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@sdlife19- u asked how did the khuranna tell everyone tat she is geet and not tat bitch aakriti- 1st o all invitation were sent only to family members,& friends. & 2nd thing is,along with the invitation they were sent a letter explaining the situation. About writing so many letters...u can always copy it...
@revsacdd- i am really sorry that i can not consider ur request of their honeymoon,i hope u can understand why,geet who has no memory of herself,living a life of another person...i don't want to make maan look more miserable than this,because if maan goes on a honeymoon NOW,it will simply mean he is taking advantage of geet in the lowest way possible & my character isn't like this,it is his LOVE which is making him accepts geet as AKRITI,not LUST.
@impoojaverma- Yes geet will get her memory back,that too very soon, & those who are thinking that will be the climax of the story,are VERY wrong,that will only be THE START😈
@punam2712- Name DOES MAKE difference when u are marrying. Atleast it makes a BOG DIFFERENCE HERE. Cause it is NOT A MISTAKE. Here both bride & groom are giving themselves to each other with FULL CONSCIOUSNESS as MAAN & AKRITI...so with or without ritual,the marriage between MAAN & GEEt NEVER HAPPEND.i hope u understand now what i mean...
@SweetestPari- sorry to say dear .bt u r wrong,she is getting her memory back VERY SOON
@swarnakanak-Two people can EXACTLY look alike even if they are not blood related. It is a saying that there will be 7 people in the world who would look exactly like u...i wouldn't have believed it if i had not experienced it...my neighbour's kid...she has a exact look alike in the same town, i saw the kid's look alike...they were so similar looking that it gave me creeps!!! & they weren't blood related at all!!!
@spvd-sorry dear can't tell you now what she will do after gaining her memory back😛
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Part-11
It was like Maan had become like a maniac. He wouldn't leave geet alone no matter what,he was with her 24x7. he would make her eat ,sleep,comb her hair,select her dress...
Maybe for outsiders it would look what a good ^ romantic husband he was...bt it wasn't truely the case.
He would be with her 24x7 in fear that anything,any word will trigger her memory to come back. So he stayed with her...always,refusing to leave her alone even with his family members...NO,SPECIALLY with his family members as he knew that they were opposed to his treating geet as akriti. So he feared that they might try to bring her memory back & brake his dream nest which he created.
He wouldn't let that happen...AT ANY COST.
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What are you doing Maan??
He was in middle of a heated argument with his dadima.
What dadi?
Don't you realise ? You are ruining her life!!
NO,i am giving all the happiness in the world.
You have snatched away her life maan. She doesn't have her own life.U are using her AS YOUR DOLL>>.Do you think i will not realize it? Your trying to dress her like how akriti used to dress before she was married? Do you think i don't see how you are trying to make her like the things which akriti liked? Do you think i won't notice u are trying to make her the way akriti was...uska chalna,uska bolna...jaise wo thi before the marriage,before she revealed her true face??? (IF THE READERS ARE CONFusED,dadi & maan here are talking about akriti when she acted like a innocent girl,that is before marriage.)
How can you say that? She is happy with me.
NO. YOU are happy with AKRITI. & She is not Akriti,SHE IS GEET!!!
SHE IS AKRITI. Maan screamed
MAAN!!!!
I don't want to hear the word Geet here again,or u will not see me again.
Maan!!!! Dadi was speechless...
It was like madness has come over him...no,he has turned mad,in order to save his fantasy world,inorder to save himself form breaking...
Maan left from there as dadi slumped in the couch...
Yes ,though geet didn't realize it & saw it only as her husband's profound love...the poor girl didn't know that this love was not for her,wasn't meant for her...
Bt that didn't stop this innocent girl's heart from stop loving..from stop loving him...
She didn't realize when her heart warmed up to this man,whom she considered as her husband.
Actually her heart didn't see who he was or what relation she has with him,her heart just knew that she loved him,it only knew to love him...to devote itself to him,to destroy itself for him.
& for maan without him realizing it,she had become the bird in cage,a cage from where she couldn't fly away...he had cut her wings and trained her to sing only for him,only for him...
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Maan should i were this saree...
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Maan,should i were these bangles??
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Maan should i were this bindi???
...
...
Maan...
Her whole world revolved around him...
It suffocated the khurana family to no end,here was a girl who gave herself endlessly,mercilessly to him & here he was,keeping her to him as the bird in his cage.
*****
He loved every morning to wake up with her in his arms,with her warmth & scent wrapped around him giving his tormented soul peace of decades...
He wondered why he couldn't engage himself physically with her,when he actually felt so at peace with her!!!
He brushed away the thought as his hesitation which was still lingering somewhere to accept her completely as AKRITI.He couldn't find the reason why...he didn't want to find the reason...he coaxed himself saying it as guilt which was maybe still somewhere there.
hmmm...maan,app uth gaye..she whispered as she opened the eyes,taking maan out of his musings.
