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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
part 2
nice...
irritating Dev and Pammi...
so Meera has eloped...
and Geet is here...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
nice part dear
i had that doubt that dev will try to maary geet
hope maan will help her
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
congrats
awesome start..
meera bhag gayi to dev ne geet ko pakad k apni dulhan bana liya!!!!
ufff
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
😃omg😲
thank u for sending pm or else I would have missed such an interesting story😃
I loved the concept👏
woohoo so maan in search of devs dulhan which is none other than geet😆
oh god pammi is the villain I seriously hate her😡
she wanted all property on her name well my suggestion on her keep dreaming
hope ur sick dreams never comes true😡
hmm maans entry was wow😳
and geet she lives in Amritsar but poor soul got stuck as her dear bro eloped with meera😆
hahahaha I loved the way geet said to dev "main koi dulhan wulan nahi hoon"😆
god arghhh this dev how can he force geet just becoz meera left😡
waise I m happy to that meera eloped or else she would have been stuck with dev all her life 😆
heheheh maan was against meera marrying dev .why does he think that his brother is innocent ?????????😡
loved dadis character too 😃
now waiting for maan to save geet (he will save her na becoz possibility Is bleak ????😆)
waiting waiting waiting 😳
once again thank u for the story and pm😃
cant wait to see how will maaneet react seeing each other 😉
plzzz don't let that dumb good for nothing dev maary geet 😡
do update soon 😃
love aanya😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful update..
hope maan saves geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16

Part – 4

Maan turns back and looks at her…..

Finding her in a birde's attire Maan stops….

Geet gets up and watches the jeep coming back towards her…..

Maybe he had noticed her just now…..

Maan comes near her and stops the jeep …..

Geet ,daro mat, here comes your savior …..

Maan stops but he never looks at her….…..

Geet: mujhe bachao, koi mera peecha kar raha hai

Maan: andar beito, he orders her to sit in the jeep still keeping his eyes on the road….

Geet looks at him for a while….

She is confused whether to trust him or not?

Lekhin ab toh Geet ke paas koi aur rashtha bhi nahi hai uss Dev se bachne ke liye….

Geet decides to go with this stranger, come whatmay? She just wants to get rid of this dev first…

Geet gets in the jeep….

Maan starts to drive….

He doesn't ask her anything…..

But he feels sorry for her…….

bechari ladhki, isski kismat ko dekho? Bhaagthe bhaagthe mere paas aagayi….

Geet is too tired….she closes her eyes and takes some rest…

She feels that she is in safe hands now…..

She just wants to get out of here somehow…..

Then she will manage to get back to her beeji………

After a while Maan stops the jeep….

Geet opens her eyes to look where they have come……

Geet couldn't believe what she saw…

Ye mein kahan aagayi? Babaji, ye kaisa khel hai aapka?

Aur jisko meinne apna rakshak samja, woh kaun hai?

Ye Dev ko kaise jaantha?

Geet is surprised to see Dev waiting for her there…..

It's the same house, shadhiwali ghar jahan se Geet bhaagi thi…..

Geet: babaji, ye kaise ho saktha?

Maan has mistaken her for Meera, she was dressed like a bride know…..

So he brought her back to the wedding party……

Geet looks at Maan……but Maan is in a hurry…..

Maan is looking somewhere else……

He is just waiting for her to get down so that he can leave….

Geet ko ab samaj mein aatha ki ye bhi Dev ka hi aadmi hai….

Dev Geet ke haath pakadkke ussko zabardasthi andar lekhe jaatha…

Dev: tum mujhse nahi bach sakthi….aap bhi aayiye

Maan turns back and looks at them….

Geet keeps looking at Maan……

Her eyes plead for help….

Maan is so disturbed ……

Usske aankhon mein kitna dara hai? aur kitne sawaal hai?

Mujhe aaisa kyun lagtha hai ki woh sare sawaal mere liye hai?

Mein toh ussko jaantha bhi nahi?

Lekhin phir bhi Maan ko lagtha hai ki kuch toh gadbad hai….

Maan ko bahut bhura lagtha….this is getting worse….

Maan can't stand this anymore….he decides to leave…

for Maan is not going to interfere in Dev's life…..

It's better to leave it to Dev…….

Waise innkke mamle mein Maan kabhi nahi passega…..

