fiercely, Pierre moved Geet towards a wooden bench. He covered her ice cold body with his jacket.


Even though he was shivering himself, all he wanted to do was hold her warm hand once again. 😳😳😳He pushed against her chest, so he could hear a steady heart beat, but his attempts faltered. The only thing he could do was to ensure her throat was not blocked. He held her nose and breathed into her mouth. His hands quickly moved towards compressing her chest. His mind was like a robots. He moved between her mouth and chest till his hands began to ache. His heart was sinking as her porcelain face faded drastically. His sobs compelled him to move quickly. He closed his eyes as he grew more helpless. Kneeling over his legs, he crouched on the floor, as his shrieking screams echoed throughout the campus. He placed his cheek with hers as he kissed her passionately in that moment of silence. Unknowing to him but his kiss led to a rasp of air filling in Geets lung. Her body shook uncontrollably as her, throbbing pain returned to each corner of her limbs. The grip between the two grew more stronger as Pierre looked at her in astonishment. 😲

The look between the both was interrupted due to a moment of hysteric. Geet pushed Pierre off her with such a force that he was left shocked. She closed her legs, rocking on the bench furiously, as she panicked for air.🥺 Pierre inched close to her, but his movement stopped mid way as she pushed herself off the bench. Pierre was so confused, what was happening to her, he loved her, didn't she understand that. He crouched slowly towards her, trying to desperately communicate with her.

He hummed her name so softly... ' Geet, Geet, look up its me Pierre, please tell me whats wrong. I want to help you. I cannot stand to see you like this, why are you so shaken up. Sweetie please respond, I'm going crazy. I love you, let me help you." He inched closer towards her, closing in to hold her hand. However his attempts were short lived as Geet dismissed his hands. In despair she began to scrape her nails into her skin as the fear within her erupted. 😭

With her bloodied eyes piercing into his eyes, Geet pleaded with Pierre to leave her. " Please, please do not beat me up. Leave me alone, leave me please. I SAID LEAVE ME!!!!! Her grip on her legs grew stronger as her anxiety rose. In a confused state, he picked her up on the floor. The girl he once loved was no longer there anymore. He was staring at a statue. 😔

Looking at her state, he pulled her closer into his chest, enabling her to finally break down. During the next few minutes, Geet pounded her fists against his chest as all her pain confronted her. All he could do was simply comfort her as her sobs drenched his shirt. After a while they both swayed simultaneously until she slipped off again in a heavy sleep. He finally cupped her into his chest and moved towards her apartment. One thing he was happy about was that he realised how much he loved her. With her in his life, finally felt complete.


Who knew carrying a girl in your arms would garner so much attention. As Pierre climbed the apartment stairs, his fellow peers glances were making him rather uncomfortable.He placed his jacket over Geets face and hurried towards the apartment. With his hands trembling uncontrollably, he knocked on the girls apartment, to be confronted by a dracular looking Laila. On the other hand, Laila was furious at seeing Pierre now. The ass hole refused to pick his phone up and now he has the audacity to come to their apartment. As her mouth began to open, Pierre rushed inside, kicking Geets bedroom open. Resembling an unnerved mice, lizzie jumped as the door violently was struck open. Both the girls inched forward as they saw a mysterious girl being placed on Geets bed. As Pierre moved out of the way, both the girls dropped onto the floor seeing Geets horrific physical state. She was bruised from every limb. What has maan done to her!!!!

Carefully Geet inside the bed, Pierre ushered the girls outside and turned the lights off Geets room. Geet was placed in utter blackness. The girls crumbled seeing their mistake play out in front of them, if they did not persuade her to make that stupid mime they would not have to see that day. Seeing the girls upset, Pierre slumped outside Geets room. Just to hear breathe would assure him, that she would be safe. His exhaustion was soon catching with him as he closed his eye lids. The horrid memories of seeing a loved one in so much pain, led to Pierre silently sobbing. Alarmed at seeing his terrible condition the girls inched towards him, placing their hands on his. All three of them, just looked at the falling rain, as they sat in the living room in silence.


