The Locket (8), MG FF, thread 9 link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 78

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Posted: 12 years ago
Me first again 🥳 Yayy!

Okay coming back to earth... and commenting on the update. 😆 I loved the update... it was in crescendo throughout with a wide range of emotions, with each emotion hitting like a staccato and the whole picture getting clearer. Take a bow girl! 👏 (Ignore my musical connotations... I'm a bit lost in transition... 😉😆)

Dev-Chandan conversation on the plane ride gave a lot of insights. Love has always strengthened and inspired everyone who is affected by and in love ... love makes you see through and read the similar longing, craving and submission in another person who is struck by love. It was well shown in the way Dev who has fresh experience in the love department could read through the mask of Chandan who has been in love and its ache since years in his attempt of naming his Chand enterprises, Is in real his deep expression of his love unknown to the world and also to his love. Dev associated it unknowingly but did strike a chord with this stranger. I loved the symbolism in Poonam ka Chand. And I hope that his this trip back to India will bring happiness and love in his life as that of the Eid-ka-Chand ... and he will be able to celebrate the Joy of love. ❤️

Brij-Pammi can stoop so low. Disgusting 😡😡 But I wouldn't blame them much, as Chandan is at fault too. HE cant' always be so drowned in his guilt that he has been so blind to all that has been happening. Yes he is been a good hearted person but he has his own great follies. He has shunned his responsibilities just with the fear of facing hatred. I only hope he isn't quite late now. Poonam deserves her share of happiness too.. He needs to love upto his love for her help her and prevent her from further disintegration.

Naina-Chandan bonding glimpses were sweet. I had an inkling but yes the truth being revealed had its own impact. Kudos to you to bring all the twists and turns and the emotions so rightly out. 👏👏

Bambi + Devarji bonding = Naina ke hall behaal. 😆😆

I loved how you showed her inner turmoil this time facing a heel bent determined Dev who has come to win her over and who will make her walls crumble. 😳
Her running, late night escapes, plucking cotton, covering ears and face with pillow, fighting self when she sees that same Dev playing with kids as she saw him first time and the night in the village... And then dreaming and wishing for that happy family moments and picture perfect with him in making him eat with her hands, sharing space and life together. Loved it all.

I loved the word play here ranging from Dev-veerji, to Devarji, to Devji... 😆 Daadi ishmart hai ... Dev didn't have to hear being a veerji yet Maan ki amanat is safe... Devarji ko toh time hai na ... so Devji suits best for his Geetums... 😉😆

Continue soon... 😃

Thanks 🤗


Edited by Onir - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
guess what first thing reading tara's run came to my mind was :- send tara to olympics and ask Dev to stand behind her i'm sure she will win a medal.😆

haaye geet abhi se devar ji.. mujhe teeno version ache lage Dev veerji, devar ji and devji..😃😃😃

poonam ka chand innocent sentance but the sting for chanden was too much..

poonam is suffering from some illness..😕😕😕

man i hate brij and pammi. the most devil villains..

kya hume is love story ki bhi happy ending milegi ya sad one??????

nice update Avi..🤗
Edited by mannu_minnie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg..poor tara...😆

i do hope poonam gets her happiness n chandan comes to know the truth...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome 👏 ⭐️ update dear 😊
i hate brij plz kick him out na😡
Thanx 4 the Pm 😃
eagerly waiting for next part
update soon
😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mannu_minnie

guess what first thing reading tara's run came to my mind was :- send tara to olympics and ask Dev to stand behind her i'm sure she will win a medal.😆


haaye geet abhi se devar ji.. mujhe teeno version ache lage Dev veerji, devar ji and devji..😃😃😃

poonam ka chand innocent sentance but the sting for chanden was too much..

poonam is suffering from some illness..😕😕😕

man i hate brij and pammi. the most devil villains..

kya hume is love story ki bhi happy ending milegi ya sad one??????

nice update Avi..🤗

Olympics ka idea accha hai...😆😆
Poonam has lost her husband, forced to marry, tortured by Brij/Pammi, lost her baby, brainwashed by Pammi, had her grown daughter run away from home... too much for any one person.
Multiple love stories hai... all different types... so yes, they too shall have to start anew. More in the next update...😃
Thanks Mannu.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Tyro

omg..poor tara...😆


i do hope poonam gets her happiness n chandan comes to know the truth...

Coming soon..😃 2 sentences.. 😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update👏 👏
Thanks for pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome dear
loved it
thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice... confusions over ... 😊 why did dadima ask her to call him devji... anyways she will be calling him devarji later 😉

liked the Poonam ka chand part.. i have seen a failed relationship in my life and always wondered how much patience they had as divorce is considered a taboo... (they are of my grandparent's age).. but in their case i will see aunty stealing glances from kitchen just to make sure uncle is eating food properly.. after uncle finished she will eat from the same plate.. (jhoota khane se pyaar badta hain... she still lives in that hope) i am sure the day she dies, uncle will be crying like hell...

anyways back to story.. dev is cool.. i love him... he is good brother (both to maan and geet) when he knows the silent love story of maneet he is going to have super fun playing cupid...

and i heard ur going to end soon??? if it is bcoz story needs it then its ok... i dont believe in dragging the story... but bcoz u feel number of likes are decreasing then please dont do that... ur one awesome writer and this is one awesome story... ⭐️
this story is close to my heart ... as incidently it has many small parts related to my life.. and my dreams😳


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: miss_dreamy

nice... confusions over ... 😊 why did dadima ask her to call him devji... anyways she will be calling him devarji later 😉

liked the Poonam ka chand part.. i have seen a failed relationship in my life and always wondered how much patience they had as divorce is considered a taboo... (they are of my grandparent's age).. but in their case i will see aunty stealing glances from kitchen just to make sure uncle is eating food properly.. after uncle finished she will eat from the same plate.. (jhoota khane se pyaar badta hain... she still lives in that hope) i am sure the day she dies, uncle will be crying like hell...

anyways back to story.. dev is cool.. i love him... he is good brother (both to maan and geet) when he knows the silent love story of maneet he is going to have super fun playing cupid...

and i heard ur going to end soon??? if it is bcoz story needs it then its ok... i dont believe in dragging the story... but bcoz u feel number of likes are decreasing then please dont do that... ur one awesome writer and this is one awesome story... ⭐️
this story is close to my heart ... as incidently it has many small parts related to my life.. and my dreams😳


Poor Daadima did not know the confusion it would cause later on. She was just trying to get her to be a sister to Dev.
Failed relationships are interesting but only to write. It is painful as anything to live like that, not being secure in love.
Dev and NT both will be playing cupid as Maan will be in his dusht danav avtar once we get to present.
It is kind of demoralizing to me to get less than 100 likes, where as lots of other writers have 300-400 likes in a day or two. Well what can I do? I will finish the story properly though there will be no more FFs from me after this one.
Thanks so much for the nice words. It lifted my spirits.😃

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