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Posted: 12 years ago
~Shadow Of His Love~
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Part 18
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Both Hugged Each other for a long time...
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Maan: Geet...
Geet: hmmm...
maan: Jaan i trully love you...
geet blushed: hmm
maan: mishti agar koi kissi ko I LOVE YOU bole or sunne wala bhi same feel kare to usse bhi I love you too bolna chahiye...
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geet: pata hain... {shyly}
maan: toh tum mujhe kyun nahi bol rahe,,, main Tumhare mithi aawaz se mere liye Ye tin laabz sunna chahta hu... plzz bolo na...
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geet {broke the hug} : Mujhe na abhi bohot Sharam aa rahe hain...
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maan: plzz jaan bolo na...
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geet for nodded for no...

maan pull her close & geet fall on him...
{Mahiii mahiii moment, Try to imagine it}

maan caressed her face: bolo na jaan...
geet pushed maan & run to upstairs...
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geet {shout from stairs} aap agar mujhe pakar sakoge, toh main bol dunge...
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maan: geet tum mujhe jaante nahi ho... agar main tumhe iss barr pakar liye toh churna muskil ho jayega...
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geet: lets see maan...
maan: ok jaan u run.. i'm coming... {run to catch her}
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*** Running***

maan: geeet ruk jao warna bohot bura hoga...
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geet: bura toh tab hoga na jab aap mujhe pakar paoge ...
geet runned to one room & hide herself behind the doors...
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maan came in the same room...
maan: geet kaha chup ke bethe ho bhara aao {he enter & geet run out}
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geet: aap mujhe nahi parak pao ge... {run again}
maan: geet main tumhe aaj chorunga nahi...
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geet again went to other room & went to washroom to hide...
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maan came in the same room : geet iss bar tum nahi bach pao ge... {he locked the room}
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geet was trying to lock the washroom door but it was not getting locked...
geet: hey babaji yeh lock to karab hain.. aab main kahaa chupu???
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maan heared her voice & went near washroom ...
maan: jaan bahar aa jao warna aaj tumhare kher nahi...
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geet: jii nahi...
maan: okkk then i'm coming...
geet: no thats cheating...
maa: i can do anything...
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maan pushed the door & he went in...
maan was going near geet & geet was going back...
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geet: maan plzz mujhe jane do...
maan: no jaan not so soon...
both was now very close to each other... {under the shower}
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maan: aab bolo na jaan u love me...
maan kissed her eyes
geet: maan plzzz...
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maan: jaan i want to hear...
geet: mujhe sharam aate hain ...
maan: plzz jaan...
geet : okk par apne aankhe band karoo...
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maan: okk {smiles}
maan close his eyes & geet open the shower and
was about to run.
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but maan was very fast & stopped her...


