MG FF- Waqt ...badalte rishton ki dastaan. /th#2 added - Page 2

awesome
loved it
do cont soon
second tag line

Nice start ...
Continue soon. .

Originally posted by: tiakashyap

wow
lv the forst part
my maaneet married for 8 years n now will celebrate ninth year of together ness
aww lvd it
i like the first one 😆

Originally posted by: nelufar10

Hii dear,,

Congrats for new ff...
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I like WAQT- Diye huye faisle
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Very nyc concept...
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maneet r too cute... continue soon😊😊

PART 2

Geet : kaka aapki tabiyat khrab thi na

Kaka : pr

Geet : pr wr kuch nhi

Jaaiye

Mein sb smbhal lungi

Kaka : thik hai betiya

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ye hai kaka

Inhe sb kaka hi khte hai

Jb mein phli baar is ghar mein aayi thi

Aur phli rashm kuch meetha banane ki

Inhone meri bhut help kit hi

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Asa nhi tha

Mujhe khana banana nhi aata tha

Pr mein bhut nervous thi

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You all understand na...

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Baki sbse breakfast table pe milayungi...

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Abhi mujhe khana banana mein concentrate krna chaiye.

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Geet : nakul baki ka kaam tum dekh lo

Mein bacho ke room me jaa rhi hu

Nakul : ji

Geet : aur ha

Daadi, mom aur dad ko tea de dena

Maine bna di hai

Nakul : ji

Geet : aur ha Deepak se khke Vicky ka room clean krwa do

Aaj wo aa rha hai

Nakul : ji

Geet : aur ha Maan ki coffee mein khud bnayungi

Wo tum mt dene jaana

Nakul : ji

Geet : ab jaayo

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Ek baar...nhi actually 2 baar

Ek baar anjaane mein

Aur dusri baar jaanbujkar

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Nakul : sir aapki coffee

Maan : hmm

He takes one sip and spit the coffee.

Maan : nakul ye coffee kisne bnayi hai

Nakul : maine

Maan : tumhe coffee banana bhi aati hai

Nakul : phle toh har baar mein hi bnata tha

Aur tb toh aapko

Maan : out

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Maan : geettt

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Us waqt mein daadi ke sath baithi thi

We are seeing our marriage photos. You know I am looking so much beautiful...

Tbhi to maan bs dekhte hi rh gye

Daadi ke baare mein baad mein btati hu.

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Geet : ji

Maan : maine tumhe kuch kaam diya tha

Geet : nakul ne aapko coffee nhi di kya

Maan : di na

Geet : fir kya huya

Ase kyun gussa ho rhe ho

Maan : ab gussa bhi mujhe tumse puch ke hona honga

Geet : waise bhi aapko koi reason thode na chaiye

Maan : geettt

Geet : yhi to khdi hu

Dheere bol sakte hai

Mujhe dheere sunai deta hai

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That's our first argument.

Aur us din maine unhe kaha tha

Next time mujhe is tarah pareshaan kiya na

Toh nakul ke hath ki coffee peeni padengi

That's his punishment.

And one more thing, mujhe toh coffee banana aati hi nhi thi...

Mujhe khud nakul ne sikhayi thi.

She smiles.

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Geet : princess aankhen kholo

Princess: mom bs 2 minute

Geet : bilkul nhi

She takes her in her arms. Princess hugged mom tightly by her neck.

Geet : kavita

Kavita : ji

Geet : fatafat princess ko tyaar krdo

Kavita : ji

Princess: mom

Geet : mehak

No excuses...jaldi se tyaar ho

Aur fir niche aayo

Mehak : hmm

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Mehak ...hmare pyaar ki mehak...

(MEHAK)

Apne papa ki princess hai

Mehak means khusboo...jisne mere aur maan ki zindagi ko apni mehak se mehaka diya

Saat (7) saal ki ho gyi hai

Pr asa lagta hai...jaise kal ka hi din tha

Jb maine isse phli baar apni god mein liya tha

Waqt kitni jaldi bit jaata hai

Pta hi nhi chalta

Aur kb rishto mein duriyaa aa jati hai

Kb faasle bd jaate hai

Iska bhi pta nhi chalta

part 1
nice start...
cont soon dear...

PS - i like the first title...

Originally posted by: shruthiruchs

hi i'm new to ur ff's

very sweet start... loving d intro part...

much abt d time as d title says...

very intresting

eager to read further

😳😳😳

nice part
so maaneet are parents of mehak

aww the first part was too cute n sweet
maaneet coffee argument
geet narrating abt all
n her last words wt she mant by rishton mai dooriyan aa jati hai
wt was that
waiting 4 next