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She looked at her husband who lead her towards the exit after the way her mother-in-law accused her having physical relation with dev!! She didn't know how and when she began loving this man more than her father who was her god, the situation in which maan married her geet never expected he would ever love her probably it was just a pity and now what was it??

Razaa nahi thi uss rishte par ki woh pyar mein badlega lekin jab badla toh khud ko poochne lagi kya woh sach mein pyar hai??


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Yaha Mrs. Sapna Sharma kaun hai?? the police asked as he stood near the mandap with his constables.the bride got worried hearing the name. Geet was looking flawless in her red colored saree, her shaadi ka joda!! There was no makeup just a bindi with kohl in her eyes ... hair made into a plat, her jhumkas, bangles, and payal chummed as she stood up with the tension that hovered her form. She shivered when sapna came forward and surrendered to the police ... Bas mujhe thoda sa time dedije sir ... I want to see my daughter ... my geet getting married, main aapke aage haath jodti hoon ... She pleaded knowing that it was the time for her to sureender. Geet was shocked for a moment trying to make out as to what was happening there!! she moved to get down the mandap, but failed to notice the gathbandhan falling over her shoulder. She turned to look at dev who was equally shocked with the turn of events.



Kya hua maa?? Yeh police yaha?? She asked holding sapna's hand which were in air, her palms cluthing ... Pleading the police ... Aapne apni bahu ko yeh nahi kaha ki hum yaha kyun aaye?? The officer definitely rubbed on the wrong side, sapna and geet almost forgot that geet is her bahu!! Wife of her own son ... Sir please, meri beti ko kuch mat kehna main aapke pair padti hoon, saying she knelt down to touch the feet of police.




Kyun nahi sapna ji?? You murdered your own son and then getting your daughter-in-law to married to the richest family of delhi ... Toh aapki bahu natak kyun kar rahi hai? ... He held sapna's arms and made her stand ... acha hua shaadi ke pehle hi hum aagaye warna pata nahi kya hojaata, the police called for the lady constables to take sapna. Geet didn't know what they were saying, how come arjun was no more and she had no idea?? Nothing made sense, she wanted to confront sapna, wanted to know the truth from her, wanted to know as to what happened



Inspector mujhe meri maa se bas ek baar baat karna hai ... kuch der please ... ek baar jaane se pehle, she requested making out that sapna was accepting the crime. It was true she had not seen arjun for long, he hadn't tried to call her for long. She wondered why but now when the truth revealed she was not ready to accept it ... Please, sir sirf ek bar, geet again tried hoping that he would agree and to her utter dismay he signaled one of the lady constable to accompany the two women ... Inn dono ke saath rehna and remember not more than ten minutes, he ordered.




Sapna and geet entered the room along with the constable, geet felt little uncomfortable to ask infront of her, but she had to ... Maa yeh main kya sun rahi hoon?? Sach batayiye kya aapne sach mein arjun ko ... Haan!! I killed my own blood, I killed him ... Maine uski khane mein zeher mila diya ... Nahi toh who tujhe maar deta iss liye, sapna cut in between and screamed confessing the deed she did ... Kaise bhool jaati main?? Usne tere kya kiya apni suhaag raat par, sapna almost broke down remembering what arjun did to geet. that night when geet found arjun having sex with other woman. She closed the door and cried unable to digest the truth but before she could leave, she felt someone holding her through arm and pulling back into the room. His breath got drenched in alchohol. Arjun slapped her hard across the cheek, and squeezed her neck with his hand ... She winced in pain ... Tried to breath ... Geet almost got suffocated unable to inhale, that was when he left her. The girl who was with arjun joined him wrapped in a sheet ... Arjun stop it na, mere friends raaste mein hai ... isse unke saath chod denge, she said kissing him on his lips so hard that the sheet slipped from her body and he began to f**k her infront of geet. She closed her eyes but didn't know when she fainted!!




