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Posted: 12 years ago

~Shadow Of His Love~
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Part 19
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Next Morning In KM...
Dadi,Annie & Vicky Came...
Maan & Shalin & Shalini welcomed them... MAAN hugged them...
Everyone was havng their breakfast ... Maan signal her Mom to say about geet to Dadi...
Shalini singal Shalin to say to dadi...
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Shalin: Maa hume aapse kuch jarurui baat karni thi...
Dadi: Ha beta bolo...
S: Maa woh maan ne humare tension durr kar de hain...
d: matlab beta?? maan apne kya kiya hain??
Maan: Dadi woh... MAA aap Bolo na dadi ko...
Shalini: Maan ke papa aap bolo na...
Annie & vicky: aree koi hume bhi toh bolo, bhai ne kya kiya hain???
Shalin: woh maa MAAN Ek ladki pasand ki hain aapne liya...
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Dadi was shocked: what??? maan ne khud ladki pasad ki hain??? R u guyss serious??
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shalini: haa maa... aur maan chahte hain aap GEET se aaj he miloo...
annie: wow bhai... finally apko apki pasad ki ladki mill he gaye... Congratsss...
maan smiled
vicky: i'm not dreaming right?? MaaN Singh Khurana ko ek ladki pasand aa he gaye...
Maan slap vicky shoulder: shut up...
vicky: congratss bro...
maan: thnksss...
Maan was waiting for dadi's reply...
maan: dadi aap kush nahi ho???
dadi : no beta i'm very happy for you but i'm shocked like vicky...
maan hugged dadima... thnxx dadi...
maan: i'm sure you will love her...
dadi: Hope so {dadi (st) : I hope Geet BAKI SAB LADKI yo ki tarah aapke paiso {money} se pyar na karte ho... Woh Sirf Aapse Maan se pyar kare naki Maan singh khurana se, Lekin Hum Uski exam lenge agar woh Pass Ho gaye toh Humse jiyada kush aur kahi nahi hoga}
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maan: Dadi Geet Aaj lunch ke liye aayege...
DADI: okk beta...
maan : main Office ke liye ready ho ke aata hu...
Shalin: Haa beta jaldi tyar ho jao, Geet Pohoch gaye hoge {Teasingly}
VickY: I will also come to office... I want to meet my bhabi first...
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Maan: No way you are not coming...
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v: that's not good bhai, i hv right to meet with my bhabi...
maan: Geet yaha aaye ge tabhi mill lena...
v: but bhai...
m: no but yaar wese he aaj usse baat karne ka time he nahi milege, uppar se tu office main aayega toh office time main bhi baat nahi ho payege... {He Said in one breath, thn bit his lips}
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V: ooo hooo toh yeh baat hain... Bhai abhi yeh haal hain toh shadi ke baad toh aap room main se he nahi nikloge...
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shalini: chup badmash apne baree bhai se koi asse baat karta hain???
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maan: rehne do mom, yeh kabhi nahi shudre ga...
vicky: yaa yaa i know...

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Maan & Shalin went to office and geet also reached in office...
geet was in her cabin nd was waiting For Shalin sir to asked for half day...
Shalin came & geet went to meet him
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geet: gd morning sir...
S: Gd mrng Beta...
g: Sir woh i want half day leave...
S: I know beta, Akhir humare ghar he toh jaa rahe ho aap, hain na??

G: Maan ne apko bhi bata diya?? {innocently}
s: ha beta... Kyun aap nahi batane wali thi...
g: no sir par unhe mujhe bol na chahiye tha na... sab ko akele he baat diya aab main kise bolunge?? {she bit her lips {st} : hey babaji main kya kya bol dete hu?}
Geet: Sorry sir main baad main aate hu..
Shalin : Its okk beta... {Smiles} Aap maan ki complain mujhse kar sakte ho...

