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simran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Congrats for new story
awesome prologue
nice cs
cont soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

very interesting start...

would love to read it...

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chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

oyye hoyye another story from you
but one dealing with a obsessed maan about geet
hope he dont break her heart yaar
maybe he will but then will probably break himself only
cheers for pm
the prologue seems pretty interesting

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chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

looking forward to this story too

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farzu3008

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

cngrats for new ss. lovely prologue will b waiting

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vrinda22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

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vrinda22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

haa..how i missed commenting before..

awesome prolgue

waiting 4 updates

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...RIDDHIMA...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Awesome starting
Just started reading kashmakash
But my exams r going
So will read after exam
No pm!!!
At least post it on arpita's fb group...plzzz

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suhaaana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Updating part 1

any waits

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suhaaana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

** MG FF : MENDING HEARTS **

part 1

it was the another usual day for him... Work load and another sight inspection.. Though he is having many workers and employess who could see the same but this time it was for the new a ten million project that he had grabbed after manupulating some of the people bribing them this was an important project that was though not necessary but still to show his rivals what maan singh khurana is he had used his approach and reach to grab this particular project...

maan was looking at the progress of the project though it had just started but the speed and the efficiency with which it was going was on his terms... He looked at the pillars which were mounted on the base he had himself checked the material and was highly satisfied .. Work his utmost priority other than his own luxurious life where he is the king... The womaniser and the life giver to many of the families .. He is bad but the degree of being a merciless and cruel person doesnt constrict to a level.. He is bad bt for some or the other he is cruel.. Than for some he is no less than any god...

she was like a gush of wind inn his life encounter.. That was what they had and she was always imprinted in his mind and soul.. Eyes closed and knucles white this was his condition whenever he saw her...her eyes always haunt him... That blankness that always crept in his life was visible in her life he hazels were the door of her pure and hurted soul... GEET...these words are haunting him from last two months... That even the cruel and ruthless maan singh khurana is not able to stay in piece... Because she is always there to haunt him with her presence...

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maan was about to go mansion... He had been extremely frustated just because things were not accoring to him.. Just because she was not with him... And he who never touches any of the woman species after his one lusty business was now craving for her... This was new and something non wanted for him...
maan had been extremely agry and agitated his eyes were red.. He was driving rashly with no direction and aim .. His decision was changed when he had found her thought again knocking his senses making him restless but she was not there and his wise senses were cursing that girl geet who had managed to stole his piece of mind...

maan : why cant i... Kyun nahi main use apne aap se door kar pa raha hoon... Who is she dammit... Who is she to rule me... Maan singh khurana... No one.. I cant be like this.. I haveto do something...

maan jerked and immediately stopped his speedy car when something with bones and flesh collided with his high speed car..making him to hault...

he came out of the car immediately to look at the thing that was much keen for the destruction of his /her life that it has taken the path to cross his path... Anger towered his senses.. He was mad with anger when the same face hit his eyes.. Diselved condition... Torn clothes lips bleeding even her eyes were red and swelled she was crying.. Knees bleeding that he gussed seeing her running ... And he guessed what might had happened... She was their in a plain white salwar kameez the dupatta missing and very different from her avatar that he had seen last time... She was continuously looking at her back like checking something.. Lips pale and dried.. Forehead was having some bruices...
he was shocked surprised glad various emotions running through him..

maan looked at her she was not even looking at him... Just like she didnt know him.. Just wanted to save herself she was trying to go away when he pulled her to himself.. She cried in pain and helpless.. She was hurt and it was paining a lot..

she wincing murmered...
geet : le..e..a.ve me..pl.e.ase

and the next second she was limp in his arms unconscious...

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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago