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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan grumpy with his priceless dream so ruthlessly interrupted

Ranbir gives his brother a better option to make his first date special😊
and Geet too readily agrees to the change in plan but
Anaya poor thing is running out of time😕
Geet se zyaada toh Anaaya seems worked up and lost😆
and Geet as usual calm and collected😳

Geet getting emotional with the thought that few days from now she will be gone and Anaya too feeling low about it
Seriously no matter how far or close u are college days and that masti, hanging out always is special 😛
Once out of college some things do change😒

Maari the whole scene about Geet-Anaya singling out on the dresses, shoes the whole look was so aptly penned down, giving you nothing much to imagine its like right in front of ur eyes😊

Maan is here and Anaya how can she give in so easily
This is the best time to settle scores hain na😉
Geet enjoying the whole scene but not to forget having her fill glancing at handsome Maan😳

Finally time for the date😛

Ayush and Anaya are so such darlings 🤗
True friends😳

Maan taking Geet to the country carnival😎
which brings out the real Geet, unknowingly Maan has fulfilled her wish to be to a carnival😊

Their moments together truly to treasure life long
Maan's idea of activity was interesting😳

The dances reminded me of Titanic and then ofcourse Our own Kurbaan hua😃

The name on the rice grain brought back some fond memories of my childhood, it is very prominent in our native places and we had a kind of collection of the same in frames, pendant etc😊

Maari the way u have woven small instances in their journey is superb
be it library, gift shop, feeding the cows, and their sitting on a bridge with their bare feet submerged in water just amazing
👏 👏 👏

The cemetery part was kind of scary but can't help but remember their walk back on their college trip and they had run fearing an animal😳
But their vulnerability and pain due to the loss of their dear ones did change the mood but I'm happy Maan tried to lighten the moment.

Awesome update Maari
Their dinner date was so special and the gift with those magical words spoke volumes😊
The song so perfect and Maaneet😳

Aayush pushing the shy Maan but
Let me believe she actually took an initiative and did the needful😃

Thanks so much for this lovely update
I seriously have no words of apology to be so late
Just plain SORRY!!!


Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome dear
loved it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
what a long and beautiful update. the way u described each of their masti and fun is amazing. that was the best date i have read till now . both are shy types but am guessing geet will b the one taking initiative to kiss him a goodnight kiss on his cheeks. eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful update!
Now waiting for the Smoooch !
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ek demand add kar deti toh perfect update ban jaata...😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gosh this was such an amazing update. There was lots to love in it. The brotherly moment at the beginning was nice with Ranbir giving his advice. I also liked the moment between Geet and Anaya with Anaya reassuring her that despite being apart indefinitely they will still be friends. Coming to the date it was fantastically written. Each moment was well thought out and simply perfect. They spent some really sweet and memorable moments together and you articulated it so well that it was a beautiful read. Loved the ending as well with Geet admitting to Maan that she was not asleep and did in fact hear him sing. Looking forward to what is in store next.
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Posted: 12 years ago
what a part...frm where i will start...th whole date..maans planning...geets dress up...me thinking..if this only for a day out...so mch preparation before a date...omg..dress selection..make up...thn th carnival...lvd all th massages of ayush...i also wanted maan would do those...bt alas..maan still feeling hesitation..he should do or nt,,,,enjoyed most th couple portion...n thn dinner...bt like maans dream there was no music ..ok alrdy they danced in carnival...maans gift...whts geet thinking abt th lines of th gift..it has hidden meaning...n wow geet did that..kiss..maan was hesitated...hope tht before her leaving he will pour out his heart to her...who will keep th potrait of thm...wtng for nxt..kiss..will it b a simple one or passionate..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Agla update kab hai?
Time date jagah,... sab bol de...
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Posted: 12 years ago
woah...!!!!! itz aaa looong update...i cant really typ de bettr scenes...coz everything was jst too awesum...wuld geet kiss maaan...plz plz doo so... lolz i love emoticons..it xpresses much bettr dan words.. like maan pissed of at ayush...lolz lovd ayush in this..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


Ek demand add kar deti toh perfect update ban jaata...😳😳


*Sigh* Perfection paana bohat mushkil hai!

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