Geet: Nahi Sir... woh bohot ache hain, main unki complain kabhi nahi kar sakte, woh bass abhi yuhi nikal gaya...
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Shalin smile to her : Its ok beta don't take it so serious...
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geet: Sir main abhi chalte hu,,,
S: ok beta...
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Geet went to her cabin & saw that maan was wating for her...
Maan was siting in her sit...
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geet called him: Maan aap yaha???
Maan stood up : yaap jaan... Aab mere jaan mujhse yaad nahi karte toh mujhe he uske pass aana hoga na...
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geet: aap assa kyun bol rahe ho?? main toh sir ke pass gaye thi leave lene, aur aap hain ke mujhe he doss de rahe ho...

geet truned to other side & maan hugged her from back...
Maan: Mishti gussa kyun ho rahe ho main toh bass mazak kar raha tha...
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geet : I'm missing you since Morning & aur aap keh rahe ho mujhe apki yaad nahi aate...
maan: ooo my Sweet heart was missing me that much??? I also miss you jaan...
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Maan kissed her neck...
Geet felt shiver : maan yeh Office hain...
maan: i know jaan but i can't control myself from falling for you...
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Geet: kal toh keh rahe the Shadi tak wait karoge aap, aab kya hua??? {Geet teased him}
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maan: Shadi tak wait karunga iss ka matlab yeh nahi hain tumhe KISS nahi karunga... tumse durr rahunge... {Hugged her more tightly}
Aur don't you dare teased me warna main Shadi ke pehle he... You understand na what i meant??
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geet: aab baree baadmash ho gaye ho...Choro mujhe...
M: no jaan... tumhe chorne ka mann nahi karta...
G: maan mujhe bohot kam hain, lunch time ke pehle design complete karna hain..


IN KM AT LUNCH TIME::::::::::

Maan & geet welcomed in home by Dadi & shalini.
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geet take their blessings...
shalini: kush raho beta...
dadi: God bless you...
Dadi {st} : Geet dekhne main bohot sundar, shusil aur achi ladki lag rahe hain... aab pata lagana hoga kya woh humare maan se oyar karte hain ya nahi?? Aue humere ghar ko jor ke rakh payege???
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geet sitted beside dadi & shalini...
maan called for annie & vicky...
both came & shakes hands with geet...
vicky: hey my beautiful bhabi... i'm vicky ur would be devar...
geet blushed to her bhabi
Annie : OMG bhabi u look more beautiful when u blushed...
by the way I'm Annie, ur would be nanad...
geet smiled to her...
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Dadi to geet: Beta aap humere sath chalo, hume aapse kuch baat karne hain...
geet looked at maan who nodded for yes...
geet: jiii

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In dadi's room, both sit in bed...
Dadi: so geet aap kaha se ho??
geet: jii dehli se he hu...
dadi: yaha kiske sath rehte ho??
Geet: rajveer Uncle ke sath... Pinky ke papa...
dadi: ohhh... apke mama-papa kaha hain...
geet gets sad: ji woh nahi rahe...
dadi: i'm sorry beta...
geet: koi baat nahi dadima...
wese main apko dadima bula sakti hu??
dadi: ha beta jarur...
GEET smiles...
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dadi: apko maan se kab pyar hua???
geet blushed: jiii woh pehle mulakat main...
dadi: ohhh... toh maan se kitna pyar karte ho??
geet little bit shocked with her question: jiii???
dadi: maan se kitna oyar karte ho??
geet: dadima, pyar bayan {explain} nahi kiya jaa sakta...
pyar sirf kitna hota hain, woh sirf mehsoos ki ya jata hain...
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dadi: phir bhi hum janna chahte hain...
geet: Maan mere liye mere duniya hain, woh mere zindagi hain... mera har rista, aab sirf unse jurra hain... woh mere sab kuch hain... mujhe nahi pata main unes kitna pyar karte hu...
par main jante hu, unke bina aab saans lena bhi muslik ho gaye ga...
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dadi {st: so she loved maan trully but still want to know more} : okkk...
wese agar kabhi assa ho ke maan apse kahe woh apko leke kisi aur ghar main rehna chahte hain, toh aap kya karenge???
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geet: dadi woh maan hain... woh kabhi aap sabko nahi chorenge... woh apne parivaar se bohot pyar karte hain... toh mera kuch karne ka toh sawal he nahi uth ta..
dadi: itna bharosa??
geet: Unki annkho main aab sabke liye pyar dikhta hain, dadima...
dadi: hmmm, aur agar kabhi woh apna saara business kho de, aur ek aam inshan baan jaye toh kya aap tab bhi unse itna he kyar karenge??
geet smies: dadi jab maine unse pyar kiya tha, mujhe nahi pata tha, woh MAAN SINGH KHRANA HAIN, i fall in love with a simple man MAAN... I don't care for his money...
i just want that woh bass huesha kush rahe... main unki kuahi ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hu...
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dadi was amazed to see her love foe maan...
Dadi hugged her: you are perfect match for MAAN...
Geet smiled to her & hugged her back...