However soon the silence transformed into rage, as Pierre swiftly moved in the room. The anger built up as his girlfriend did not recognise him. As a result of the horrific images replaying in his mind, Pierre broke down. The questions in his head, where beginning to spew out of tongue. " She didn't even recognise me, my own girlfriend, why would I abuse her. Have you see her, the bruises she has become a corpse. I wont say spare the person who did this to her, I do not care what happens to me but I will get her justice". Looking at his postivity the girls heads sanks into their hands. Laila wanted to scream at what was happening but she had to keep it in. The anger in her was building up, but she knew justice was never going to happen. She gritted her teeth as she yelled at Pierre, " Justice is never going to happen, you need to stop dreaming. Do you think they will believe you, no one will. Its not like a student has done this to her, it was our art teacher. It is our fault Pierre, we should never have encouraged her to make a meme. I am at fault, hit me. I am so so so so so so sorry".

Shocked at what he was hearing, Pierre strode towards the window. All the friends sat near the window as the rain drizzled down. Their silence was interrupted by Lizzie who brought soup for all of friends. The emergence of the sunrise marked the promise the friends vowed to provide justice for their friend. Holding hands all three slept silently as days activities caught up with them. For the first time ever the apartment was engulfed by a peaceful humming. Whilst the friends slept peacefully, On the other hand the piercing rays of the sun, attacked the gleaming window of Geets apartment. The entrance of light woke Geet up from her replaying nightmare. The burning sensation in her legs, grew as the sun toasted her bruises. As the pain grew unbearable Geet sobbed loudly as she traced the tugs she endured by Maan. Her body started to shake as her mind replayed those terrifying images. Her head began to thump loudly, as her door pounded with several fierce knocks. Her lips whimpered GET LOST!!!! as her hands helplessly sank into her hair. She crumbled on the floor as the room gradually became engulfed by a dark shadow. Her breaths grew louder and louder, until she let out a buried groan.

Geet's mind drifted into a black stir as her eyes snapped shut. The room was so silent, a pin dropping could be heard. Geet's sleep was soon interrupted by a loud piercing noise from across the hall. Her eyes bulged opened, as the alarm rang loudly. Out of fear, Geet hugged her legs tightly as her head sank in her lap. All of a sudden the door knocked gently, with a letter slipping into the room slowly. Geet tip toed across the room to pick up an invitation, which highlighted the wedding of her cousin sister.

Precap: Running on the train, Geet refused to look back, as Pierre yelled after her.


Edited by x-affy-x - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res for comments ...

Am 1st btw 😆

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Welcome back Lazy .🤗.😆 ... I wish you update regularly ... seeing the precap .. my heart came out .. ohhh .. my poor Pierre ..
Really cant forgive Maan for whatever he did .. I hope Geet gets justice ... and seriously I just love Pierre in this story ... he is soo a true lover ... 😳 ...He is sooo caring ..
Btw .. Geet is suffering so much .. feel very bad for her ...
Geet 's goin for cousin' marriage or leaving ?? 😒 ..

Fantastic Update ... Really loved it ❤️
Edited by -SilverPearl- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri

simply amazing
loved itl


Hey still updating

Please comment after i have fully updated😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Will be replying to the comments now 😆
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Originally posted by: -SilverPearl-

Res for comments ...

Am 1st btw 😆

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Welcome back Lazy .🤗.😆 ... I wish you update regularly ... seeing the precap .. my heart came out .. ohhh .. my poor Pierre ..
Really cant forgive Maan for whatever he did .. I hope Geet gets justice ... and seriously I just love Pierre in this story ... he is soo a true lover ... 😳 ...He is sooo caring ..
Btw .. Geet is suffering so much .. feel very bad for her ...
Geet 's goin for cousin' marriage or leaving ?? 😒 ..

Fantastic Update ... Really loved it ❤️


Sweety you will always be the first one😆😆😆

I wish I did update regularly but then what would happen to my sleep
A woman needs to sleep constantly

I love Pierre too, he's a pivotal character to this story, hence the title to love another
I think maan will be forgiven in due time but then his act cannot be forgotten

The future hold happiness for her 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
I loved the 2nd pic 😆 ...
Btw am feeling so sleepy ... my eyes are closing ...

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