Maan leaves but he is not at all happy…..

Though she is a stranger she is so innocent and young…..

Maan ke mann mein hazaroon sawaal utthe hai….

Why did she run away?

Why was she so scared….

What was she expecting from him?

Woh Maan ko aaise kyun dekh arhi thi?

Geet ka chera Maan ke dimag se nikhaltha hi nahi…..

Maybe she is scared of shadhi…..

Kabhi kabhi aaisa hotha haina…….

Maan aaise apne aapko convince kartha hai……

Lekhin Maan ko patha nahi ki woh uss ladhki ke barein mein bar bar kyun sochtha?

Dev: kya dekh rahi ho? woh mere bhai hai

Geet ko ab patha chaltha hai ki ussne galat aadmi se madat maanga tha….

Geet: chodo mujhe, koi bachao

Par Dev sunnewala nahi hai…..

Geet has no other go but to go with him…..

Dadi is happy that Meera is back….

They get married……

Dadi donno ko ashirvaad karkke wahan se chale jaathi….

Later she comes to know about Geet from the driver….

Dadi feels very bad for that girl…..

Sach mein usski ksimat bahut karab hai….

Warna aaj hi ussko Hoshiarpur kyun aana tha?

But Dadi has no clue that Mann had helped Dev getting his bride back….

Woh bhi instant bride……

Geet is very scared….

But she is not going to give up…

She looks for the right chance to escape….

Luckily she finds Pinky…she is her friend…..

Pinky feels guilty that somehow she is also responsible for Geet's plight…..

Hadn't she helped Meera Geet wouldn't have landed herself in this trouble…..

Pinky helps Geet get out from there…..

She takes Geet to her house…..

Pinky's father is afraid of Dev and he doesn't want Geet to stay at their place….

But he allows her to stay there for that night alone…..

Geet thanks him and stays there….

Dev ki Dulhan phir se bhaag gayi……

Dev is pissed off…..

He vows to get Geet back and sets out to find her…

He searches the nearby jungle and all the possible routes…..

Par Geet toh pinky ke ghar mein haina?

Iten raat ko Dev kissi ke ghar ke andar kaise guss saktha?

So he is waiting for the sun to rise….

Early morning Geet leaves Pinky's house and she enters the jungle….

This is much safer…

Jungle janwar toh insaan se bhi behthar hai……

She keeps running….

At Maan's house….

This is inside the jungle….

Maan and dadi leave for Delhi…….

Driver ke saath apne black lancer mein chalthe hai…..

On the way…

Dadi looks dull…..

Maan: kay baat hai dadi? aap kal se kuch pareshaan lag rahe hai

Dadi: Maan bete, aapne teek kaha, humme yahan nahi aana chahiye

Maan: Dadi, kya hua?

Dadi: patah nahi ye kaise log hai?

Maan: dadi, aap inkke barein mein kyun sochthe hai?

Dadi: humme bas uss bechari ki fikar hai bete

Maan: kaun? Meera?

Dadi: nahi, Meera is very lucky that she left , but the other girl, na jaane Dev ko woh ladhki kahan se milli?

Maan: aap kiss ladhki ke barein mein baat kar rahe hai Dadi?

Dadi: wahi ladhki jisskke saath Dev ki shadhi hui

Maan: par Dev ki shadhi Meera ke saath hi hui na? Meera wapas aagayi haina?

Dadi: nahi bete, woh Meera nahi hai

Maan: Dadi, aap kya keh rahe hai?

Dadi: haan, bete, woh bechari toh galat waqt pe Dev ke haath laggayi

Maan: Dadi, woh Meera nahi hai toh kaun hai?

Dadi: woh, uss ladhke ki behen hai, jisskke saath Meera bhaag gayi

Maan: ye kya hai? Meera bhaag gayi?

Dadi: haan bete, lagtha hai ki woh kissi ko pyaar karthi hai

Maan: phir ye shadhi ke liye haan kyun karthi?

Dadi: ussne toh shuru se hi inkaar kiya tha

Maan: kya?

Dadi: haan bete, ye toh Pammi ki galthi hai, ussne Dev ki zidd ko mankke ye shadhi zabardasthi karwane ki kosish ki

Maan: Dadi, ye sab kya hai? mujhe toh kuch samaj mein nahi aatha, aur meinne ye kya kardhi?

