SS~ RAZAA~ PART 2/3/LAST pg/30/31/32 *edited* august 28th :)

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harika

@dreamyharika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: preeti.1
nice part ...finally geet ne maan ko bata diya apna dar ...
waiting for next part

i m so happy k tune phir se story continue ki

di thanks for the comment love you so much missed to take your name bt you had been my support too muahhh😳

Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago

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REDWINE

@Grey-licious

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Awsm update di
thank.god aapne is storg ko dhang se end karne ka decision liya

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maneetarsh

@maneetarsh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Hey nice you r continuing story. Nice update

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mani24

@mani24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

OMG di me crying while reading these parts di coz I just love u more di so happy ke I'm reading wht u wanted to write frm ur heart aur di aapki yeh writing is touching my heart 😳 di loved the edited version where maaneet are trying to work there relationship aur when maan is helping her she remembers how the same her father used to do aur feeling emtional she hugged him aur di then she too realized ke jo hota hai kisi wajah se hota hai she is feeling the same what she used to feel for her father lekin the love she has for both is different very different & specail for maan😳 di ab next ka me waiting eagerly😳

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Sia

@lovesia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

OMG didu it would so difficult for anyone who would face this type of situation

it really pained my heart poor geet she is so scared with the incidence which took place in her life

but now there is nothing to fear when maan is near

maan geet ko uske har dard har dukh se dur karega

nd even geet is feeling protected when maan is near her

waiting for more

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.lovemaaneet.

@.lovemaaneet.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

already waiting for next part

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Am so glad you re wrote the story...

there are things that do happen like this...

and i really wanted u to write the part of maan - geet making their relation work and how maan helps her to come out of the past..

i loved the updates... the way he tried to approach her.. her fear.. him trying to speak out and held her down... the emotions that she feels for him... all was very nice...

am waiting for the next parts...