SS~ RAZAA~ PART 2/3/LAST pg/30/31/32 *edited* august 28th :)

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pop77

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Nice parts,..you could write more parts..I wants to know how Geet become independent..

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love2_soma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story n fr d pm also...

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Mona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Awesome update loved it thanks for the pm

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preeti.1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

i m not happy ye last part kyu tha

i want one more part with full of maaneet romance and their new begining ...bhale hi epilogue de de apne blog mewaise na i should angry

kitni baar samjhayaa baby ignore those creepy peoples jo hamesha tujhe accuse karte he ...par tu apne loyal friends ki baat bhool jati he aur un idiots ki baat yaad rakhti he jo kabhi acche comments de nahi sakte 😔

u r a fab writer sweety and i really love u ND UR WRITING ...

plz dont upset dear and epilogue to chahiye mujhe ...warna me atti batti so baras ki katti ho jaungi

Samjhi ya Samjhau

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preeti.1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

awesome update ...maan married geet coz jab usne sach me pehli baar geet ko dekha tab se he started liking her..

i really love the way u show their growing understanding for each other ...

maan knew pammi aur dev dont like geet as his wife ...par maan is a gentleman ..wo kaise ek elderly lady k saath bura karta ...

but i loved it ...chalo kam se kam geeet kicked them out ...😃

plz try to give one more update with maaneet ...

plz baby apne pyare pyare dosto ki dil ki ichcha to puri kar de

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_Maaneet_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

nice end but i wished u can give us another part like an epilogue pls pls pls!!!!!!

loved that maan married geet because he liked her when he first saw her!!!!!!!

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.OneDirection.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Aww awesome part ⭐️
Sapna went to jail after geet 's marriage with maan, and maan supported her all the while.

Would love if u give an epi too , full of maaneet 😳
The story ended so fast , will wait for epi pleez

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harika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: maanmeet1
Don't knw who r bashing writers and y...pls if u don't wanna read it, leave it der only...

Lovely story...it was rushed I knw bt understand wht made u do dat...dev n pammi were kicked out n dats wht I loved...

Sapna shocked me...I mean in d jail after a yr...bt u r right...in jails it's very common...few out of choice n few r forced to do it...

thank you so much for understanding and supporting me 😃

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harika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: pixelflower620
a harsh truth u hv portrayed here buddy⭐️
nd writing such a reality tkes gr8 courage
like u i also rem bout such kinda girls in my hostel i was horrified knowing bout thm 😡
nd u hv written it truly
nd bout tht arjun too men like these xist in d society 😡
but thr r also men like maan who r thr nd u hv described maaneet's love so understandingly too 😃
i wud say brilliant on ur part to come up wid such topics
thnx fr d pm 😃

you always support me and i love you for that thanks again for the loving comment🤗

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harika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

hain bashing...kyun...what is in this story that caused so much reaction...

this is very beautiful story...

when I was reading it mujhe laga ki why this part is written like u r giving summary for remaining story...

chalo ok hai ji if u have given whole story instead of leaving it...