If Only You Saw Me (14) Thread Fifteen Added - Page 118

Originally posted by: mayyo

OKAY! Ek spoiler deti hoon chhota sa. He is going to confess in the next chapter. Asli wala. 😛

Originally posted by: dqno1

👏

aur chipkayega😃

haiyeee... mera din accha shuru ho gaya... chalo chakki calling.. catch u later😊

Originally posted by: dqno1

Dekh rahi ho na...😆

Saari andar ki baat bahar aa rahi hai Mari...😆

Originally posted by: mayyo

Haaye Allah! Do you think about not getting a compensation for once?! Aur waise bhi, jab tak main compensation karne pe aati hoon, humein root cause hi bhool jaati hai! 😆

Originally posted by: mayyo

Na ji na! Ek baat thodi na hai! It's two different things which people take for one! 😆

Originally posted by: Onir

Hum root cause bhoolte nahi but hum usi mein uljh jaate hai😆

Originally posted by: Onir

Ab mujhe itna sab pata nahi na Ms. Litterati👏😉

Originally posted by: heytal

Ishq par zor nahi hain yeh woh aatish Ghalib

jo lagaye na lage bujhaye na bhuje😳

I absolutely love this couplet!

Maan Geet convo on phone was natural

so much concern, thoughtfulness, a little awkwardness but still touching😊

Awkwardness was bound to be there at that stage but the care overshadows it.

Geet is leaving hope the graduation helps Maan out

In confessing? I'm sure it will. Somehow!

Loved Ayush and Anaya giving Maaneet a push and finally Maan voicing out to spend quality time together with his Geet😳

Onir has named them Maan a tortoise and consequently, the couple of these two is the tortoise couple. They need a push to make a move! 😆

Raya making her presence felt in all their convo😊

Geet convo with her Mom so simple and straight😊

Mom concerned and Geet confused

but finally her Mom's word of advice does ease off her confusion and not to forget the ever so dramatic Raya diffuses the tension😉

That is how a mother is to her child, right? Calming her child and putting any internal conflicts to rest... As for Raya, she is the total opposite of Geet and hence the fun person who diffuses the tensions! 😃

Oh my God! Bechaare Maaneet

All interested in their date

Gaon abhi basa nahi aur ---- pehle hi aa gaye

Though happy that Anaya is helping out Geet for the D-day😉

Maan can have his say for his dreamy date and gorgeous Geet😳

Ha ha! That definitely would have if the ever-so-reserved and shy people go on dates! Everybody's interested to know,the whens and the hows! 😆

Yay!!!!🥳

Finally exams are over and the gang is off to party😛

No matter how old u are the exam scare always lurks upon u😔

I agree! Exams always scare you!

So finally the preparations for the date begin

Maan all set to get it all right👍🏼

Maari you are such a tease yaar

Poor Maan dreaming

I actually was so engrossed didn't even realize it

but Geet reciprocating did give me a hitch😕

Bechaara Maan sab uski band baja rahe hain

Now I'm really looking forward for the date

Hope it turns out more dreamy than the dream😳

Well, I don't intend to be a tease but it usually happens! 😆

But I really doubt you found the actual date ti be anywhere close to the dreamy that everyone was expecting!

Flawless update Maari

Really very sorry for the delay

But I was reading the update and a smile adorning my lips throughout

Just loved it

🤗
I think I replied even later so we are even. 😆

Thanks Heytal! 🤗

Originally posted by: heytal

Maan grumpy with his priceless dream so ruthlessly interrupted

Poor him! 😆

Ranbir gives his brother a better option to make his first date special😊

and Geet too readily agrees to the change in plan but

Anaya poor thing is running out of time😕

Geet se zyaada toh Anaaya seems worked up and lost😆

and Geet as usual calm and collected😳

Exactly! Geet se zyaada toh Anaya fuss kar rahi hai but just like you have pointed out, Geet is the calm and collected person who rarely loses the composure.

Geet getting emotional with the thought that few days from now she will be gone and Anaya too feeling low about it

Seriously no matter how far or close u are college days and that masti, hanging out always is special 😛

Once out of college some things do change😒

I know! I have experienced the changes that happen once we are out of that masti phase...

Maari the whole scene about Geet-Anaya singling out on the dresses, shoes the whole look was so aptly penned down, giving you nothing much to imagine its like right in front of ur eyes😊

I can only say a humble thank you for such a big compliment, Heytal! It feels very pleasing when a reader says they can actually visualise the words! 😳

Maan is here and Anaya how can she give in so easily

This is the best time to settle scores hain na😉

Geet enjoying the whole scene but not to forget having her fill glancing at handsome Maan😳

Of course! Anaya ka bhi fayda aur Geet ka bhi! 😉

Finally time for the date😛

Finally! 😆

Ayush and Anaya are so such darlings 🤗

True friends😳

The friends who wouldn't leave a chance to push tbe tortoise forward! 😆

Maan taking Geet to the country carnival😎

which brings out the real Geet, unknowingly Maan has fulfilled her wish to be to a carnival😊

Yes, unknowingly fulfilled a wish...

Their moments together truly to treasure life long

Maan's idea of activity was interesting😳

That was the intention behind choosing a carnival:to give "them" time...

The dances reminded me of Titanic and then ofcourse Our own Kurbaan hua😃

I haven't watched the whole movie. Titanic, I mean. But I had a vision of some other dance mixed with KH. 😊

The name on the rice grain brought back some fond memories of my childhood, it is very prominent in our native places and we had a kind of collection of the same in frames, pendant etc😊

I'm amazed at how many memories this story brings alive! But this rice grain idea is a very prominent part of my own childhood as well. 😊

Maari the way u have woven small instances in their journey is superb

be it library, gift shop, feeding the cows, and their sitting on a bridge with their bare feet submerged in water just amazing

👏 👏 👏

*Bowing*

The cemetery part was kind of scary but can't help but remember their walk back on their college trip and they had run fearing an animal😳

But their vulnerability and pain due to the loss of their dear ones did change the mood but I'm happy Maan tried to lighten the moment.

I wonder why the walk back reminded you of the run. Was there any connection?

Awesome update Maari

Their dinner date was so special and the gift with those magical words spoke volumes😊

The song so perfect and Maaneet😳

Thanks Heytal! I am really really glad!

Aayush pushing the shy Maan but

Let me believe she actually took an initiative and did the needful😃

Ha ha! She did the needful but not the way evryone expected!

Thanks so much for this lovely update

I seriously have no words of apology to be so late

Just plain SORRY!!!

If you're saying sorry for actually commenting not so late then I wonder if I should find a new word when I finally show up at your thread!