Pretty Woman (ADAPTATION) Maneet FF...ON HIATUS :'( Note:Pg 87 - Page 7

Originally posted by: farzu3008

i read all the 3 parts in one go and i just loved it. superb how u describe each character. pretty woman is one of my favourite movie. i just loved everything u wrote. will b waiting for update eagerly

Thanks😊

Originally posted by: Diva7

woohoo read three chapters in one go...n enjoyed it so much

oh i luv d detailing so dnt bother abt it...evn its adding more charm

wat i luvd d most in d movie "Pretty Woman" is d character of Vivian... yes she ws a hooker bt still i find her so naive ...n you brilliantly portrayed dat "naivety" in d third chapter... i jst luvd our Geet here...i can imagine her in dis role n dats all coz of ur brilliant writing

awesome job👏

Thanks😊 a lot for your warm comment.

she is a complete firecracker...she is adorably cute in her antics..and her innocence comes across, making it endearing and refreshing..
maan is completely gobsmacked to see himself melting to her innocent charms and looking forward to her antics.😆

dental floss scene was kinda cute... and i was tempted to wring maan's neck for beign such a cynic, (i wouldnt blame him though😆)

a completely enjoyable update...
the moment i reach the concluding part of the update, i wish for mroe...its like i am licking my fav candy, and the thought of melting candy makes me go greedy and wish for one more...i know a pathetic analogy😆

btw how do u know my name...😉

TOO GOOD

Awesome update
waiting for the next

easy to wait is one line which fail here bacly.please update soon dear.and me your ome of silent readern but sure guve me few comments sometime as pc is dead and mobile suck for me.

Just came across ur ff
wow!!!!!!!!
Its so damn interesting
u write so well
I havnt watched the film n coz of dat it seems more fun
m luvn it!!!!!
I luv rom coms

WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART

Originally posted by: maanland

WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART

LOVE YOUR REGULAR UPDATES

OH WILL THEY DO IT?

WILL GEET SAY THIS IS HER FIRST TIME?????????????????????

PLS UPDATE SOON

HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY😊

Well for that you would have to wait and read.😊 Stay tuned.

And Happy independence day to you as well😃

Originally posted by: Shefali16

Just came across ur ff
wow!!!!!!!!
Its so damn interesting
u write so well
I havnt watched the film n coz of dat it seems more fun
m luvn it!!!!!
I luv rom coms

Thanks😊