TERI BAHOON MEIN-a Bitch's story UPDATED THREAD 2 @ Page 1

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Dona

@Donnaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

part 4-5

poor geet

now maan n dadi know she is nt akriti...bt geet

bt agar aur age pata chalta to shyed

Edited by goldenmoon - 12 years ago

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teja21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

😭poor geet

thanx fr d pm

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_SnowFlakes_

@_SnowFlakes_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Maan jst spoiled Geets life in his blind revenge for Aakriti
dadimaa was always r8 whether it was abt Aakriti or Geet but nt belive her then n nw Also did same thing
waiting to see wht he Will do nw

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

wow, you are a really good writer! I loved how you added in the imagery of light and dark (the moon) and of using the "owl" and it's prey. Of course the owl is white as Maan is a good person BUT he is horribly blinded by revenge.

I did not want Geet to get hurt like this. Poor thing!

I want to see what Maan does next!

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latecomer

@latecomer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

poor soul...whatever is being done to her becoz of unconsious resemblence to sumone shrewd...
she lost her everything...
now maan should aleast try to be whatever she wrote in her diary...

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Smily

@angel_smily

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

nice update

ab to maan ko vishwaas hoga ki wo akriti nhi geet hai

poor geet

thanks for the pm

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

awesome, amazing emotional part

feel sad for geet

poor geet

continue soon

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Bhanu

@Cherishh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Hi, myself bhanu...I am a silent reader of your wrk and this is my first comment I guess😛😳...your every story has a unique flavor to it...me really enjoy them👏👍🏼

I am loving this story so very much...

OMG...what has Maan gone and done in his anger, hurt and revenge...he cannot forgive himself for his sin

Geet is such an innocent soul..so sweet and loving...poor she

I feel that she should know the truth, maybe with the help of her new family or her only family according to her without past memory she might overcome it

No hiding yaar...can't see Maan breaking down, though he deserves it, but as late as it takes for the truth to come in front of her..he will be in more pain

Looking forward to it...will he tell his family about his deed and Geet or is he going to block himself...what is he going to do, so anxious to know, so plzz do update soon.

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#179

first of all a big wala sory baby, i missed tis ff..but now i read all i one go..

wow lovely lovely emotional update...oh god geet and akrit, my man thinking his geet as akrit and taking his revenge without knowing who she is?.. but like tis story i will feel for my maan more than geet , why means wen he came to know te truth, he will drown in his guilty and hurt himself, oh god.. te way innocent geet , very cute and sad, ...i love all te updates so much.. very heart touching dear

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fantesy

@fantesy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#180

read all parts in one go n realy loved ur unique concept ...geet lost her memory n maan thought her 2 b akriti n didnt left any chance 2 torture though he had suffered so much bcz of akriti bt because of his anger geet sweet ,cute innocent gal hv lost her evrythn ..realy feelin so bad 4 geet...loved it..continue soon..

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