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Dadi & geet went to hall... they all was waiting for dadi's answers for geet... Dadi came nd hugged Maan...
Dadi: I didn't Like ur choice but...
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Everyone: BUT????
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Dadi: but i loved ur choice... {smiles}
maan hugged his dadi tightly: i love you dadi...

geet blushed & shalini Hugged her...
Annie & vicky both hugged maan & geet...
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Geet was very happy today... As Her Maan's Family Accept her...
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Geet silently prayed to babaji:
thnk you so much babaji for giving me Maan's love... He is now everything to me... He also give me a new family,... Dadima, Aunty ,Sir, Annie & vicky, they all are best... Aap mere FAMILY ko kabhi kuch maat hone dena... Humesha unki khushi barkarar rakhna... I love You Babaji for everythin,that u r giving me... I love My MAAN more Now...plzz Never Take him away from me...
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They all done with lunch & lots of talking...
Dadi said that She will soon Talked with Rajveer for Maaneet's wedding.
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Now Finally At evening Time Geet said to dadi that she should leave now, Rajveer will be waiting for her... So dadi Tell maan to dropped geet...
Geet & maan finally left from KM...
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Maan & geet in car:::::::
Maan: So My Mishti also impressed my dadi also...
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geet smiled to him...
Maan: Mishti now this is our time right??
geet: yess maan!!! As Promised you...
Maan: okk jaan, toh chalo kahi bhar chalte hain...
geet get excited : Ice-cream khane chale??
maan: As Ur wish My Princess...
Geet blushed & put her head on maan's shoulder...
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They enjoyed their Ice-cream date a lot with lots of Mahhiii Moment...
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Maan dropped Geet at her home...
They both gave each other good nights kiss in cheekss...
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Geet : I love you Maan... Thnkss for everything that you r giving me... For Giving me a Family...
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maan: Jaan yOu don't need to thanked me... mera sab tumhara he toh hain...and From Now They Are OUR family, ok???
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geet hugged maan tightly: Aap humesha mere sath rehna... plzz mujhe kabhi chor ke maat jana...
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maan: Saans lena muskil hain tumhare bina geet, toh main tumhe chorunga kese??
I love you My Mishti... Just be like this always, My mishti...


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Both Stayed in each other arms for long time then finally both went to their Homes...
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Precap: Sagai Pakki...
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Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
dadi tpp give green signal
loved maaneet moments a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
daadi also got impressed with Geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely and long update dear...continue soon...its just awsum to read maaneet and their family moments.now i really wait to read the next chapter...really excited for sagai😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dadi also give her approvel 4 geet loved it
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Daadi is fultoo impressed with Geet...

she gave positive nod for her...

engagement is on the way...

loved their family moments...

Annie, Vicky teasing Maan...Daadi and all are shocked that Maan has chosen a girl himself...

Daadi ne tou poora interview hi le liye Geet ka...but agar Geet buri bhi hoti to kya accept karti that I want to separate u all and I want Maan for money...why Daadi has to take this type of interview...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...




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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb part.
Daadi ne pass kr diya. Yeppie.
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Posted: 12 years ago
NICE UPDATE... MUJHE PATA THA DAADI TO MAAN HI JAAYEGI
BUT PRECAP MAANEET SAGAI ITS AMAZING I M WAITING NXT UPDATE
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Posted: 12 years ago
AMAZING UD DR
GEET METING MAAN,S FAMILY
ND DADI MADE SURE THAT GEET TRULY LOVES MAAN
MAANEET MOMENTS WER FAB
PRECAP IS SO GUD BT NW HAVE TO WAIT UNTIL U CUMS BACK
WIL MIS U ND UR UDS
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow lovely amazing.geet got pass in dadi's interview.lovd it.ab ice cream parlour main romance chahiye.waiting 4 next

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