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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: pjroy

Wating...plz update...

update is coming tonight..dear:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: amita5

Congrats on the new thread

please update soon

thanks dear..
Updating tonight..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tamanna1391





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thank u so much dear:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: sasu

love reading ur story

glad to know that!
Thanks for liking:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for the new thread
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part12
Aaru again cribed to geet that he wanted to hear his fav story. Geet tried to distract him.. "baby story toh..aapko kal papa sunna denge na...jab wo aayenge.. Abhi hum kuch aur karte haina.."
"kya karenge.?" aaru asked innocently.
Annie & dadi too looked at geet curiously.
"mere shona ko kitni sari pyaari pyaari poems aati haina.." geet said, pulling aaru in her lap. Aaru nodded cutely.
"toh..wont u tell those poems to ur bua & dadima..? Unko bhi toh pata chale na..ke hamara champ kitna smart hai..apne papa ke jaise.." saying that geet kissed his cheeks and ticked him. Aaru gigled..while trying to stop her.."mumma..nahi..mumma.."
"sunnaoge na..shona..hmm.." geet asked.
Aaru nodded again..and asked... "pehle kaunsi wali sunnau..?"
"koi bhi..jo aaru ko achhi lage...ok.." geet smiled at him. Aaru thought for a minute..deciding which one to tell first. He looked at maansi who was busy playing with geets multicolored chudi's..and smiled lovingly at his baby sister.
"mumma..maani ki poem sunaau..??" ..he asked excitedly.
Geet smiled at his excitment..."jaldi sunnao.." geet too replied in same excited tone as his. Aaru quickly moved towards maansi and kissed her cheek..
"am singing ur poem.. maani.." he told her and maansi giggled crassing his face.
Geet just admired her kids.
And then aaru started singing his poem..
Tim tim taare chamak rahe the..
Mere ghar ke aangan me..
Phoolon ki ladiyan mehaki thii..
Mere ghar ke bagiya me..

Aaru did the action of twinkling stars and made gesture of blooming flowers throught his hands..
Daadi & anni smiled hearing those words in his sweet voice..
Laal chunariya odh rakhi thi..
Hathon me mehandi rachaaye..

Aaru sang each word, smiling brightly, looking at his baby sister..who was enjoying her fav poem from her big brother!
Pyaari dulhan bann baithi thi..
Mann hi mann muskaaye..

Aaru took the end of geets dupatta and kept it on maansi's head..thus making her smile sweetly at him. It was a normal gesture for aaru..whenever he would sing this poem..he would do it..and maansi would gigle!
Dulhe raja sehra baandhe..
Aaye ghodi per sawaar...
Gaaje baaje aur baraati..
Laaye sung pura pariwar..

geet looked proudly at her son..and then hugged maansi who was clapping for aaru!
Dulha aaya..dulha aaya..
Sakhiyan sab chilaaii...
Gudiya rani, dheere dheere darwaje tak aai..

Annie was lost in the poem so much..and dadi too was loving it! And aaru's cute soft voice and him inacting the words.. added to its beauty!
Aao sab mil nacho gaao..
Naach rahe hai..
Dada daadi..
Batti mithaai, dhum dhadakaa...
Meri gudiya ki hai.. Shaadii..

Aaru tittled his head.. looking at maansi when he sang that last line..
Geet, annie and daadi clapped for aaru! And maansi was jumping happily in geets lap.. She loved listening to this poem..it was her fav.
Daadi kissed aaru lovingly... "arre wah..aaru ko toh bahut achhi aur pyaari poem aati hai.."
"thank u daadi.." aaru grrined widely.
"han..hamara champ toh sach me smart hai..bahut achhi poem thi.." ..annie said.
"thank u bua.." aaru cheerped.
"but why did u say it "maani ki poem"..han?" annie asked.
"kyunki..its my maani's fav.." aaru replied instantly.
"achhaa..?" ..annie smiled at his answer.
"han..aur ..pata hai daadi.. Papa said..jab maani dolls se khelegi..aur uski gudiya ki shaadi hogi na..tab main aur maani dono ye wali poem bolenge..uski gudiya ki shaadi me.." ..aaru told them with excitement clear in his voice & on face!
All just chuckled at his innocent and sweet wish!
Edited by Shonameet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17


yipppeee me first
coming to the update its small😡 😡
want long updtaes
but i loved it
aaru loves his sister very much
awww i find this update sooo cute
truely enjoyed it
Edited by drashtimeetu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
wow such a cute update
aaru is so cute. loved the poem 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
AWWW SO CUTE AND AWESOME POEM ... ...AND...I AM N LOVE IT AARU...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Cute part...
Awee i loved dat poem...
It was sooo guddd...

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