Geet woke up after an hour to see two women ripping her clothes, one was trying to feel her bare skin while the other began to pull the saree ... successfully after tearing the blouse. One began to squeeze her curves harshly, other knelt down struggling with the saree but pulled it so hard that the skirt came out and she stood naked, that was when geet understood they were lesbians. She tried to push them but they were so stout that she could hardly fight, soon geet was laid on the bed and then their session started ... The women lustfully ogled at her form ... But to her luck before the women could advance with their actions, sapna barged inside listening to the screams of geet. she hit the two Lesbos with the iron rod she had got with her, they fell down wincing in pain.




Geet hurriedly pulled the blanket on her body, hiding her sanity from her mother-in-law. Sapna's heart almost stopped when she saw geet's form, blood oozing out from her mouth, her bare shoulders turned red. She hugged geet tight trying to soothe her from the pain but geet shoved her away in fear, please mujhe kuch mat karna ... main waisi ladki nahi hoon, she pleaded crying badly in between the hiccups. Sapna didn't know how to support her, how to tell her that it was ok!!



Geet almost was about to vomit when arjun entered the room with his girlfriend, she protectively wrapped the sheet, ghabrao mat I wont touch you '. Bas meri mom ko kuch sabak sikhana tha '. I wanted the property on my name and she was not ready to give it, tumse shaadi karne ka condition banaya and I when I married you, this woman still did not give me the money I needed, arjun yelled moving closer to geet. But sapna wrapped her hands around her and said ... Agar tune isse chune ki koshish bhi kiya na arjun toh bohut bura hoga ... I will transfer the whole property on the name of orphanage.




After that night arjun left the house, sapna transferred the property on his name. Sapna and geet moved to delhi, as time passed both forgot that they were saas bahu, geet began calling her maa!! Things did fell back on the place, she joined in a school as a teacher, but that night reminiscences haunted her. she would slip into a fear whenever she sees stout and strong women. Though sapnna had no property her relations with upper class people remained the way they were.



It was the day of annual function in the school where geet was working. Dev singh khurana was the chief guest. He fell for geet in the first sight, her body, her beauty seemed so captivating to him. it took him a day to find out about the where abouts of geet. dev directly spoke to his mother pammi about her. Pammi and sapna were friends and finalized the alliance after sapna emotionally blackmailed geet for the marriage. She only wanted geet's marriage and moreover the guilt was eating her insides. When arjun came to know about geet's marriage the pysco inside him woke up, he wanted revenge from his mother for not giving him the site in delhi. What a fool he was, sapna had saved it for geet's future and now agreed to give the site in dowry to pammi.



Sapna only wanted to change her son arjun who was a beast but she didn't know that in all this she spoiled geet's life, the guilt ate her to such a level that she decided to settle her life and then die. Fate had something else in the store and she had to kill her son for her daughter-in-law.



She came back to the present watching geet who was numb even to react, the police dragged sapna out as the given time was over!!



Precap: I don't want to give think girls kya hoga!! Maan ki entry next part mein hoga!!



Please don't bash me if you don't like the update or the story ... This is sensitive I know iss liye if you want me to remove I would do it and this story will confine to my blog only!! So choice is yours!!

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An year of marriage, an year of understanding, an year of love, an year of simple commitment, she fell in love with her husband though he never try to go physical with her ... she craved for him and so did he but couldn't follow the advice of the doctor thinking that might end up in misunderstandings. What if she gets scared?? The question itself made maan to control his desires as his love has always been divine in all the senses.



She could never break the shackles and ask him neither could control, so it has become a habit of geet to do household chores or do something else to gain a command on her senses.



And like every normal day maan called geet not finding the car keys to leave for office, she ran inside the room and handed him in a second. Maan could see the fear in her eyes, he rubbed his temple knowing his high pitch voice always scares her.



He kissed her forehead lovingly ... sorry jaan I didn't mean that ... Office jaane ke tension mein tha he said hugging her. When his hand fell on her bare waist, she gulped hard as her throat was getting chocked with the unending desire. The need to be in his arms was going even more stronger in her mind, she crushed his shirt under her palm as his hand unknowingly caressed her waist. Her eyes welled up as maan left her, his heart almost stopped as he saw her eyes filled with tears thinking probably him hugging her made her to cry.



