MG-Her first word#2 (NEW- OS link pg-107 /jan21) - Page 5

Originally posted by: maaneetkimeet

AWWW SO CUTE AND AWESOME POEM ... ...AND...I AM N LOVE IT AARU...

😆 Thank u so much for LOVING AARU..😉

Originally posted by: divya22

Cute part...
Awee i loved dat poem...
It was sooo guddd...

thanks!
Its my fav too!:)

Originally posted by: --Fairy--

Awww its so cute i never read this poem but words n the way you write all expression through out it sooo beautiful

waiting for maan return

thank u so much dear. Am glad that my words affected u..
The first time i heard this poem..that too by a cute 4yrs old..i just fell in love with it!:-)
maan will be coming soon..:)

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Hai tumhari kavita ne toh ankhein nam kar di.It was sweet ,innocent so pure and true.I cud so relate it to my childhood.

And it seemed like Aaru singing it for his Maani's shaadi and for sm gudiya's shaadi.

Lovely update.

jaan kar achha laga ke aap ko ye kavita itni pasannd aai aur aapke bachpan ki yadien taza ho gai..
😆 abhi toh he is singing for his maani's gudiya ki shadi!

Originally posted by: dreamy

:-)

Originally posted by: Brown-Eyes

Awesome update di
aaru is shooo cute 😳
i love aaru n maani bonding 😃
poem toh bohot pyari thi 😳
love it ❤️
continue soon di

thanks dear..
Will try..:-)

Originally posted by: daredevilisback

Marvellous update...

Excellent work 👏
I was feeling every bit of poem..
You know I didn't know this poem...
but this was best thing in the update..,,

Loved it all..each & every bit of update...❤️
You are awesome yrr...
how can you show each & every emotion...
with this ease...
I just like the simplicity...in all your ff's...characters..

Will be eagerlyy waiting for next part...
plz continue soon!!!!!

thank u so much mayu..!
I love this poem and was sure that all will like it!
I just write what i feel..aur kuch nahi! But i am glad that u like it.. Though i still think that i hav to work more on my writing!
Thanks again sisy..
Luv u😊🤗

Originally posted by: SweetestPari

Wonderful update :-)
Just superb :-)
Luved it to the core :-)

thanks, happy that u liked it:-)

Originally posted by: jassdip

Sweet update
Aaru is too smart nd intelligent who can impress anybody with his traits
Maani is also sweet pie

msk ke kids hai..after all!;-)

Originally posted by: suhaaana

So cute the best poem i have read.. Wow i wonder maani ki shadi me aaru ka kya haal hoga...

maani abhi bahut chhoti hai yar..