One Shot - Mr. Olive Green Tee - Page 3

Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj

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i will agree with both Deepa and Hermoso..

what what what??😆😆😆

we want another part.

ohk i loved how she described her best friend as the best girl and then herself...

this used to happen with me.. i usedto feel same about my roomie- nature, eyes, face, attitude and in the end sigh i m not even a 1%.

last line which girl not only gd knows our maggie also knows this answer so reply fast..😃😃😃

Bingo on beautiful bestie part and I would leave where his eyes trailed to your imagination since I don't know it myself😆

*stands on top of the roof to scream "WHO WAS THE GIRL HE WAS STARING AT"*

Originally posted by: -jaanleva-

*stands on top of the roof to scream "WHO WAS THE GIRL HE WAS STARING AT"*

Gah I hate cliffhangers! There better be a part 2 or else mujh se bura koi nahin hoga

Ok I will confess something...



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Your username reminds me of a song.😆

I want to eat olives now! 🤔

Hey shikha,
it was really awesome!!!
Till the time i finished reading..my heart was beating so fast in anticipation..that what nxt..? Whom was that gaze for..? But u stoped at the wrong point yaar..
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Beautifully written..
How she got smitten by that mr. Olive green tee.. Stealing glances.. Feeling of being watched.. Than realising that may be it wasnt directed to u.. Than underestimating urself.. Specially in the presence of a beautiful friend..
It happens with many.. I too hav experienced it!
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Wanna know if that olive green tee was interested in her or her bestie!
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Can we hav the second part..plzz..😊

Hi maggie,

Do u know what i like the most about ur os... the nameless characters...one can easily relate ownself or dear ones or even a known face with them.this is the very kind of story which while reading one can feel the tug on the corner of lips and a warm feeling developing around the heart.

Sayantani

Originally posted by: mishtiritu

That was superb...

but me scratching my head... huh...

Would we get a next part..????

Ya it was end...

Why she thinks abt herself like that...???

She thinks like that because according to her that is the truth.😆
I didn't mean to play with words but well...not everyone of us are pretty to the point that, it would dazzle the other person and my heroine is one of us😊

I am not sure about next part but yup thanks for reading!🤗

Awww...

Originally posted by: gudmeet

i and he

and the

olive green tee

how beautifully u captured few moments in a food court of a mall

whenever u write something among friends it's really amazing

I really wish that u write something like dil chahta hai or 3 idiots showing strong friendship bond among girls

u r really brilliant in this one also dear

( among so many other writing expertise )

loved this casual os

but whatever comes from u is always welcome dear😊

Thank you Gudmeet but you trust me so much that I feel like scratching my head😆

Umm strong friendship...well that is there in any story of mine so intricately that I am starting to feel that I am getting repetitive. May be I should try betrayal between friends once😆

And thank you so much for being supportive and sweet like always Gudmeet. A virtual sloppy kiss for you.😆

Originally posted by: hermoso

that was beautiful and cute os .

Thank you!🤗

Originally posted by: prema_ks

Simple and Beautiful OS. Will be very happy if we get an extension. 😊

Thanks for the sweet response but I can't promise any sequel as of now...in future maybe😊