I am sorry ... She placed her hand on his mouth unable to hear the sorry ... You don't need to say sorry maan ... Mujhe aapse kuch poochna tha she said as the fear still lingered in her eyes.



Why are you so scared to ask anything geet?? Maan couldn't stop himself from being straight with his question.



Kyunki mujhe sapna maa se milne jaana tha maan ek baar unko dekhna tha, aap galat toh nahi samjhenge na??



Main khud leke jaaonga I cant let you go alone to jail jaan, ill be back in the afternoon then we would go together thik hai?? She smiled nodding to him, his heart jumped in excitement for making her happy. All he could do was to pray to her babaji that she smiles the same way for the rest of her life.


@jail,

Geet main tumhare saath chalta hoon ... Maan said following her towards the jail, geet stopped him coz she could never let him enter into a place which doesnt worth him, she was there for sapna but he had no necessity to go with her ... aapko aane ki jaroorat nahi hai maan I will manage, she assured maan even though her insides were going mad with fear. She couldn't simply break herself after what maan was supporting her, dammit she is married to him for an year and now she was strong enough to face anything that would come.



Finally the wait was over, it took geet an year to gather herself and meet sapna, she stood infront of the cell and peeped inside. Her tears widened as her eyes found the most disgusting sight ever, She saw one of the women who had harassed her that night with sapna in the jail, and the truth that she found was sapna involved with the woman. Probably living in the jail made her that way she thought, the woman killed her partner for having relation with a man. Sapna seemed happy in her company, geet almost felt like puking but controlled herself. Without a word she came back and ran into the car where maan was waiting for her ... She hugged him petrified with the sight that she had seen, those flashes came back ... the night came back to her.



Maan ... she cried controlling her emotions, Maan ... She cried into his neck muffling the sobs that threatened to escape, and finally she fainted in his arms unable to digest the fact. Maan worriedly got geet to the doctor who had almost lost his temper as he didn't follow her advice.



Doctor: Mr. khurana didn't I advice you that your physical love is necessary to break the shell that she built around herself?? She has faced something she would never be able to digest herself and now its high time that you listen to what I say, warna bohut kuch ho sakta hai ... You may even loose her, its only you who can assure her that the world is as normal as it was, aage aapki marzi.



Turning into lesbians was something which would happen naturally ... few turn with the situations, few with desire ... sapna was jailed for a lifetime, when a woman would not accept the punishment of living alone, the desires stir up or the situations go against her. Generally when women would be deprived of the physical love from a man, its quite common on them to partner with other women. This situation was very common in jail, that's what the doctor tried to tell maaneet.



It took time for geet to accept and forget the black phase of sapna, she did crave for the love from maan which she always wanted. She wanted him to love her but failed telling him, rest was something very satisfying for her with the care she gets from her husband ... The only thing which irked her was pammi and dev who seemed to busy preparing against her, to throw her out of the house as maan was the sole owner of the property. And like a usual day when maan came back pammi was yelling at geet, he didn't understand what happened. He had seen pammi going mad on his wife for no reason, still he remained calm coz he couldn't go against elder, but today the topic that she chose to make geet a culprit was something he could never stand.



He didn't bother saying anything but held geet's hand and walked away, She looked at her husband who lead her towards the exit after the way her mother-in-law accused her having physical relation with dev!! She didn't know how and when she began loving this man more than her father who was her god, the situation in which maan married her she never expected he would ever love her probably it was just a pity and now what was it??



Razaa nahi thi uss rishte par ki woh pyar mein badlega lekin jab badla toh khud ko poochne lagi kya woh sach mein pyar hai??



And when they reached their room, maan's reaction amazed geet ... kyun nahi kaha tumne kuch geet?? Kab tak wait karonga ki tum khud se kuch bologi?? I had no family until you came into my life, the relation I share with my step mother and brother is for name sake,he said what his priority was ... what he expected.