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both was totally wet now...
geet : maan yeh apne kya kiya,,, main puri gilli ho gaye...
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but maan didn't answer as he was busy to adoring her...
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geet blushed to her see his desired felled eyes...
{Long Mahiii Moment}...
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Maan caressed her face & geet blushing highly...
Maan was coming close to her lipss...
geet was shivering...
maan kissed her forehead...
geet moaned his name...
maan again kiss her eyess...
geet: mmmaaannn
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maan kissed her cheeks...
geet blushed...
{Now time for lipss but maan kissed her nose}
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maan whisper: I love you jaan... but i will wait till our marriage...
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geet was amazed to see his love... geet hugged him tightly...
maan hugged her back ...
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{Imagine they are under shower}
geet kiss his heart: I LOVE YOU MAAN.... & hugged again...
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Maan: love you more jaan... i promise i will make you always Happy...
geet: Being in ur arms are enough to make me Happy for life long...
maan smiled & hugged her more tightly...
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maan: geet mujhse tumse durr to jane ka mann nahi hain,, par agar hum abhi yaha se bhar nahi gaye toh dono he bimar ho jayenge...
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geet blushed : par maan main bhar kese jau?? mere kapre bhig gaye hain...
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maan: jaan main hu na... tum yaha ruko main tumhare liye karpe le aata hu...
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geet: par aap kaha se lao ge??
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maan: geet yeh humara farmhouse se, so yaha pe mom aur dadi ke kapre hain, so u can wear them na???
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geet: no maan... main aunty se puche bina unke kapre kese pehenlu??
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maan: jaan mom will be very happy, agar unki hone wali unke kapre pehne ge...
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geet blushed to hear HONE wali bahu...
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geet: okk...
maan: just wait for two minutes i will be back with ur dress ok??
geet: hmmm...
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maan left for the washroom & went to his mom's room... take out one simple red saree... cuz he know his mishti would love simple thingss...
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Maan give the saree.. geet changed get changed & maan also changed in his room...
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maan went to kitchen & makes coffee for them till geet came...
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geet feeling very shy to face maan... as how their relation changed in few hours...
geet went to hall & saw that maan was waiting for her with coffee...
maan looked at her & smiled : come jaan have some hot coffee...
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geet went & sit beside him...
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maan & geet finished their coffee...
geet: maan aab hume chalna cahiye... bohot der ho gaye hain...
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maan: but jaan humne toh aab tak dinner bhi nahi kiya...
geet: maan bohot der ho gaye, plzz hum kal milege phirse... plzz.
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maan: but you must be hungry na jaan?? how can we leave without dinner??
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geet : plzzz uncle must be waiting for me... i promise hum kal lunch sath main karenge...
maan: no kal toh hume baat karne ka time he nahi milega...
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geet: kyun???
maan: geet mom ne kaha hain kal dadi aa rahe hain, toh tumhe kal unnse mill na bhi hoga... aur dadi aur mom ne agar baat karna shuru kar diya, tih mujhe toh time he nahi milega apni Mishti se baat karne ka...
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geet: aap ne aunty ko humare baare main baat bhi diya?? {little shocked}
maan: maine mom ko mom ne mujhe bataya hain...
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geet : matlab??
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maan: she make me realized that i love you...
geet: {blushed} toh apko nahi pata tha??
maan: pata tha par par realize mom ne karwaya... My Mom is the best...
geet: NO MY AUNTY IS THE BEST...

both laughed...
geet: aab chale??
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maan: okk... wese geet i'm sorry...
geet: why maan?
maan: maine tunhe pucha he nahi ke tum dadi se milne ke liye tayar ho ya nahi...
geet smiled: You have rights on me Maan... Aap mere liye decisions le sakte ho...
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maan: par geet mujhe nahi acha lagta main tumhe kabhi bhi force karu...
geet: maan plzz don't say like that... I feel blessed even you care for me and take decisions for my Good...
maan loved the way she trust her... he hugged geet...
maan: i will never break ur trust...
geet: i know... My Maan is best...
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Maan droped geet in her home... Both gave each other Good Night kiss in cheeks nd went to their respective homes...
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Precap : Geet & Dadi...
PS: Hope You like the Maaneet Filled Romantic love Moments...
Plzz Do Press The like botton & long comment whoch means a lot to me...
And So Sorry for late updates, As i'm busy with my studies...
Love Nelu

Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dono confess their love 4 eachother loved it hope geet dadi ka man bhi jeet le
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Posted: 12 years ago
haye kitna romantic ud tha dr
maan wana hear ilu frm geet nd geet teasing maan
geet trust maan so much
ud nxt soon dr
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MANISHAGOEL

haye kitna romantic ud tha dr
maan wana hear ilu frm geet nd geet teasing maan
geet trust maan so much
ud nxt soon dr



thnkss dear 😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing part
finally maaneet confessed
hope geet meeting with dadi go perfect
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update..but i wud like to point out some editing mistakes and other little little mistakes on the sentence formation..if u can pls check it and rectify those mistakes which wil b helpful for updating next updates nicely..dont think that iam critizising u its just my sugestions for making ur update amazing..u r doing a good job..need more updates..maaneet are happy with this relatioship and they are so romantic 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww itz so cute...nxt update soon..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely n romantic update
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its so romantic & lovely update..
Shower me romance, superb.
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet going to meet dadi...n atlast dey confessed deir love...

wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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