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.Tulip.

@.Tulip.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

first of all thanks so much fr d link of ur story... will surely read it😊

n wat to say abt d update it ws vry sad 😭

frst geet behaved immaturely by slapping him n now he

hmm intriguing... waiting fr nxt

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

Chapter 5: oh my! 😲

Seriously... they both are so damn insecure and fearful right now that they messed it up all the more.

So a lot more happened at the high-on-drinks- and -after break-up scene in the party that was supposed to be a celebration of love for Adi-Pinky and a catalyst for Maan-Geet to come face-face with cracks in their own relations.

This one was short but bang on 👍🏼 Its left so many questions yet I'm very eager to know the whole dynamics.

Maan messed it up totally .. I was right he is so entangled in his own pride and self indulgence that when he can't ace or receives some sort of rejection he just hurts self and hsi love too. I'm glad they didn't marry as of yet cause they have serious issues other than Geet's fears and insecurities with marriage. They weren't ready and would end up like Geet fears - separated and broken. (Now too they are separated ... but I guess I'm being optimistic... 😉)

Maan just cut her off of his life saying how he did everything for her... forgetting they aren't two but supposed to be one so all hsi greatness was for them even his time and wealth and not just love. But Geet too has led him here ... where he was at the end of his dreams.

Where do they head here onwards... eager to know

Continue soon. 😃

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Dilsay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

thanks for the Pm DEAR...
loved the update ...
maan is really upset with Geet and he should be ...
he couldn't tolerate his insult ...
waiting eagerly to see how you would make Geet to woo Maan 😊

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Lonely.Cat

@Raina123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

Very sad update dear.
Maans behaviour has left me dissappointed and angered,
Hes acting as if hes done geet a favour by accepting her ,forgetting that he too loves her.Maybe its time he is reminded of that very love he claims he wants to never see.
Geets pain insecurities are well understood by myself ,I also get maans anger, but thats not how you treat normal people let alone the women you love just because of her denial.
Geets helplessness pains me as well as maans insensitivity and rashness.
The equation of tremble has changed but I would like to see maan realize geets importance and his mistake,whilst geet to be strong.
This time make maan tremble as geet has.
I also hope for a happy ending without long or too dangerous speed bumps if you know what I mean.
Emotional update, beautiful ,intriguing,
Pining to read more so update fast, I can't wait. 😃

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Lotus367

@Lotus367

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Very nice updates

Both r going thru inner turmoils

Lovely writing waiting for next update😊

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CherryBlush

@CherryBlush

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Caught up with 3 , 4 & 5

Fab turn up of events 👏 its really interesting ⭐️

Edited by CherryBlush - 11 years ago

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-Elfin-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

can she slap him once more and ask him to GTH?

Edited: Why am I not getting any PMs btw?😭

Edited by -Elfin- - 11 years ago

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

awesome

pls do pm me next time

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AKANKSHA SEHGAL

@akankshasehgal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#169

oh no they broke up...really sad...

nice update dear i m witing for next.

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#170

emotional update ...geet ko ab to akal aajaye k sabhi married couple ki life ese nahi hoti jese us k parents ki thi...

maan broke up with geet .but plz maan ki kis aur se shaadi mat karwa dena ...

maaneeet r made or each other ...

geeet ko akal do taki wo maan ko mana le ...

mere liye maan ki galti nahi he maan ne ek man hone k baadf bhi apna ego chod k geet ki khush i k lioye uski har baat mani aur geet ko shadi k liiy convince karne ki koshgish ki .par geet nahi mani ..phir bhi maan ne uska saath nahi choda ...

par geet ne jo party me kiya bhale hi wo drunk thi ..par uski galti choti nahi he ...usne maan ko sab k saamne humilate kiya aur apni relationship ko bhi...

plz update soon ...wanted to know ab geet aur maan kya karenge

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