He looked down at her,arms still wrapped around each other,winter wind couldn't break through this warmth.
He kissed her forehead fondly & slipped his head below...on the crook of her neck,as he inhaled her scent...the gentle soft scent of her own.
she gigled,mujhe gudgudi ho rahi hai,maan..
he snacked his arms around her to pull her more close to him...as he inhaled more of her fragrance which calmed him...
Maan,i know may be i have said it to u many times...bt i want to say it to you...again...
I...I...I love you maan.
His head snapped to her face...it was the first time GEET had said that...
He looked at her eyes without saying anythinng...
She couldn't look at the intense eyes...she looked down in shyness...
May be it's normal for you...bt,...i have no memory,i can't remember anything...Mujhe nahi pata...ki maine apse kitna pyaar kiya tha...par ab...mujhe sirf itna pata hai...ki main apse pyaar karti hu...isliye nahi kii app mere pati hai,ya phir i used to love u...i have fallen in love with you maan... newly...
she looked up to look at his eyes still looking at her...i love you maan,she hugged him tight.
It was as if inevitable,the way his hand snaked her to pull her close...
Geet...a whisper came out from his mouth as he dipped his head in her neck to inhale her scent..
His eyes snapped open at the realization...NO...WHY?????
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Maan you need to go for this trip,it is only for 10 days.
NO,i WON'T.
WhY? WHY U HAVE BEEN REFUSING FOR GOING TO trIPs even u started to work from home!!!!U don't even go to office! Why are you behaving like this??
I know what you guys want...u want to snatch her from me. Once i am out of sight u will go tell her the truth & she will leave me.
We won't maan...
How can i believe you guys when u are constantly trying to do so saying that i am taking away her life!!!
We won't maan,cause u have stopped treating her as ur doll.
I have never treated her as doll,she is precious to me.
I know maan. We promise ,maan,we won't try to make her remember her past.
i don't believe you.
...
Maan,
G..Akriti,what are you doing here ? Maan went to geet who was standing at the door.
App log fight kyun kar rahe ho?
Maan smiled as he kissed her forehead,kuch nahi,his hand lingered on her cheek...to feel her more.
Maan you need to understand that u HAVE TO GO FOR THIS TRIP,OR THIS WILL BE A GREAT LOSS FOR The COMPANY.
Maan looked at dadi with fire in his eyes...he knew sge wouldn't like it...she would now persue him too to go for the trip.
Maan,ye sach hai? Geet asked.
Akriti,wo...
Ha ya na maan...
Maan stayed silent.
Apko jana hoga maan,ghar pe sab hai na,ab to mera health bhi thik hai....she lied to him...unknown to anyone,she was getting some strange flashes in her head from time to time which made her dizzy.
Par.
Apko meri kasam maan.
He couldn't say anything more.
As geet went to pack his bag,he looked at dadi.
ye apne accha nahi kiya dadi.
I promise maan,tumhari kasam,we won't do anything that can trigger her memory.
U better not,cause if u do...u really won't see me again. Then his eyes softened...
I can't bear to part with her dadi...please,if she knows the truth.she will leave me.
I won't do anything maan.
Maan left the room & dadi sat on the sofa with a sad expression on her face...
Don't u see maan,it is not us...can't u realize?? u have fallen for her...u have fallen for geet....dadi whispered...
...
Yes though maan couldn't realize it,he had indeed fallen for geet...he had fallen for her every trait,for her every ada,for her every smile,for her every tears...
he didn't know from when,bt he had fallen in love with her,he didn't realize when his every effort for turning her from GEET to AKRITI , turned into efforts of not letting her remember her past, without him realizing it,he feared that she will leave him if she realizes who she really was...Yes,he was in love with GEET,bt he couldn't realize it yet,still he believed he is in love with Akriti...
*****
Maan,app itne pareshaan kyun ho?
He looked at her,actually he himself didn't know what was disturbing him,bt he was getting this nagging feeling not to leave her,like something bad will happen...
He cupped her cheek,she leant on his hand closing her eyes & covered his hands with her,
Kya bat nahi maan.
He smiled sadly...
Akriti,
hmmm...
Tum mujhe chod to nahi dogi na.
Her eyes snapped open ,Ye kya baat kar rahe hai maan,how can i ?!!
She leaned closer to embrace him...
Main apse pyaar karti hu maan,main apse dur nahi rehe sakti,isiliye kavi mat sochna ki main apko chod ke ja sakti hu...
she gigled cutely,agar main chahu bhi to,mere dil to apke pass hai na,dil ke begar insaan ji sakta hai kya??
He looked at her with all this love...as his lips descended on her,gently,softly,warmly.conveying all the heart's love...
It was their first kiss...
PRECAP- THE INEVITABLE...SHE REMEMBERS...
Sorry for late updates,bt the intense feeling which the characters had i wanted to covey them properly with words,with which i am not so good,so it took time. I hope i could deliver the characters' intense feelings,please do say what u think about this.
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