MG FF: Tremble - Complete (index on p. 1)

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

owww, that was very rude maan... i feel bad for her for the 1st tym in this story...very very sad part...do continue sooon...

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AISHAJS

@AISHAJS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Another lovely part. Thank you for updating so soon. Just love how the story is developing. Keep up the wonderful work.🤗

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#153

MAAN IS BEING QUITE ARROGANT AND RUDE

WHAT DOES HE MEAN BY SAYING THAT HE CHOOSE HER WHEN HE COULD HAVE HAD ANYBODY

GEET SHOULD JUST KICK HIS ASS

HE IS NOT WRONG IN ASKING FOR PERMANENCE IN THEIR RELATION - BUT CANT DEGRADE HER

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pearl_warrior

@pearl_warrior

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Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Nice update...

Maan is being too harsh on Geet despite knowing her past... And the poor girl is still running behind him... Somewhere deep down, he is right too...They are bound to have arguments every time on the 'marriage' topic... One will have to understand the other...

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Mirela

@Myra.nelly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#155

These two werent maan and geet talking, but their own hurt egos!! I am sure Maan will regret his shallow words and geet will reflect on her reaction..both are strong characters, lets see how the things progress, who will b first to react..
This update was very real, nicely written...waiting fir next! thank u

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sanum23

@sanum23

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#156

nicely written
waiting fr nxt
thanx fr updating soon

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#157

emotional update.A very different Maan and Geet. Make them realise their mistakes

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#158

hi thanks 4 da pm n intense sad update! Omg! Geet tries to apologise bt Maan nt in the mood! They argue! Maan was a bit rude with his comments! Geet tries to justify her that she was drunk bt Maan thinks she ws saying the truth! Oh no! He tells that he does nt wanna see her again! update soon! Superbly written

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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#159

shit ...what was this

God ... Seriously

They broke up ...nooo

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#160

Oh wow you updated 2 chapters 😃

Firstly I'm glad you liked my comment 😳

Now coming to chapter 4: Hmm... what a culmination to a sweet morning full of dreams and ignorant bliss. I loved how Geet lives her moments with him. He is a crucial part of her existence yet she just can't get over her fears. Shows how deeply wounded she is due to her past. She just is so scarred she detests the idea of even giving it a shot. I loved how she associated with him in even her day-day chores such as brushing or even getting dressed, the color she chose to wear was a feeling he arose in her... love 😳

But then Pinky has broken her ignorant bliss bubble .. and somewhere I feel it will fuel all her insecurities more about relations... as if somewhere in the back of her mind and heart she was expecting such a thing to happen. She knew that relations don't last ... but I hope I am just over thinking about that slap.

Maan wants a family of loving wife and kids to pamper and nurture... the way he seeks distraction in his niece for Geet. 😊

The slap 😲😲 ... I guess I need to read the next now ASAP ... Will comment soon. 😉