Kaise bolti kuch main unse?? Aap jaante hai I fear seeing stout women?? Phir main kaise bolti kuch maan?? kaise?? Her words knocked sense into him, he was yet to do what the doctor has asked him.



His lips landed on hers, she did not wriggle but only gave in as her body took the form of euphoria. She pulled him closer holding him tight telling him she was even more desperate for the love, shocking him ... he didn't know as to when geet overcame the fear of physical relation but sometimes the desire would break the inhibitions that's what has happened with her.



She didn't let him step back, both let their barriers away ... Geet closed her eyes with pleasure when his hands kneaded her breasts. She didn't let the past haunt her anymore feeling the love that was oozing out from his every kiss and caress. She screamed his name as she found him deep inside her, she pleaded for more and more with passion that overtook her.



The whole night passed the same way, it was probably the next day they stopped. Geet dozed off in his arms. They were complete now, they were one in every sense.



She tried to move away from him when maan again pulled geet back intending to start the session again ... But this time he stopped to clear out few things which needed to discuss then, geet ek baat pochon?



Ji kuch bhi ... What is it that made you bold sach batana he asked pushing her hair back that rested on her face hoping she would answer, geet blushed first and replied ... Maan mujhe khud nahi pata woh kya ehsaas tha ... it was my desire to be loved by you pata nahi kabse



And you feel this desire is wrong geet??


Aap aise soch bhi kaise sakte ho maan??


Phir jo tumne jail mein dekha woh galat kaise ho sakta tha geet?? She didn't want to talk about it, not now ... not anytime, maan held her face that was going numb yet again ... do you love me geet?? He questioned, his love had that strong aura around that she nodded in yes ... then why cant you face the reality?? Sach yehi hai geet ki such things are part of the world promise me that you wont get effected from such??



And finally geet came out of the past, maan had himself seen it when she threw pammi and dev out of the house. And things went better, they built a relation of two souls which were bound by love, with only razaa to stay together for the rest of the seven lives!!



I donno if I could satisfy you all with the update!! Last part hogaya I tried to write more than I thought of anyway leave the comments!!


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Doctor: Mr. khurana I want to talk to you alone, drop your wife home and call me we will have a talk she said confusing maan further. Geet was not a normal girl he knew now, something unaccepted has happened and what?? He laid her on the bed, she did not protest infact she had the juice when he fed her with his own hands. Geet was feeling protected with the way he was taking care of her and after a little while maan called the doctor unable to hold himself back as she slipped into sleep ... Dr. ... Its me Maan Khurana speaking



Haan khurana ji I was about to call you regarding your wife ... the way doctor was going desperate to talk made maan to worry even more ... Aaj jo unhone kaha uske baad I made out she was being harassed by women physically, yehi reason hai that she reacts wildly seeing them, and mostly stout women ... her response is pretty common on her ... treatment ka hai doctor???


treatment is something only you can give,


Aisa kya hai doctor??


Mr. Khurana did you get physical with your wife?? She asked with hesitance


Maan thought for a while and replied ... No doctor, we didnt ... and this can be the only solution this time ... until you dont get physical with your wife she wont be able to fight with the fear thats running within her ... Unko lagta hai ki the same thing might repeat to her, and thats the reason whenever she sees stout women she gets scared, the incident plays back and she slips into fear, and its only your touch that can assure her ... She was not aware of the lesbian relationship till now ... man and woman consummate thats common but this emerging ... newly found relations are yet to be accepted by the society, woh digest nahi kar paa rahi hai jo unke saath hua ... its only you who can get her out of it hope you understand, saying so she finished.



Maan thought about it but couldnt do it, Two days passed geet would go even more into depression when night comes, and the doctor has advised him to get physical with her!! He wanted to assure her, tell her that he was not one of those men whom she takes him to be!! But at the end he had to take the initiative to talk to her. There was so much to know of her, so much to tell her.



