OS- LIGHT IN THE DARK pt 3..pg-11 21 aug

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mayashri

@mayashrisawant7

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

lovely update dear pls keep them safe even baby also don't want any sepration n all n hope maaneet family come fast and take charge over them thanks for update and pm update next part soon

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

wow sounds interesting ...maan had and accident ...girl is months preggy i hope wo geethi ho

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Very nice
add me to ur pm list n do pm me next updates plss

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

nice start
maaneet met with accident
hope both will be fine

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gurti30

@gurti30

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

beautiful os dear

but painful too. hope maan and geet will be fine

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ashmaaneet

@ashmaaneet

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

hawww yeh kya 😲 start mein hi accident 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

ohhh nooo its maan n woh ladki kaun hai is it geet n she is pregnant omggg 😲😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

ab jaldi se next dedo cnt wait 😭

very inreresting

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Hello Sunita dear,
Now that was a totally different scene to start with.And I loved your style.And you know what stroke me,not that the person inside the car [Who toh mujhe pata hi tha ki Maaneet honge] but the way you described d accident,the collision of d truck and d car,their position,the way Maan's leg was stuck,the way he was holding Geet,the way it was difficult to pull them out,I cut clearly picturise each and every scene.

Now coming to Maaneet,its clear that they are deeply in love but will fate take Geet away fm Maan????
I hope not.

Eager for d next part buddy.

You rock with your stories.Love them.