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Posted: 12 years ago
maan kahi itne saarein guilt ki bajase...hw nyone can nlive in peace under this burden...hw he claimed he lvd her...in wht way...just he married her n never look nyone else or what...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Geet pagal hai kya? Jo ek hi baar little care dikhane pe pighal gayee! I wouldnot like Geet to fogive Maan. How can she forget about the two abortion he forced her do...if he really cared her hen he would have tried to understand her feelings, dreams, would have asked about her wishes, opinions...but maan didnot do anything for Geet...for him she was there to satisfy his needs when he wanted or else she was just a piece of furniture...

I really do not like this maan. He is just thinking about his family, his ego and himself...

If he respects his mother and expect geet to do the same then why cannot he do the same geet's mother. How can he not understand that those jewels will matter to geet as they were given by her mother...

Please update next part soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan is indeed a looser.. Chii.. How could he ... He & his mom is same in that case... They want things around them only for their happiness otherwise they don't even value them.. Don't want faltu excuse from Maan's side.. if he has not gifted her.. then he was thinking his Ma would have done that... Duh. haven't he seen how his mom was treating his wife. & she will gift her something..?? Pathetic joke..😡 Loved Dadi & annie... Annie was right... Maan is full of himself.. & can't think beyond that .. Feeling bad for Geet.. She is helplessly in love with her husband..
Nice update. muski di.. Waiting for Next part..(This is my longest comment ever.. I m just angry on Maan.)

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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update.
Loved to see dadi and anni on geets side, hope maan realises his mistake, and geet gets her share oflove
Update soon next.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...waiting 4 next update...loving 2 c maan getting scolded by dadima...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
thanks for updating
after a long time u updated..
n its worthable wait..
anies arrival n her talks makes maan think..
n pammi..she is after geets jewels too..
dadi poured her frustration on him..
ab tho samjo budhu maan..
what u did 2 ur wife..
she is still thinking about him n his small love n care he gave her these days
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Posted: 12 years ago
He has no feelings !! Robot.. !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Muski, this is your most mature work and I love it so much that it is difficult to explain. I love all your FFs and if someone asks me to choose it becomes very difficult to me. Push comes to shove, I love them all but still on persistence I would say Deewangi and Khamoshi were my favouritest because not only were they fun, emotional, passionate, touching, they were different... unique...one of a kind story. Kashmkash in that respect is just like that...one of a kind...unique and even more diifcult to write. It is easier to write events, things which happen but most difficult to express emotions.
This story has no right or wrong and still painfully has so much shades of reality. Be it time constraints, lack of respect or lack of love and understanding...so many men and women go through this phase in their marriage or at least in part of it. Story demands more drama but fact is so many of normal breathing real couples face this dilemma maybe after having children or maybe when they are old or maybe when they are not able to concieve. Problems may vary but this kashmkash...this lack of togetherness is a very much a reality...
I just applaud you for so much sentivity and attention to detail which brings out emotions. Story started with Geet finally giving up on her relationship which looks normal to an average eye but is anything but normal. Devoid of any emotion, burdened by insenstivity of her own husband.
Then we move into the phase where Maan's cluelessness comes out. In a way I empathise with him. He has shut himself so tight that he has no idea how to feel or show his emotions. Like they say "I don't wish for dreams to come true because I don't know how to dream"
Finally his realisation that maybe he failed his own wife. They both were always faithful but still somewhere they both did not understand with Maan sharing most of the blame because he shut her out...maybe not intentionally but maybe as a habit. He assumed she was happy when she always just wanted his love...bas ek nazar...
Being childless just added to that void though i always believe that even if child was there, she may have filled his time with her child'd love but void of husband's love would have still remained the same...
and now when somewhere deep down realisation is coming, guilt is coming. I hope both of them have strength and belief in their relationship to fight that guilt and talk to each other. Here is a couple who genuinly care...genuinly love each other but need a way to express their love and minimal expectations...
beautiful story and i don't know how you write it muski...just pure emotions. That part about where he remebered gifts she gave him and then he couldn't remember last one because he never showed he cared...she asked him for a gift first time and then did not...how slowly she stopped asking, talking, dreaming and that realisation...Geet Maan Singh Khurana had nothing because Maan Singh Khurana was not there with her...
Ek ladki ki utni hi izzat hoti hai jitni shaadi ke baad ek pati uski karta hai...my mom always used to say it. If husband loves and protects his wife, that wife is protected. If he doesn't then noone outside or within the family does...
Paami never respected her because Maan never respected her...
Only thing where my heart goes out is that Maan never did it intentionally...he is like a child who just never knew what was missing from his own life...he is like a blind person not knowing that he is missing colours.
Geet has suffered so much and all her pain is now making him suffer because he cares. I wish they come together and finally Maan learns to just show that he loves and cares. He is lucky to have a wife who only wnats that. No gifts or luxury can replace that. She is a simple girl who wants to get ready to see appreciation in her husband's eyes...she wants to wait for him in the evening so that she can serve him coffee to reduce his tiredness...someone who holds her close when they sleep...just simple gestures which says I care...
Beautiful and awesome and thank you so much for starting this again. I know you are very busy so I appreciate all the time and effort you are putting in for us...
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Posted: 12 years ago
More realizations...
Somehow she feels he does love and care.. yet not to the level she expected, but still it was there... and the glimpse of love and care she saw in his eyes seem to falter her decision of separating from him...
on the other hand, he is still feeling all amiss... and annie's convo seems to make him feel odd.. but it was actually very true... he was not bad, but he lived in a shell, never expressed anything, never thought that it was necessary at any point of time...
And the hit of daadi's words... the guy assumed everything... every bit of it.. he thought they would do it.. but never bothered to know about it also... hope this realization along with aniee's words makes him understand the reality of the situation...
Such an intense update... please do continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update...
Maan still in his confusion...😡

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