That night he found geet sitting by the window, He slipped beside her who was looking at the sky with ... he was the intention to start the conversation, they were strangers who were married and ever since the marriage nothing changed between them ... he called her ... She didn't notice, he called her again and that's when she got shocked seeing maan beside her and began to back with fear.




Please geet I want to talk to you for once ... Aur kuch nahi, he said holding her wrist and making her sit. Of all the emotions till now he had only seen her fearing, or probably crying, why couldnt she try to forget the past?? But maan wanted to



I know you don't want this marriage, I didn't ask your view while marrying you ... Neither did you protest for you decided to take your life, aaj ke baad main tumhe kuch kahonga, this is the first and last time for me to ask you ... don't you want to give US a chance?? Do you want to spend your rest of the life this way?? Agar aisa hai toh main kabhi tumse kuch nahi poochonga!!



His words seemed honest, his gestures seemed true ... She could atleast understand from his behavior towards her since two days and the question that haunted her was why did he marry her going against his own family?? Probably this was the right chance to know it geet thought.



Did you marry me out of pity?? Or is it that like your brother you lust me?? A straight question which clearly indicated her mind, there was nothing wrong in it but it did hurt him the word lust hurt him. But he was ready to answer her any question. He knew she would understand him for sure.



Geet marriage was a long lost thought of my life, and when my mother tried to convince me I didn't bother ... Mere liye woh kitna wait karti?? My brother said he wanted you, phir maine tumhe dekha I donno what I should term the feeling when I first saw you, jab yeh sab ho raha tha I just married you coz I didn't wanted to leave you, maine tum par koi ehsaan nahi kiya ... ek razaa thi ki hum shaayad saath rahenge with this relation.



She turned her head believing his words, geet didn't know as to why she could relate her father with this man.



Main uss din mar gayi jiss din meri shaadi arjun se hua, I was not happy ... Mere papa ne mujhe!! iss duniya ko!! chod diya, he was the most loving person in my life ... Phir main apni maa ke liye boj ban gayi, she got my marriage fixed ... Uske baad unhone mud ke kabhi nahi dekha ki main jinda thi ya mar gayi lekin sapna maa, mujhe nahi pata ki unhone mere saath kya kiya ... initially I hated her, par unhone jo mere liye kiya I developed a bond with her ... Kisine yeh nahi dekha ki main insaan hoon, not my own mother, not the mother which god has given me ... Not even you, everyone want me for their own selfish reasons, shaayad hi main aapko aapka haq depaongi lekin itna yakeen ke saath keh sakti hoon ki ill try accepting you in my life ... Aur woh sirf iss liye kyunki jab bhi aapko dekhti hoon mujhe lagta hai babaji ne unka dil aapko diya.



Maan was delighted that she thought of atleast giving a chance to their relationship, they did try to make things as normal as they could. But whenever geet would face pammi she slips into a depression and this thing maan did notice.



So that was the reason you were defending me infront of the people saying that you know me before marriage?? She asked



Haan geet I didnt wanted people to speak wrong about you, iss liye maine jhoot kaha ki I knew you since college, finally the clouds cleared and geet understood how maan loved her ... Just like her dad.



Geet its already late get up and brush your teeth .... maan called her from the washroom and hearing no answer he came back to see her sleeping, he again called her and handed the toothbrush with paste on it.



Geets eyes welled up to see maan doing the same thing which his dad used to do for her, she got up and hugged him tight confusing him.



Maan ... she cried with hiccups, her tears wetted her cheek and his shoulder ... kyun karte hai aap yeh sab?? She asked thanking her babaji for giving him in her life. She still couldnt understand that how she was feeling a sense of love for this man just like the feeling she always had for her father but with a difference here. She now knew that whatever happens in life, happens for a reason.


