Pretty Woman (ADAPTATION) Maneet FF...ON HIATUS :'( Note:Pg 87 - Page 28

WHEN SOME ONE SHARES A PERSONAL EXPERIENCE IT BECOMES REALLY SPCL

Originally posted by: revsacdd

nice update..what happened why this late for the update..but nice one..waiting for more😊

Thanks..work is holding me back up Will be a while before i can switch back to regularity.

awesome dear

Originally posted by: maanland

NOW COMING TO THE UPDATE

IT WAS SUPERBLY WRITTEN

THE BALCONY SCENE

YOU CAPTURED THE EMOTIONS OF MAAN VERY VERY WELL

I COULD EASILY FEEL HIS FEAR BY UR WORDS

GEET'S TEASING MORE AND MORE AND MAAN'S RISING FEAR

BRILLAINT

THEN GEET'S UNDERSTANDING NATURE AND THEIR SIMILARITIES OF PROFESSION

EVERYTHING WAS PENNED DOWN BEAUTIFULLY

AND VEG OUT😆😆

AND THEN GEET EXPLAING IT TO MAAN

TOO GOOD

BROCOLI😆😆

I LOVE THE SENSE OF HUMOR IN ENGLISH MOVIES

MAAN SAYING I ONLY PLAY FOR STRANGERS

LOVE IT😃

THE BEST PART WHICH ALL OF MAAN FANS HAVE DONE IT SO MANY TIMES

CHECKING OUT MAAN

AND APPRECIATING HIS FLAWLESS LOOKS

BUT U CRACKED ME WITH MAYBELLINE MASCARA LINE DEAR

INDEDD GURMEET HAS THE BEST EYES AND LIPS ( ACCORDING TO ME😳

LET ME COME OUT OF GURMEET'S DREAM LAND DEAR😳)

EACH AND EVERY LINE WRITTEN IN THE APPRECIATION OF MAAN WAS AWESOME DEAR

THOUGH I WOULD LOVE TO SEE THEM IN ACTION WITHOUT ANY RULES BUT HERE ALSO THE WAY U DESCRIBED

WITHOUT GETTING HURT INSTEAD UNDERSTANDING AND CONVEYING IT WITH THE BLINK OF HIS EYES

WHAT A GESTURE BY MAAN👏👏

IT TOOK MY HEART AWAY

AND THEN THE RANDOM NOTES OF PIANO DUE TO THEIR ACTIVITY

WOW

THEY REALLY SOOTHED EACH OTHER'S PAINFUL HEART

AND UR UPDATE SOOTHED THE HEARTS OF UR READERS DEAR 😊

Oh god!! i am so overwhelmed by all the affection u have showered! srsly i have no words. Did i actually leave u vision less with sweet teras! nah..that can't be..u r just being modest.
I am so glad that u liked the part. What a keen reader are you! u have noticed every thing. every minute detail. How did u like the piano track btw..i swear by the melody! n oh yes gurmeet eyes lips and hands...his fingers...oh god why does he have to be so perfect!!!! Why why why.
yr the thing is we are to be good at business writing, short precise and concise...and this sort of writing that i do is all abt elaboration and imagination..so two different things all together😆

loved the update

YEAH I REALLY HAD TEARS DEAR

Originally posted by: maanland

YEAH I REALLY HAD TEARS DEAR

FIRSTLY WHEN I READ SUCH AN EMOTIONAL UPDATE

AND AT THE END UR THANKS NOTE

AND SPCLLY MENTIONING THAT U UPDATED DUE TO MY PMS

MADE ME REALLY TEARY DEAR

THAT SOME ONE UPDATED FOR ME

THE FEELING WAS REALLY GREAT DEAR

AND THANK U SO MUCH ONCE AGAIN FOR THAT

😳🤗
how did you like the piano track?

Very interesting FF..I read all the parts at one go...waiting for them to realise their true feelings 😊

Originally posted by: AnonymousMG

😳🤗
how did you like the piano track?