Dadi: kya hua bete? Aapne kya kiya?

Maan: lekhin Dadi, aapne mujhse dulhan ko doondhne ko kyun kaha? Achca hotha ki ek ladhki ki zindagi bach jaathi, haina? Dadi, humme yahan aana hi nahi chahiye tha, meinne pehle hi aapko rokhne ki bahut koshish ki, lekhin aap toh maanthe hi nahi, ab dekho kya ho gaya?

Dadi: humme bhi shadhi ke badh hi sare sachayi patha chala, warna hum ye shadhi hargis nahi hone dethe

Maan: woh ladhki Meera nahi hai, toh meinne galat ladhki ko shadhi ke ghjar choda? Ye kaise ho saktha? MSK ne aajtak aaisa koi bhi galthi nahi kiya hai, ab ye mujhse itne bade galthi kaise ho gayi? Ab woh ladhki kaise hogi?

Dadi: aap kiss ladhki ke barein mein baat kar rahe hai?

Maan: driver gadhi rokho

Dadi: kya baat hai bete? Aapne gadhi ki rokha? Hum nahi chahathe ki aap inlogon ke bathon mein interfere karein, ye log bahut katharnak log hai, aur toh aur ye gawar log hai, inkko samjana bahut mushkil hai

Maan: par dadi mujhse ek bahut badi galthi ho gayi, ab mujhe hi ussko sudarna padega, aap jayiye dadi, mujhe yahan bahut zarrori kaam hai

Dadi: par Maan

Maan: aap mere chintha mat kijiye, driver sambalkke

Maan remembers Geet's face pleading for help...with a hundred questions hidden behind...
Maan gets back to his house….
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wonderful update!!!
waiting to see what will happen next
Edited by sandymg - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice concept...

bechara dev...🤣...uski har dulhan bhag jati he 🤣...

yato shadise pehle yato shadike bad.. 🤣...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 4
OMG poor Geet...
how could Maan do that...
stupid fool Maan...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part ' 5

On the way Maan keeps thinking of that girl'.

Her pleading look flashes in his mind again and again'..

Maybe he should listened to her pleas'

Maybe he could have saved her life'..

Why the hell did he meet her?
Neither she comes in his way nor he takes her back to Dev'..

But how on earth would he know that she is not Meera'.

Maybe he should have asked her name?

What's the use? He just came to know about Meera from Dadi''

Though it's just a mistake and Maan didn't even know about all this he is still feeling guilty'..

How could he do that?

He just can't leave Hoshiarpur just like that'

Atleast he should meet this girl once'.

Maybe she is in trouble''.

What if she does something stupid?

Ussko dekhthe toh aaisa hi lagtha hai ? haina?

Maan can't stop thinking about her'.

It's better to put an end to this''.

Else he will go mad''

He takes his jeep and heads to Dev's house''

He has to get that girl out of that mess now'..

Geet bhi ussi tarf aathi hai'..

Maan is happy to find her'..

Accha hua ki woh yahi milgayi''

Warna Maan Dev ke gahr ke andar kaise jaatha/

He calls her'.

Geet looks back'..it's the same guy'.

Ye yahan kyun aaya hai?

Kahin phirse mujhe doondhke aaya toh nahi?

Geet's heart beat raises'.no no no'.ye dhak dhak Maan ke liya nahi'.

Ye toh dar ka dhadkan hai''.

Babaji, iss bar mein isske haath mein nahi lagnewali'..

Aap pls meri madat karo, aur uss Dusht Danav se mujhe bacho'.

Geet starts to run'..

Maan: rukho, Meera, shit, isska naam bhi nahi patha, rukho

Geet Maan ko dekhkke aur tez bhaagthi'.

Kal ke incident ke badh Geet ko Maan pe kaise barosa hoga?

She starts running faster inside the woods'.

Maan gets out of his jeeps and chases her'..

Geet comes across a well'.

She thinks that it's better to die than to get into his hands'.

She jumps into the well'.

Geet Handa haina? Ussko tehelna nahi aatha''.

Ab kya hoga?

Geet pani mein tadap rahi hai'.

Maan looks at her drowning'..

Maan to the rescue'.

He too jumps into the well'''

Luckily iss well pe steps hai'.