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Sapna did not struggle now for she understood that she will be given no chance to speak, but when she came out of the room she found dev and pammi walking out. sapna tried to stop them but the answer that she got from pammi was something she had least expected coz the kind of friends they were she could never ever imagine, I dont want my son to marry a girl who hails from a criminal background and you did lie to me saying geet is an orphan ... You have adopted her ... sapna stood shocked, she thought pammi would atleast respect their friendship and here she was making fun of her act. Everything broke literally for her as geet will have to live alone in life and she was only 22, a fear ran through her spine imagining what geet will have to face, she would sit in jail leaving her to go into the world which would treat geet as a daughter of a criminal ... please pammi aise mat bolna geet ko main akeli nachi chod sakti ... Main maanti hoon maine jhoot kaha tha but it was only for geet, I spoiled her life knowing what arjun was, I was responsible for what all happened to her please ... saying so she moved to hold dev's hand ... beta please geet se shaadi karlo, she is really nice ... meri beti ko ... sapna stopped herself seeing dev stepping back. A realization hit her hard dev never loved geet, was attracted to her and how foolish was she that she had mistook it to be something else. But the next set of words that she got to hear ... She thought she was dreaming, main shaadi karonga geet se ... a man entered the hall, his hand crossed on the chest.



It was a very well known voice as maan was the elder brother of dev, Pammi and dev were shocked seeing maan whose posture seemed as strong as his words he couldn't believe his mother said all that to sapna as he always thought that she and sapna were great friends.



Pammi interfered to stop maan but he seemed to be adamant, very adamant with his decision, main sach mein geet se shaadi karna chahta hoon maan, he emphasized but she tried to explain her stand too ... no you will not!! Ek se shaadi kiya, kaafi nahi hai ki dusri shaadi ke liye ready ho gayi?? Pata nahi kitno ke saath ... Maa please main geet ko college se jaanta hoon, he replied giving one last blow to his mother ... and I know more of her!! next there were no talks, marriage happened ... Geet did not remember seeing maan in her college how come he said that?? He was lying she understood, he was lying for the sake of marraige. She remained numb for she knew what she would be doing after the marriage so whatever that was happening around didn't mean anything to her. And the main reason for her to remain calm was sapna coz she wanted her to go happy to the jail coz nothing could change the fact of her being a culprit, she would be satisfied that she got married. Sapna blessed the couple and then surrendered herself, it was her punishment for the selfish mother that had spoiled geet's life for own son she thought.



Sapnas life was never an easy one, she was a single mother, she brought up arjun all alone. To her earning money had become so much important that she failed to check on her son who only indulged himself in wrong deeds, drinks and girlfriends. When she understood it was late sapna ended up getting arjun married to geet thinking marriage might change him. But it only led her to a regret of a lifetime.



A similar feeling, a similar fear ran through the nerves of geet when she was led into the room on the night ... she opened it and found decorated beautifully, aniee (sister of maan and dev) settled geet on the bed, time passed but she still found herself deep in the thoughts of past lost somewhere. The pain she had gone through, the humiliation she had faced, she saw herself naked on it like the last time, she wanted to die, wanted to kill herself. Long time passed, she went numb to everything as the last ounce of control and then went into the bathroom and found toilet cleaner. She gulped down the bottle as she heard the door clicking open.



Maan did not find geet anywhere after he came inside, the guilt of marrying geet against her wish was already eating him alive and now it increased in folds finding the room empty. As he went into the washroom, he found her lying on the floor, maan mentally cursed himself for his deed.



Mr. khurana your wife is perfectly fine, we cleaned out the liquid, nothing to worry kal discharge kar denge but I guess she has some problem mentally I would suggest you to take her to the physiatrist, the doctor said feeling helpless, maan did not understand as to why the doctor said it,



Par kyun doctor?? He asked in fright, the least he expected was him being the reason for if he hurt geet.



Doctor: Mr. khurana ever since she came into senses I found that something is bothering her, and the reason probably would be depression ... Kuch baatein hai unke mann mein and if she is not treated she might never be able to come out into the normal world.


The next day geet was discharged, maan tried his best to talk to her but the scared expressions in her shook him to no extent. He didnt fail noticing the way geet got frightened looking at the stout maid, she hugged him tight with fear confusing him. It was then maans mind worked, she was harassed or something?? And then the thought that came to him was the doctors advice which he almost forgot.



