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maneet2086

@maneet2086

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#351

Thnx for the update. Three in a row! Loved the update! Maan cares so much about Geet and I think Geet has to start fallin for him too! I like Maan! And feel sorry for Geets mum she is so loyal in her relationship with her dad! Waiting for next! Update sooonnn 😳

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Pratima Singh

@Rocks.Dhara

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#352

awesome update...👏👏👏

OMG this is becoming addictive...the more i read...the more m craving...!!!

awesome work sweetie...🤗

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#353

😆hi dear ,first let me tell you ,me done with poem. but post jab karugi when i m online from pc . as you know mobile is... , chal rahne de. waise poem is from maan point of view. and about update, yaar kal kaha gayi thi,pahle yeh bata,i was lii refresfijng it in every halgf hour . ab aayegi, ab aaygi . itna time,main sukh kar kaata ho gayi😉 wow update s too gud, chalo story move hui ,as body main rection hone start hue, i knew chi chi me , but what to do .indono ko dekh to mujhe umeed hi khatam ho rahi thi. yaar yeh to hand shake tak bhi nhi pahuche , and in the end ,don't tell me ke iske parents ka ghar l.a main hai,so they are going their as iys tje same plce which he want to sell but baad main when our sweert get us par fida ho jaayegi to idea drop hoda. kuch jyaada ho gaya. poem kal post kar dugi..wasie aur update milega kya.

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Micky

@micky11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#354

all three parts were amazing

Maan getting no response from geet and annoyed

Geet has no feelings so far so could not understand Maans view

Maan has changed himself for Geet still Geet compare him with her father.

her heart cried for her father but mind says dont do that

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#355

part-10

wow lovely emotional update te way geet ki family and te way she is feeling sad for her mom and te way her dad suffering from cancer and going die was so emotional.. te way geet crying and arnav consoling her was so lovely.. te way merry ki behavoir yes she is trap by her own hubby i think so.. te way my maan calling, his geet hearing voice he knwo she is some problem and cuming to her home was so lovely emotional.. i love te update

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Maansexi

@Maansexi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#356

This is suparb and too good

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aali

@18mypride

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#357

wow ...what a timing..i logged in and I could see ur updates woh bhi with sweet updates.
oh sad geet's father has cancer .her mum is really nice .. kids are awesome.
oops maan ka gussa aur shikayath bhi ..
ooo.. nice geet explain her absence to maan ..so cute ..walking by is really going well.. loved it!
ahahn geet came to visit maan woh uske ghar .. bhai .. kuch hota hai.
muaah muaah .. safi u rock!

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Love2read

@Love2read

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Posted: 12 years ago

#358

lovely update...

feels like maan is in pain...😭
his words show he wants someone to love him , a family.

it was really good going that geet visited maan...❤️

Waiting...

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Waiting for next update...

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#359

part-11a

wow lovely emotional update.. te way geet ki worry and te way her life. te way she thinking abt my maan was so lovely.. te way my maan waiting for her and shouting at her in his restless and te way geet felt something in his touch was so lovely.. te way geet ki outburst and my maan felt hurt thinking she is not sharing her problems with him and te way geet feeling disgust to be friend with him was so lovely..i love te update