The Locket (7) MG FF, THREAD 8 link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 85

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


Uttar gayi...🤗
Wo bhi tera shair hi tha...😃😃

han I know n remember k I sent yew that 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yes I know I'm second... But I willingly gave my place to someone special. How generous of me 😳😉
Running: Indeed a run from a lot many things, be it due to own defenses crumbling, own desires bringing out all the passion suppressed, or the need so huge and painful that its borne and running becomes the only option in a way to preserve own self and your love from the bindings of past shackles. 👏 Very well put together by you.

The update started with a bang from both D-N perspectives. There were some kind of stats mentioned there that you used intelligently to show how both are trying hard to fight a lost battle of awareness, attraction and love. 👏👏

She projects and wants self to believe that she indeed has no complains in life for now. But how ironic she herself proves it to be by stating that 28days 12hours time period between her longing and carving for him. Whereas Dev is fighting his own ego and wound of rejection so hard yet succumbs to ti all when he states in positive the 99.99% with it being the most negative as there is the minuscule but very potent and strong 0.01% still there that is certainly driving him nuts and will cause all his defenses to crumble.

The lift again forms a connecting link between these two distressed souls. 😳 That craving, emptiness, need for hsi exclusive and passionate care and love and cherished moments of his proposal to her was so well depicted by showing how without him she feels so enclosed and suffocated in that lift. Last time the lift was the one that brought them face-face with their own prejudices and ego but this time the lift brought them face-face with another aspect of themselves that being longing and craving and high alert senses about the awareness of the other's presence. Last time she felt his presence to be that of a pervert but this time she craved for his presence, last time she slapped him because she felt he was staring at her but this time she was staring and having her own fill of all his features. 😳👏👏

And then that accidental touch and almost embrace 😳 😳😳 it was the catalyst for their own defenses to crumble later in that conference room scene. 👏

I liked how you showed Naina's own change of perspectives and viewing of situations. A girl who before was safeguarding her self from feeling attached to anyone not even her roomie now wants to feel Dev's presence or even a glimpse towards her. She who didn't care of others opinion but just stuck to her own work and discipline was relating his absence in lief to how everyone else who were supposed to be working in her team also left her to do it all alone. he has become more than what she asked for in her life that now all her views are so tuned to what would be when he was the axis. she now even wants those small joys in life and beauty around her that is visible to her when she craves actually for him. Her appreciation for life and wanting those joys shows that somewhere Dev has surely managed to make a crack in her shell unknowingly but has left an impact for sure. 👏👏

Dev too has come a long way from his initial care free days. A total contrast to his earlier image. He who was a credit chor and dependent on K tag is now acknowledging and admitting Naina's influence on him to be a good and string responsible leader and also that her disciplinarian nature has helped him grow a lot professionally. I loved this subtle change you showed very meaningfully. 👏👏 He who didn't bother about someone else was now craving for a wish from her like a kid craving for his sweet.

Loved that symbolism of her being trapped in between wall and him...and then realizing the feel of both heaven and hell with his presence and absence... with the connecting line... "sometimes there is only one person on earth for whom you live, the one person who can make life or shatter it" 😳👏

All her fight crumbles when he tells her to wish for hsi death and she takes that one step towards him that breaks his bounds on his own passion.

But yet she feels she needs to run away from him as she fears her past will harm him and maybe she will be indeed the cause of his harm if she remains with him. Still unknowingly she does make him a part of her sorrows and fears by running away as he still follows her not letting her escape as knight to his princess. 😉

Oh ho a new entry Suraj...?? lets see what he brings in their lives now. 😃

Waiting for the next 😊



Edited by Onir - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mera bhi 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

han I know n remember k I sent yew that 😃

tera milna
pal do pal ka...
phir words bhool gayi...😆
🤗 Nauri
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Posted: 12 years ago
wohoo!!

i am first...

dhinchak dhinchak..

punching onir.!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetkj

wohoo!!


i am first...

dhinchak dhinchak..

punching onir.!!

Wo toh mene tujhe first aane diya 😛😛
😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetkj

i need to read TSYH :'(

Jab time milega aaram se padh lena 😃

waise bhi mene bahut kam updates diye hai so chill 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

Wo toh mene tujhe first aane diya 😛😛

😆😆


yeah right.!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

Jab time milega aaram se padh lena 😃


waise bhi mene bahut kam updates diye hai so chill 😉


kyaaa 😲

abhi tak complete nahi hua... it was an SS, right???
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aur nahi toh kya 😉😆

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