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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: .Maggie.



Ok I will confess something...



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Your username reminds me of a song.😆



Injustice 😔

But you are the writer so the fate of the story is in your hands. It's wonderful with or without a part 2 😳

P.S. which song?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: .Maggie.


I agree with your sentiments too. But uh.. did anyone ever tell you that you are a persuasive speaker?😆
[/QUOTEwill take as compliment woh bhi meri sabse favourite writer se 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I 'm here again... 😳 ...hehehe olive green...awww...noodles missed u eheee 😭 ...em doing
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
amazing dear
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj

😆

i will agree with both Deepa and Hermoso..

what what what??😆😆😆

we want another part.

ohk i loved how she described her best friend as the best girl and then herself...

this used to happen with me.. i usedto feel same about my roomie- nature, eyes, face, attitude and in the end sigh i m not even a 1%.

last line which girl not only gd knows our maggie also knows this answer so reply fast..😃😃😃

ME TOO WANT A PART TWO
AT LEAST TO KNOW WHO HE WAS LOOKING AT






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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
what was that!!
its felt cute os but yet incomplete can u plz add few more parts to it

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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: .Maggie.



She thinks like that because according to her that is the truth.😆
I didn't mean to play with words but well...not everyone of us are pretty to the point that, it would dazzle the other person and my heroine is one of us😊

I am not sure about next part but yup thanks for reading!🤗


Point hai...
Ya that is one of the truth yaar... most common gals think like this gal only...
And It was my pleasure reading it... 😊🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: jazzerette

Baah!!! Every story has a hero *remembers a certain someone who had once said the same only to be drenched thoroughly in rain* ...one only has to keep the heart open and faith strong. Just a dream or two alive.

The olive tee is a hero of a fic-let!!! Yeah!!! Only he may not be the hero of "baby's" life. Baby should cheer up though. One day there will be a pair of eyes focused only on her...olive tee or no tee at all.



I I love you like a love song Baby😆

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EgT_us6AsDg[/YOUTUBE]

You do know how to tug at heart strings and play guitar with them. You mentioned Just a dream? Can I kill you please?😆 I feel like reading it all over again. Is that even normal I say?

Jazz, I am going to buy an olive tee in memoir🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
is next part coming?

i love the way you write the simplest of things in life

loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Awesum and lovely os. Can we hav part 2.

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