Avi firstly so sorry for delaying the comment here... as you know I had read this part on the day you updated but then just couldn't come here to comment again. So sorry... really sorry.
Anyways without wasting time I better get to the update.
Life isn't a bed of roses... 👏 True and you proved it well through this update. These two love birds are still in the very raw phase with teenage confusion, hesitation, resistance, confusion & admiration needing assurance. And reading this part I'm sure their journey towards love & togetherness forever won't be a bed of roses .. but I'm also optimistic & believe in your vision that they will journey together through the ups and downs of life and finally find solace in each other.
His enthusiasm and anticipation of giving her the rose and her reaction to it was so influential that I felt an un-describable happiness reading his quest & joy in getting it all done for pleasing her. He settles in for Black shirt just for her is so sweet of him ... but I feel with this speed he will have to but too many black shirts and keep it in hsi wardrobe as he will be needing them in this journey of pleasing her... Not that I mind it at all... 😳
His way of handling the rose tucking it safely in his bag and rehearsing different ways and scenarios of giving it to her was so adorable and I really loved his sweet gesture.
Kicking queen and her gadha... 🤣 too good... loved it and I miss her ❤️
Geet has a new battle to deal with. Love brings happiness but also brings in a lot of questions pain in the start. She has responsibilities and goals set for her Darji and her own betterment & o tend to the future.. that she can't afford to waver but then who can make your heat understand that ... that too when the man in question is such chivalrous and humanly too good to avoid. She is resisting him with all her might but then the more you resist the more harder you fail and fall for it; as for resisting it so hard you need to remember that you have to resist. I just love this Geet she is too good for this world and truly a Bambi. 😳 She felt bad for rejecting his gesture & his true feelings that was budding and blossoming in him and in her too by confessing it indirectly through that blushing rose... Because his own goodness and sweet memories have enraptured her completely - one who cares for hsi Daadi, loves and plays with small babies with ease and goes out of his way to help a girl reach her room by carrying her all the way to her balcony. 😳
Maan I really felt bad for him when the professors were playing history and botany with his delicate rose... (thanks for that link,... it sure did gave a lot of info...) but finally the English professor stole the show and unknowingly played cupid for these two souls by actually putting forward Maan's heart desires through that rose... 😳
Geet coming back to hiding wanting to treasure the rose with her was so sweet and actually let the tiny flame of hope and love to remain enlightened in Maan's heart... beautiful way of conceptualizing it. 👏 Indeed not a bed of roses for them but then still all is not lost and there's hope still there. 😳
Nakul...🤣 Bechara... 😆 Jiji and GG ke beech phas gaya ... neem ka paani kam that ki ab Maan use "woh" type ka samjhne laga gaya... 😆 upar se free mein joothe bhi khane pade... So sad. But why did he come in between Maan's such beautiful dream of being fed by the delicate fingers of his lady Love GG... 😳
And the song ... "ek ladki ko dekha toh..." Oh I loved that song.. actually I love all the songs of that movie but with this part a beautiful memory is added to that song for me here onward... 😳 Thanks for such awesome writing... 🤗
Continue soon... and hopefully next time itna late nahi hoga... 😊
Edited by Onir - 12 years ago
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