The Locket (7) MG FF, THREAD 8 link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 23

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Posted: 12 years ago
I-star took geet's ...matlab maan's(dev's) shirt and coverlet...too bad...on top of it dev in vest and tracks...kahin yoh black tho nahi...unfair...still...bechara ladka aur kya pehnta...haina babaji...!! but loved it all...you made this dev-I-star combination as adorable as maaneet...hatsoff...!! their first dreamy kiss...literally...I am sure dev would have dreamt her reaction in same level too...😆 waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
loved the way they played with kids
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update...the sight of a handsome guy chasing around a child is actually heart warming...guys always looks cute when playing with children...if she had seen him at the airport first then when she had seen him in the elevator didn't she recognize him before slapping him for the first time???that part is confusing???😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
now that was so cute...
Dev kissed & got a return gift too 😆
Roop tera mastana yaad agaya...
par end main Dev... bachke rehna rebaba...
ab haati bhola hai tho haati tuhje masal degi...
waiting for more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful Awesome Update love it from heart
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Posted: 12 years ago




toh dono thoda bahut attracted toh ho rahe hai...kuch toh hua hai...kuch ho raha hai...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr the lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...






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Posted: 12 years ago
i lost counts of slaps dev has received from NT
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was so beautiful update avi . Dev is surely a charmer , me falling for him. the scenes both were playing with children separately was so serene to watch . its all about the phase every man and woman desire to do , where all happiness lies with ur children the most innocents who brings out undiluted love from ur heart . loved that scene . eyes welled up to c Nt so vulnerable "der is no space for her prince in whithe horse"in her life . All dreams r crushed under brutual past .
last scene was not done intentional but brought back dev in crossfire
continue soon avi ,great going .
Edited by hermoso - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Barsaat ki ek raat
Dev ke armaano aur Naintara ki nazaakat ki saugaat

Nature plays its part perfectly
Dev-Tara strangled due to landslide
Seek refuge from a lady and
Discover some unknown facets about each other
Destiny paving its path gradually
😊

Loved the way you portrayed Dev's longing for NT
him getting lost in a totally new and rare trait of NT
finally her mask unveiling
and Dev loosing his heart 😛

NT too trying hard to keep safe distance from Dev
His presence affecting her
she is unknowingly getting involved with him
but such are ways of heart which rules ones being😳

Their first meeting at the airport was like a faint hint of the upcoming storm
which swap both in the worlds which otherwise they would refuse to delve
Dev's charm and emotional side stirred unknown emotions in NT
and Dev clueless and curious to witness a girl who just ran away from the airport😳

Two different people two different POV's but bonded with a thin string of ...😳

The last part was a complete mix of emotions, confusion, attraction, concern, gratitude and finally anger
Superbly put down Avi
just loved their moments in the room
and the final hit🤢
Bechaara Dev boora phasa elephant ne trunk utha di😉😆

Ab kya hoga😲

Awesome update Avi
enjoyed it to the core
Simply Superb!!!!!
😃

Sowiieee for being late again
But I love u
🤗

Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
great updtae dear :)

superb :)

dev ko chantta padh gya kya ????heheheh

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