Originally posted by: sam111111
abhi tak baatein shuru hi nahi ho rahi hai sab hi hello may hi time nikhal rahein hai😆
acho koi baat nahi ... ham hi shuru karthe hain... ummm...yeh bataoo kal bhaag kyu gayi???😡
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Originally posted by: sam111111
abhi tak baatein shuru hi nahi ho rahi hai sab hi hello may hi time nikhal rahein hai😆
Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
acho koi baat nahi ... ham hi shuru karthe hain... ummm...yeh bataoo kal bhaag kyu gayi???😡
Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
acho koi baat nahi ... ham hi shuru karthe hain... ummm...yeh bataoo kal bhaag kyu gayi???😡
Priya darling...patch-up ho gaya kya...???😉😆Kaun si shift hai aaj..???😉😆
Priya darling...patch-up ho gaya kya...???😉😆Kaun si shift hai aaj..???😉😆
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The Downpour... Part 37
(Heyy friends, A little change I'hv done. I have changed the song which was in precap. There is a reason for it as this song which I have selected has something which was most needed for the situation. Please hear this song, it's so beautiful and most romantic one with magical words. )
Song: Chup tum raho (Film: Iis raat ki subah nahi)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6CDV2zueScw
Maan walks behind her and stopped very closer, keeping a hair's gap between them. He caressed her hairs gently, smelled them. He stole her ear-ring and shifted hairs little, brought his face near and nuzzled nose in her cheek. Geet shut eyes in anticipation, waiting what he will do further when felt, his one hand crawling over her waist from behind and stopped on stomach and he tugged her to him. Her back touched his front, she shivered with the intimacy.
Maan slowly removed hairs which was falling on her ears and whispered in his husky voice,
"Geet, Dadi wants me to marry you" and smirked.
She looked him back in reflex, shocked. She was not able to believe did she hear right! Did he really say what her ears heard!! No' No I must be hearing wrong, it was my illusion only!!!''
Her big curious eyes were looking him, waiting for him to repeat his words, to proof she did hear correct. Her lips wanted to speak something but it felt sealed. She wanted to move her body but her body felt numb, senseless. Everything seemed stopped and blurred but the only thing she could see was him. She was feeling him around, everywhere. His face, his eyes was keeping her hypnotized and his lips, which had uttered those words just a moment back which had taken away her every single sign of existence and now, she was feeling herself perished, without ability to understand or think anything.
Maan heart was thudding rapidly, that he could hear sound of his own heartbeats. He was curious for her answer, her response. What would she say, will she become angry! Will she accept it or will she break our friendship!! When he saw her unmoved, disappointment started covering over his mind. He had kept their relation on stake, had taken chance, risk but he had to deal with this situation, anyhow or somehow. He had to make her realize her own feeling toward him now. It was the chance he could utilize perfectly.
He walked away from her, turned back.
"Geet Dadi wants me to marry you' ''
Geet heart started dancing in joy. Yes..yes.. yes.. she did hear him right. Yes she heard right he was talking about their marriage. She could not believe, she was not certain why she was happy!! Why she wanted to jump and dance. Why she was feeling like she had won the most beautiful and precious treasure of this world. She was ready to say yes..
She shocked with this realization. "Oh Babaji.. What I am thinking!!!!! how It can be possible!!!! No Babaji.. We are friends only. I can't think him like this, he is my boss!!''
But her heart defended her own thought. She was very much lost in her new realization. She was surprised, shocked, amazed, stunned, and uncertain and what not' She had became insane with the messed thoughts of her mind and unexpected wishes and hopes.. Dreams of her heart.
Geet was so lost in her unexpected thoughts when Maan turned to her and said..
"Yes Geet Dadi wants to make you her daughter-in-law but..
Geet breathe stuck in throat.
"But I can't marry you because I love someone else!!!''
Geet eyes widen in shock. Her immature dreams died before to take birth.
Maan watched the change of expression of her face. He was not sure how much his words affected her but he wanted to make her see his love for the girl, who was his life. He wanted to open his heart before her to see the ocean of love for her, but indirectly. He wanted to make her desperate, passionate for his love and that, he was doing.
"Geet I want to see if my going away from your life, affects you or not. Do you fear with slipping me away from your hand? I am not sure what you feel for me but today, I promise you that you herself would definitely realize what you feel for me''
He walked toward the door which would open to a small garden. He opened it and let cold wind comes inside. It gave pricking shiver to Geet who was yet stood at same place, without moving a bit.
"Geet I love her so much that nothing can be more in limit then my love for her. She is my life. She is breath for me and beats of my heart. I can't live without her.'
Geet eyes filled with uninvited tears. She was surprised with her tears, why she was crying!! Whatever the reason was but it was painful, so hurting. She could not handle this pain and turned back, hiding her silent cry.
"Geet, will you hear how much I love her, what is my dreams which I have seen for us!!''
She heard Maan was asking her something. She had no time to cry. He was her friend and she will take part in his happiness. She turned to him and smiled. She nodded.
Maan came to her and dragged toward garden. It was yet drizzling outside. She hid her face, turned to side but Maan held her face and turned to him.