He looked at geet as she pulled herself back realizing what she did, geet we need to leave to the doctors place ready ho jaana he said going out. Only geet could answer as to why was she behaving so odd, expect for pain and agony she had nothing left in life.



That evening at the psychiatrist place,

Doctor: Mrs. Khurana, she is just a nurse why are you getting so scared seeing her?? He asked when geet was moving back while she was guiding geet into the other room for check up ... Mujhe darr lagta hai Doctor, darr hai ki she would force me .. Main waisi ladki nahi hoon she replied hinting the doctor for what had happened to her in the past. Geet was about to run away from there but maan stopped her and steadied the movements.



Even in the morning he had seen geet in the same way, he recollected back ... she fears stout women but why?? He pulled geet into his arms understanding her plight and tried to assure her that it was ok, kuch nahi hua ... please dont get scared I am here, he said. The warmth that radiated from his body for the first time soothed her. She could see the image of her father in maan, something she could never even try to get answers for the questions that were running in her mind.



Mujhe ghar chalna hai maan please, she almost begged hiding her face in the crook of his neck, unable to take further, the place was killing her within ... not until you say why do you react so much seeing the other women geet, jawab do kya hua tha?? He tried to sound as low as possible not scaring her yet again. With the way maan was supporting her geet made out he could never harm her. And then she stepped back coming out of the hug. And it was high time she speaks out the frustration that was inside her, tears welled up ... she cried



She will force me ... wahi sab hoga jo pehle hua tha, uss din ... that woman ripped my clothes, ripped my sanity into pieces ... uss waqt maa thi mere aap har waqt toh nahi hogi na maan, she was making way towards the exit when maan held her hand and tugged geet closer. It took some time for doctor to understand what geet said just then.


tia happy?? ill post probably 3 or 4 parts today itself and finish this story i thought of confining this story to the blog but few ppl encouraged me saying i was bold enough to put this issue forward i cant let them down


thanks for the support girls few have flooded my pms that really means a lot to me😃

next part coming up in few hrs please leave ur comments till then😳


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thanks to all those honest readers who have boggled me with ur pms and comments for them i would give an epi thanks again!!

and ya i have answered most you u all on pg 22 and 23 check out!!
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would want to thank all my honest readers who supported me all the while and especially to shruthe di 🤗

thanks for the lovely and special comments and pms which made to rethink and type the whole story in a way i thought earlier so here i am with the whole story🤢
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Originally posted by: dreamyharika

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thanks to all those honest readers who have boggled me with ur pms and comments for them i would give an epi thanks again!!

and ya i have answered most you u all on pg 22 and 23 check out!!



thanks so much 😊
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Heyy Roohi ya Gundi kise ho aaj kal bahut chup hogaya mai dont worry I am back with my torture

Razaa what it meant re the story was soo sensible but yeah you written what s happening in now days

So you dont have to give explanation to anyone what ever the story you wont let down values specially the love between maaneet

Thats y I like your stories and ha titles of your stories were really soo different sach kaho tho I dont know the meaning of them silly me

And story the way you potrated was outstanding and was just awesome trust me maaneet bidding relation was really wonderful

And sapna what she did for geet was really makes me speechless she killed her son but at end she too leading the same life uffo

Geet have maan with her but in normal cases for those girls no one will be there how pathetic it was seeing girls being raped or being murderd these all were still happening

Your story makes me remember things which I am for getting thanks for that

And ha dont give any explanation if any one hurted you with there words just fight back throw them out of your reach you did nothing just writing your own stories so what to bother about good for nothing bashers I love the way you are ise hi raho my Gundi haha. And ha dont end your stories re short stories nahi chahiye muje I want atleast 50+ parts story and story have to be like ROOH RUSWA RAZAA etc so dont dare to start any short story will kill you. You will end story before I started enjoying the esscnse mercilessly hate you for that huh

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