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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
maan heard wht his servants r talking abt him n geet n geet being an unwed mother
lets see if maan will do anything to shut their mouth or nt
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Posted: 12 years ago
cute geet and cute talks hope maan marry her
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Posted: 12 years ago
great parts suhi.
geet si really cute. i am feeling so bad for Geet . She was badly trapped
waiting for next updates dear😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
adorable love the update 👏 great update ⭐️ Is Maan going to marry her ?????????????? Can't wait to read the nxt part
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Posted: 12 years ago
both parts were really cute
loved them
is maan goin to marry geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb updates for parts 16 and 17. Glad that Maan heard what the servants are saying behind his back regarding his relationship with Geet. Loved the way he manofied her by feeding her dinner. Fab job as always and looking forward to what is in store next
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Posted: 12 years ago
Geet is so naive yaar...
She's so cute...
Really love this child geet...
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Posted: 12 years ago
From servants talk atleast maan understood.. what will people think abt Geet & baby & him... Cute moments btwn Maneet.. Nice parts..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago


**MENDING HEARTS**

part 18

his sensous touches were creating havoc inside the innocent soul.. Her ragged breathing ,Quivering lips, slumped shoulders and shifted weight towards her was making him to fall for her. She was the epitome of beauty and innocence he had been with many girls many of them just meant his money and rest their credit and gain.. But his innocent child woman never thinks of herself.. He was for the first time feeling to have her and caress her just like he never did.. Even that night he meant business just to have her all night.. Maan softly kissed her creamy red hue cheeks she was looking desirable with her innocence and those chocolate smudged fingers he was relishing was something unexplainable..
maan pulled her in his lap cradling her in is arms. She was so vulnerable right now but still having the capacity to rule him..
maan kissed her neck line and she herself titled giving him space to explore her.. He didnt expected this from her maan looked at her she was hiding her face in him no expression in her eyes just a confused thing written all over .. A trouble to knew this kind of jitters..
maan softly whispered in her ear making her to open her eyes in a jerk.. Those doe shaped hazels were having a small glint of naughtiness filled happiness surrounded in those orbs waiting for something to fulfil those chasing dreams..
maan : you wanna work.. Haina geet...
geet nodded in first attempt and the next second he found her wide eyes looking at him with the intensity that was ready to kill him.. He will be burned with the questions that he could see she wanted to ask but couldnt.. Her apprehension and the lack of maturity was making her to fall two steps backward even if she wants to step up and question him about that night.. He had actually thought that she would yell at him for using her knowing her semi unconsious state that night but here her childlike nature was making everything difficult to handle..
geet : haan karna hai.. Tabhi toh i will be able to support me and my baby.. Aap jaante ho baby hota hai toh responsibilities badh jaati hai..
maan caressed her soft cheeks wiping the last trace of that melted chocolate off her lips..he titled and comfortably made her lie down covering her with the soft duvet..
maan : aur kya hota hai jab baby hota hai..
geet : aur.. She starts to think..and suddenly tears starts falling from her eyes..
geet : i will get fat and then all will mock at me.. Mujhe nahi hona mota.. Her sobs were getting louder and maan's incompetantly in the field of handling a pregnant woman was showing off correctly..
maan : geet listen chup ho jao..
geet : nahi i will get fat..
maan grabbed her tiny body in his arms and pulled her towards her gently wiping those tears he cursed himself for loosing that night that even he didnt used protection nor made sure that she had a pill..
maan : stop crying geet.. You are not a baby now..
geet : still sniffling .. Haa i am baby's mother.. Main baby kaise ho sakti hun.. Baby toh mere ander hai.. Dekho yahan she poined at her tummy ..
maan caressed her stomach and kept his hand on hers.. Softly pressing her hand both of them were trying to feel that angel..
maan : haan baby tumhare andar hai.. Itna pata hai. Then why dont you know that jab baby will grow inside you you are tend to gain weight.. It will be baby inside you then how you will be fat..
his explanation went over her head but she still nodded trying to gain something from his words..
geet : matlab... Baby will grow inside me and that will be baby..
maan : exactly.. That will be our baby..
maan st : finally she understood.. But what will she do maan.. You cant let her stay here with nurse and for that servant tomorrow he is going to pay for his words.. What if geet had heard all his words..
maan st : but why didnt i reacted at time only.. This is not me .. Maan you always respond in an impulsive moment that results in getting things fatal but yesterday you did a right thing just because its not about you but about geet and the baby..
geet : mera baby hai..
maan : not again..
maan : geet how many times i have to tell you that baby is mine too.. Mera bhi baby hai..
geet : nahi aapka baby kaise ho sakta hai.. Baby mera hai..
maan : geet chup ho jao warna..
now his threathing came and she was fully attentive glared at him..
geet : baby aapka kase hai.. Mujhe bhi batao.. I wanna kno.. Ye baby aapka kaise hai..
maan thought for some time nad finally he knew that making her know the truth will be better infact if she will held him guilty than it will be fine but atleast she will accept him as the baby's father..
maan took her hand in his and looked into his eyes..
geet again pestering him..
geet: batao mujhe baby aapka kaise hai...
maan took a deep breathe and finally mustered courahe to let her know the truth...

rest below..
Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago

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