OS- LIGHT IN THE DARK pt 3..pg-11 21 aug - Page 2

lovely update dear pls keep them safe even baby also don't want any sepration n all n hope maaneet family come fast and take charge over them thanks for update and pm update next part soon

wow sounds interesting ...maan had and accident ...girl is months preggy i hope wo geethi ho

Very nice
add me to ur pm list n do pm me next updates plss

nice start
maaneet met with accident
hope both will be fine

beautiful os dear

Hello Sunita dear,
Now that was a totally different scene to start with.And I loved your style.And you know what stroke me,not that the person inside the car [Who toh mujhe pata hi tha ki Maaneet honge] but the way you described d accident,the collision of d truck and d car,their position,the way Maan's leg was stuck,the way he was holding Geet,the way it was difficult to pull them out,I cut clearly picturise each and every scene.

Now coming to Maaneet,its clear that they are deeply in love but will fate take Geet away fm Maan????
I hope not.

Eager for d next part buddy.

You rock with your stories.Love them.

when r u gng to update ???? 😔😔😔

thank u all 4 the lovely comment and likes..😳.