"Geet, can I ask you to become my love for today? I want to show you what I feel for her. You are my friend and I can pour my secrets before you without any hesitation that I can't do with anyone else. Please''
Geet was not sure what to say. She was yet not understanding as why, she was feeling miserable, hurt, pain seeing love for another girl in his eyes. Why my heart aching .. why!!!'' She wanted answer.
"Geet'' He whispered, he was waiting..
"But Maan I' ''
He kept finger on her lips.. "Shhh!!''
Chup Tum Raho Chup Ham Rahen
khamoshi Ko Khamoshi Se Zindagi Ko Zindagi Se Baat Karne do
He rested his forehead on hers. ", Let me feel her Geet. She is here.. ''
Geet looked him in disbelief. "What he mean she is here!!!' She looked around.
Maan smiled "Don't find her around Geet, she lives here, in my heart.''
He held her hand and kept in on his heart. She felt his fast heartbeats. It gave current to her body, and strange sensation irked her.
He brought her hand up to her mouth and kissed her palm softly. She felt uneasy moved away but could not run out from there. Maan held her Dupatta from behind, stopping her to go. She clutched her weirdly palpitating heart over Dupatta which was equally wet as her crying eyes.
He walks to her meeting eyes with hers. He walks behind and placed Dupatta on her head like veil and turns her face to him holding her chin. He rested his wet face on her cheek sideway and closed eyes feeling her close. His both hands rested on shoulder and then slipped down stroking her arms passionately yet gently and mingled his fingers between hers. He made her hug herself and he tugged her in his arms, letting her face fell back, on his shoulder and hugged her from back, keeping her engulf in him.
Aankhon Mein Kho Jaaye Aankhen Bole Haathon Se Haath
Baahon Mein Chupkar Saanson Se Jaise Dole Raat
Ungaliyo Ko Ungaliyo Se Mausamon Ko Shokhiyon Se Baat Karne Do
Small water drops were helping her to hide her tears. She wanted to be like this till eternity. Don't know why she did not want to leave this place between his arms forever, wanted to spend her life here only.
Maan opened her eyes and released her. He made her turn toward him. Even in this rain, he could see, she was crying. Her eyes were red. It sieved his heart. He was happy to see her responding on his attempt, but never wanted to make her cry. He wiped her tears alike wiping water drops from her face. She closed her eyes feeling pleasure and smiled slightly. Maan kissed her forehead, he was happy. He could see, she loved him. Her not running away from his intimacy was proving her love. He took her in his arms, hugged her, keeping her head to his heart, let her hear the love filled heartbeats, which was beating only for her but it gave Geet wrong message. She knew it was not her place to live here, inside his heart. She moved back, feeling discomfited. She looked down to hide her storming emotions.
"Do you want to know who she is, hm?''
She heard his husk in ears. "No, I don't want to, I will not!!'' She wanted to scream but no words could come out from mouth. She nodded slowly. Her red eyes were hurting Maan which she was forcefully trying to hide.
"Her name is hidden in my words Geet, just hear it through your heart..
Honthon Par Honthon Se Likhe, Bin Shabdon Ke Geet
Dharati Se Ambar Tak Guunje Jismon Kaa Sangeet
Bekhudi Ko Bekhudi Se Aashiqui Ko Aashiqui Se Baat Karne
But in her own mystified state, she did not give heed to his words, which had told her name only..
He held her chin and raised her face up to him. She was shutting eyes, when found not able to meet it with him. Maan paused for a while then neared face toward her. He gently stroked his wet lips over her moisten one and rested there for a moment, then moved back to see, her response. She was breathing heavily, it was unexpected happening with her. It was filling her heart with desire and dreams but when she thought, it couldn't be fulfilled her heart cried and it came out openly in form of tears. Maan kissed them, drunk them along with rain drops which were resting on her cheeks.
She cried more, she wanted to run away. She moved back, walked back for few steps. She could not handle more. His passion was increasing her longing, carve for his love, she tried to run when Maan held her hand. He took out her Ear-ring from pocket and kept in her palm and said,
"Geet, it's her. Seeing this you herself will know who she is. Who..''
But before he could complete his words, she runs away.
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She was running through corridor, she descended stairs, wanted to leave this place as soon as, wanted to go far from him. She did not have seen what Maan had given in her hand. She reached to door and wore her shoes and was to step out when stopped by Dadi,
"Geet beta rukiye''
Geet wiped her face instantly and turned to SD.
"Where were you Geet, I was worried for you!!''
Geet was not sure what to give answer. Her mind was not working.
"Did you have lost ??'' SD said.
Geet nodded, thanking Babaji. " Wo Dadima, its became dark, I should go home. My friend will be worrying for me''
SD offered for dinner but Geet denied. SD was wondering why Geet was looking tensed but then shoved off thinking, maybe she was feeling nervous being here, for the first time. She offered to take mansion car and called driver. Though Geet tried to refuse but SD forcefully made her ready and Geet comes out, waited for car.
A car comes and stopped before her. Geet sat inside on back seat and driver started it. Car reached out of mansion. Geet looked her closed hand but could not get courage to open it and see, what was inside? Tears were not stopping, pouring out from her eyes. Driver adjusted front mirror and saw her reflection through it, his heart was cursed him to do it with his Geet ..
Precap : "Where is my ear-ring??? '' She saw she was wearing only one ear ring, started to search for other one..
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