Pretty Woman (ADAPTATION) Maneet FF...ON HIATUS :'( Note:Pg 87 - Page 48

Originally posted by: mirror1521

nice story..
loving it alott...
jst came accross today in daily update thread offcourse...
n ur doing good wid it..
wanna comment on each part..bt time is not permitting...
n pls count my like too 😉
not yet finished wid all chapters...jst done wid 8...
bt great story...loved itt 😊

Originally posted by: maanland

Hey you edited the update with pic

made it even more beautiful

dear it was such a lovely update

the first part

Maan's different state of mind

from feeling his reservoir of peace and contentment to his denial to his desperation

each state was beautifully written

I am sure every reader could feel his loss or his desperation to reach for his life

and then what a wonderful line it was maan felt as if he was caged in the walls of corporate brothel

👏

what a thought and what a line

maan saying sorry and wiping her nose with his hands was touchy moment

loved his truthfulness abt him not liking geet talking to Jai

their whole talk was so full of love

and then geet drooling on shirtless maan

shirtless maan ke charm se bachna mushkil hi nahin namumkin hai😆😉

and then breaking her self imposed limits

oh it was so sweet and their whole intimacy

only talking abt two people deeply in love

only caring for other

I can't believe that you dedicated this wonderful beautiful update to ME

oh dear I am honoured and humbled😳

😳

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS AND FOR THIS AWESOME UPDATE

🤗