TERI BAHOON MEIN- a Bitch's story
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NOTE:- Many of u asked that if geet noticed that dadi called her Geet. So the answer is ,no,she wasn't inn position to notice & it applies on dadi too,she was too scared for geet to call her with fake name
TODAY IS THE DAY TO TELL U THE REASON OF THE TITLE ...RIGHT??
Part-10
He tried to maintain a poker face,he even tried to smile a little...for her sake.
Bt every time he saw geet his guilt would cut through his heart like razors.
Today was their marriage...Maan & GEET's marriage...
As one by one rituals were accomplished,burdens of guilt started to choke every member of khurana family...
There were lights,there were music ,there was everything...except ...life.
All were performing their part in a trance.
They didn't even realize when maan & geet sat for the main ritual,bt their trance soon broke when they heard geet saying...
Are panditji,GEET nahi,mera naam AKRITI hai...
The pandit looked at Maan & then the khurana family blankly...he was their Guruji & he had known them for ages...all their family affairs...
He knew all about geet too...So when it was decided that maan will marry to geet ,it was only natural that he chanted her real name while performing the rituals with mantras.
The khuranas also didn't sweat about it as they didn't think that geet will notice this,bt now ...it was a REAL problem.
So when the pandit looked at the blank faces of the family,he knew that he had no choice bt to chant the name AKRITI instead of GEET,though he knew that it was wrong,really wrong.
O Ho...tum sahi ho beti,sorry bura (OLD) ho gaya hu na,isiliye..
She again gave a sweet smile,koi baat nahi ,koi gadbad hui to nahi na,so it's ok.
As Guruji was making preparation for the next part,he asked geet...just to be in safe side
Waise appko Sanskrit aati hai!!Guruji asked
Ha ,appne jo jo vi chant kiya mujhe sab samjh aa raha tha.
Are wah! He said really impressed.
Normally tumhari umar ki ladkiya to computer ,internet isime busy rehti hai. Par tum aise kathin(hard) sanskrit Sloak vi janti ho!!
Ha maine sikhi thi...her smile faded with this...
When did she learn Sanskrit? How is she so fluent in it!!! Her head started to spin,
Ge,Akriti,Akriti ..maan held her as she leant on to him.
Are u ok ,he asked softly when he saw her opening her eyes reluctantly.
Ha main...maan
Bolo,
How do i know sanskrit so well??
Maan knew it was a dangerous position ...this one simple question can threaten her life...so he looked for help to dev,who hurriedly came by geet's side.
Shadi nahi karni kya,kitni batein karti ho tum,dekho kahi bolne ke chakkar mein apni hi shadi na miss kardo he said smiling gently at her & helping her to sit properly.
Dev bhai ,app vi na,bhabi dekho na..
A..abhi..abhi ayi,meera said controlling her tears.
She loved this little girl...& didn't know if she could bear if she lost her.
They performed all rituals...& with that they were married. Ironically they were married yet,not married,cause this was the marriage between Maan & Akriti, Not Maan & Geet...
****
Today was reception,& everyone was panicked,specially maan...
Though he made sure that everyone got the information about geet,bt couldn't help bt expecting mishaps...even if they gossip about the REAL AKRITI,it would be the end for him...how would he explain to her about those disgusting deeds Geet never did!!
& knowing geet if she came to know about those deed which actually Akriti did,she will never forgive herself thinking herself as akriti...
Suddenly he felt a soft touch near his heart...he looked down to see it was geet...
she was leaning her head over his heart...
app itna pareshaan kyun hai? she whispered as she stroked the other side of his chest trying to sooth him.
kuch nahi Akriti,
Jhoot.
she said as she made a baby complaining face...
maan looked at the mirror which showed the image of them...together.
Apki dil ki dhakane to mujhe keh rahi hai ki app bohut pareshaan hai...
app mujhse kyun chupa rahe hai? main to apki patni hu na...she looked up...& his eyes met hers...
He never knew how...bt he felt the burden from his shoulder lighten...just by looking at her deep eyes...
ha...he answered unknowingly...
she again place her head over his heart,as she whispered again...
Hum dono ki to shadi hui hai na,MAAN ki AKRITI se,hum dono ab janmon ke sathi hai na...
His eyes widened,he couldn't hear what else geet was saying...yes it was his marriage to AKRITI,not GEET...Maybe it was God's wish...
NO ,it WAS God's wish...he gave him another chance to be happy,to live the life with the AKRITI he had dreamt off...or else why he would find a girl with same face as akriti ,bt with the nature he always wanted ?? Moreover why would the girl will forget all about her past?? Why would she believe everything so easily?? Why couldn't anyone contact with her family even though they had all the informations!! Why this girl would be such a position that reminding her of her past would be a threat for her life??
& most of all,WHY SHE WOULD NOTICE HER NAME WHILE GURUJI WAS CHANTING THE MANTRAS? Which ultimately caused the whole ritual with her be completed with the name AKRITI & not her real name...that means i was married to AKRITI again & NOT GEET.