Warna Maan ko superman banna padtha''

Maan saves her but she is falls unconscious in his arms''

After all the running and chasing she is already exhausted''

Issiliye behosh ho gayi'.

Maan carries her to the jeep and takes her home'..

Geet hosh mein aathi hai''

She slowly opens her eyes and looks around'

Wahi purani dialogue'..mein kahan hoon?

She is lying on a bed'

Ye mein kahan aagayi?

Ek baat toh pacca hai, ye swarg toh nahi lagtha aur mein abhi bhi zinda hoon

Shukar hai babaji ki'

Geet tumne toh bina soche samje jaldhi mein babaji ko thank kardhi'.

Teek se dekho abhi bhi tum katthre se bahar nahi ''

Geet just turns to the other side'.

Maan is sleeping there'.

After saving Geet he took her to his room'.

She is running high temperature'.

Ab issko kahin aur kaise lekhe jayega?

Aur itni raat ko hospital bhi nahi jaasakthe, ye Delhi thodi nahi, ye Hoshairpur hai'

Yahan paas mein koi doctor bhi nahi hai'.

So he has changed her wet clothes & made her warm'.

Maan bhi tak gaya toh woh bhi sogaya'.

Geet: baabji, mein yahan? Isske saath?

Geet tries to get up'but she couldn't move, she is so weak'

She looks at her dress'.

It's not her dress, aur ye kissne badla aur kyun?

Kahi issne mere saath?

Aaise sochthe hi Geet bahut dar jaathi'.

Geet: babaji ye mere saath kya ho gaya? ab toh mein yahan ek pal bhi nahi rukh sakthi

Isska bhai toh isse kahin behthar hai'.

Ussne toh zabardasthi shadhi kiya tha, issko dekho'.

Ye kaise aadmi hai? apne bhai ki Dulhan ke saath koi aaise kaise kar saktha?

Geet bade mushkil se wahan se utne ki koshish karthi''

She gets off his hold somehow and gets up'.

She hits the glass mug and it falls down'..

Maan wakes up'.he gets closer to her'..

Geet is very afraid'.

Maan: hare, ye kya kar arhi ho? tumne dekha nahi, yahan koi soraha hai, aadi raat ko bhootni ki tarah kya dekh rahi ho? chupc chap leit jao

He pushes her back'..

Geet bahut dar jaathi'.

Ye phir se? bechari ki mann mein kaise kaise khyaal aathe hai'..

Maan: ab tum utgayi toh

Geet: toh?

Maan Geet ke maathe pe haath rakhkke dekhtha'

Abhi bhi pukar hai'..

Geet: haath mat lagao

Maan: mein haath nahi lagatha toh tum abhi zinda nahi rehthi

Geet: baabji aapne mujhe kyun bachaya?
Maan: tere babaji ne tujhe nahi bachaya, MSK ne tujhe bachaya hai, samji?
Geet: aaise jeene se marna hi behthar hai
Maan: tumme marna hai toh kahin aur jaakke mar jaana, mere samne nahi, samji
Maan takes some medicines'.
Maan: ye lo, khalo

Geet: mujhe nahi chahiye

Maan: toh tum aaise nahi manogi?

Geet: tummare jaise janwar ki madat se jeene se behthar mein mar hi jaathi

Maan: tum toh'' tummari itni himmat?

Maan holds her shoulder '..

Maan: tujhe kya lagtha? Mein yahan tere saath picnic karne aaya hoon, woh mujhse ek galthi oh gayi, issiliye

Geet: galthi? Ho gayi?

Maan: haan, ab chup chap ye dawa lelo, mujhe janwar banne ke liye majboor mat karo, samji?

Geet turanth dawa lethi aur chup chap sojaathi'

Next morning'..morning nahi it's already noon'

Geet wakes up'she feels better now'.

She looks for Maan'.he is not there'.

Maan kahin bahar gaya hai'.

Yahi achcha moka hai yahan se bhaagne ki'.

Geet aaisa sochkke chup chupkke neeche jaathi'.

Neeche koi kitchen mein kaam kar raha hai'.

She just moves quietly to the front door'.

She tries to open it'.woh toh kulla hi hai'.

She gets out'.closes the door'.

Geet looks around'.agar kissi ne dekh liya toh?

Woh dhere dhere bahar chalthi'.

Tabhi koi peeche se aakke ussko pakadtha'..

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