Pretty Woman (ADAPTATION) Maneet FF...ON HIATUS :'( Note:Pg 87

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xolfiya

@xolfiya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#461

Its ok di take ur time if u r still in some tension!loved di update thank u so much...its an emotional and passionate update ...was waiting for updats from long time ... :) waiting for the next update :)

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AnonymousMG

@AnonymousMG

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Posted: 11 years ago

#462

Originally posted by: xolfiya
Its ok di take ur time if u r still in some tension!loved di update thank u so much...its an emotional and passionate update ...was waiting for updats from long time ... :) waiting for the next update :)

So glad that u liked it😊

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AnonymousMG

@AnonymousMG

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Posted: 11 years ago

#463

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet
OMG u finally updated...first thing in the morning i am reading ur updt
cant say how much i loved it..
they r so much in lovee... aweee i love them..and them being together is just meant to be
continue soon pleasseee

Thanks hun! and I am rushing now to read It takes Two😳 in love with it totally!

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AnonymousMG

@AnonymousMG

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Posted: 11 years ago

#464

Originally posted by: .BlueDiamond.
Is that you 😲

Hehe!! its me only! Thank u for waiting!

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Isolophiliac

@Isolophiliac00

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#465

Amazing update..finally they sorted out...
Please update soon

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mhappy

@mhappy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#466

Hey you edited the update with pic

made it even more beautiful

dear it was such a lovely update

the first part

Maan's different state of mind

from feeling his reservoir of peace and contentment to his denial to his desperation

each state was beautifully written

I am sure every reader could feel his loss or his desperation to reach for his life

and then what a wonderful line it was maan felt as if he was caged in the walls of corporate brothel

👏👏👏👏👏

what a thought and what a line

maan saying sorry and wiping her nose with his hands was touchy moment

loved his truthfulness abt him not liking geet talking to Jai

their whole talk was so full of love

and then geet drooling on shirtless maan

shirtless maan ke charm se bachna mushkil hi nahin namumkin hai😆😉

and then breaking her self imposed limits

oh it was so sweet and their whole intimacy

only talking abt two people deeply in love

only caring for other

I can't believe that you dedicated this wonderful beautiful update to ME

oh dear I am honoured and humbled😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

😳😳😳😳😳😳

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS AND FOR THIS AWESOME UPDATE

🤗

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

+ 13

Posted: 11 years ago

#467

nice story..
loving it alott...
jst came accross today in daily update thread offcourse...
n ur doing good wid it..
wanna comment on each part..bt time is not permitting...
n pls count my like too 😉
not yet finished wid all chapters...jst done wid 8...
bt great story...loved itt 😊

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Dona

@Donnaa

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#468

after long time...
loved the update...
passionate update...
maan realized his mistake...
he manaofy geet in his own way..
loved it...

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Binish

@mayurmaaneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#469

it came out beautiful hun.. i hope ur prrsonal and prifessional problems both get sorted out.. u know whrn im stressed its u geetians ff writers that give me strength to forget my problrms.. maybe even face them.. as for the update, hmm i thought maaneet already did the deed.. was this their first time? but glad maaneey r together again and maan realised.. fab hun.. cont soon.. write to relieve urself of ur problems..

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AnonymousMG

@AnonymousMG

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Posted: 11 years ago

#470

Originally posted by: mayurmaaneet
it came out beautiful hun.. i hope ur prrsonal and prifessional problems both get sorted out.. u know whrn im stressed its u geetians ff writers that give me strength to forget my problrms.. maybe even face them.. as for the update, hmm i thought maaneet already did the deed.. was this their first time? but glad maaneey r together again and maan realised.. fab hun.. cont soon.. write to relieve urself of ur problems..

Thanks sweets! Yes it was the first time. U can refer to ch5 or so fr further clarifications