Isn't this all a sign that God have given me second chance to live the life with THE AKRITI i thought of,i dreamt of...
I know,this is the chance...with this thought he hugged her.
****
As geet descended down the stairs,all the guest gasped...
They had not one,bt multiple reasons...the main was geet's resemblance to akriti...
Second was the difference,which they felt instantly,
Decked with khandani jewels,red sari mang tika & mangalsutra & bright read sindoor,she was looking like a indian doll.
Real akriti would never ever had dressed up like that.
Her beauty was a site to behold ofcourse...
she didn't have that sharp aged in her beauty like akriti had,she had more of a calm innocent beauty which soothed the souls who looked at her.
Actually the guests were skeptical about her being some other person with the same face,(Maan didn't give the details to the guests how he found her truth of course,so all that his ra**** her & her being virgin ,all that thing only dadi ,dev ,meera ,Chris & Nakul kaka the old loyal servant know) , most of them thought may be akriti was feigning this time & they would expose when they meet her ,thus rescuing the khurana family...
The elder guests instantly knew when they saw geet that she wasn't Akriti...the little bit doubt was also gone when they spoke with her,when they saw her gentle,respectful behaviour,her shararatien with kids...
Bt of course there were some haughty girls who denied to accept the truth which was in front of them. Like maan,they had their own reason. Whereas maan was influenced by his feeling of revenge,these girl,who wanted to marry maan were not so happy when they got the news of maan marrying again...so they opted for the "TRUTH" they liked...being blind to the proofs infront of them.
Maan had strictly restricted everyone to gossip about Akriti's past...so they chose to do they exact thing...
When went near kitchen where geet was...& started talking loudly enough to reach geet's ears...
So...the BITCH AKRITI is back, huh!!
Ya ,i don't believe that she is so shameless that after doing all that she is smiling infornt of all like nothing happened.
So what do you think she came back for??
Money??one girl suggested
Fame??another girl suggested
I know,maybe she couldn't anymore men to sleep with..
Yeah that should be the reason...all the other girls agreed her.
Geet came out of the kitchen with tears in her eyes...she was feeling sick with their words.
Why are u saying like this?She asked with teary voice
So what should we say ha?? YOU ARE A BITCH,what's wrong calling a BITCH with her name.
I am Not a bitch,aur maine aisa kuch nahi kiya hai.
oh yeah? Tumhe kya lagta hai,tum Ms. Innocent banke sabko dhoka dogi?? Not us u Sl*t. Why did u come here huh? U Wh**e,Why can't u leave maan alone? U will pay for this,one of the girls said as she pushed geet
Geet's eyes started to pour unknowingly...
Maine app logo ka kya bigada hai? Mujhe to kuch yaad vi nahi,meri galti kya hai ki app mujhse iss tarha baat kar rahe hai? App log bohut bure hai...
YOU!! How dare u call us bad huh?? U Bitch the girl pushed her.
You are the filth here,you shhould shut up Bitch another girl pushed her.
WHAT THE HELL IS HAPPENING HERE??It was maan
K..k..kuch nahi,the girls almost ran to the party hall...leaving maan with geet alone.
Geet looked at maan for a second & then jumped into his arms crying profusely...
Maan ,maan,maan she couldn't say anything more...she wanted only solace o her husband's warmth.
Wo mujhe Bitch kyun bula rahe hai?? Kya main buri hu? Mujhe to kuch yaad nahi hai?
App boliye na maan,kya maine kuch galat kiya tha?? Boliyen na maan she asked desperately,still crying
Maan couldn't answer it immediately,he stayed silent...
She clenced his shirt with her small fists,maan please,kuch to boliyen na,wo ladkiyon ne jo kaha wo sab jhoot hai na,main buri nahi hu na??she asked like a child with tears flowing down her eyes...
How he could explain to her that she is not the BITCh everyone thought her to be,HE thought her to be .He wanted to explain that it wasn't her fault that she had the same face as the Bitch,it wasn't her fault that when she had no memory of herself she was dragged down into this hell the Bitch had created. He simply couldn't explain to her that she was punished for the crimes that BITCh had committed...that it was all about her,but with the Bitch's name...
Tumne kuch galat nahi kiya,he could only utter only this while engulfing her in his cold warmth...
NOTE:- So if u haven't figured out the reason of the title from the LAST PARAGRAPH,here is the DETAILED EXPLANATION...
Ok first of all,this title is SATIRICAL . As u can see,this story is about geet,who is again & again being confused with a BITCH named Akriti.Her life's story started because she had resemblances with the BITCH. She is the "BITCH" of the story ,yet she is not. She is called the "BITCH" when she is anything bt that Bi**h. It's kind of irony of geet's life that she has the same face as hers & thus she suffers Which the Bit*h should be...so This title is given.It IS Geet's story...so called "Bitch's" STORY....
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