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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#221

lovely poem dear so now he wants to marry her lets see how he is going to succeed

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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

Dazzler

+ 11

Posted: 12 years ago

#222

Part 3 was awesome, Geet is quite daring and Maan has taken an interest in her despite having only seeing her eyes. Grasping the historical genre slowly 😆

Continue soon. 😊

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Mitu

@Mituag

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: ...Tanya-K...
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Part 3 was awesome, Geet is quite daring and Maan has taken an interest in her despite having only seeing her eyes. Grasping the historical genre slowly 😆</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Continue soon.😊</font>

Thanks tanya and yes in history manly king took interest in attitute ... every impossiable things attract them.. about beauty almost evevy princes is beautiful one but their nature differentiate them if any one want to make her place inbetween many queens than she have to a fire who attract king like moth

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sona rai

@sona-rai

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#224

awesome teaser,

waiting for update yar.

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Bhanu

@Cherishh

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#225

Part-1

Maan and King is such a nice feel to imagine and he holding that aura with anger, sterness, fearing others is cool, rudeness and ego the power really increases that😳 but he capturing all other states is showing the power and his abilities

King and his 20 queens, well I was expecting around 5 to 6, but 20 defo a 😲😆, but I guess its after capturing states or some understanding between kings to stop war and all, well wanted to know😳

oh..the patrani is egoistic and dominating..me wondering with Geet's entry how things will be around..loved this Maan's intro a lot yaar.

Part-2

wowww...loved to this daring rajkumari Geet..her valor is worth to be praised

So finally Maanveer won Rajbhumi too, but yes as Geet said he should have respect for other kings too rather than treating them worse than slaves and forgetting all his rules and ruling as he wish

but Now with Geet coming back to regain her palace and fight and stand for her people and family is so very interesting...am so excited reading this yaar.

Part-3

The way you presented this update is marvelous, its just like watching it..I thoroughly enjoyed it.

One side, the kind celebrating his success and proud of it and the other side the Rajkumari all set to teach him a less and teach him some respect is so amazing

Even when caught she showing her strength and being strong is awesome and the soldiers of Delhi just scared and afraid with her aura and stand is beautifully brought about

OH MY my my...the fearlessness, determination Geet showed was great and Maanveer being totally amused, smirking and yet attracted with her beauty of eyes, dare and her desire to fight against him was so very good

The song just added to the beauty of the update...it bring that feel of completeness to it

OMG the teaser, so beautifully written dear...i loved them a lot, guess its Maan's pov for sure and talking about insult finally he is in her magic😉 and got to see his match if not best but still hard to beat...looking forward for more of them

I am really enjoying this story a lot, it has for me a desire and content to live those old telugu movies of rajas and the addition of music to it bringing the essence of something of this era...giving a feel of watching and imagining is spot on...and to top it all your essence, dream is just add that charm which is making me hook it all the more...oh I am cursing myself why haven't find time to read the moment it has been updated, omg I am in love with it as I am with all your work

Glad you are providing the translations as I was not able to get some words of it..thanks for that, but me amazed with ur this talent, u r too good at it.

Thanks for giving such a wonderful story to enjoy and live it..I am looking forward to it and the teaser is just very introguing...so please bring the update real soon.

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maanshi

@maanshi

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

interesting teaser

maanveer want to merry geetanjali without force 😉

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Mitu

@Mituag

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#227

READ TO UNDERSTAND STORY WITH DEPTH

NOTE AND INFORMATION

1. I AM NOT USING ANY particular surname IN THIS FF SO DON'T USE RAJPUT FOR GEET AS I WANT TO FREE MY MIND SO I IMAGINE A PLACE Rajbhumi and will call her 'viragana".

2. almost all king behavior is same their rituals their education and style but scene is always different as like padmni and jodha both are brave but they both are different their story is different.

3. here both are hindu so this ff is no near to jodha akber.

4. this is not a revenge story also.

5. there will most of the scene will belong to inside palace of maanveer as i didn't like war scene so much.

5. i know by mistake in banner i gave name as rajput but ignore it.

6. i know maan 20 wifes left u in big shock but if i am writing this period drama than this is a important part.

7. read with your own wish and comment also only if you like it but silent readers plz dont ask question from me and pm me or demand for updat as this is only my loyal reader right.

Thank you

update in night

CHAPTER 1

CHAPTER 2

CHAPTER 3

i had so many exception with this story hope my like again reached as my other FF

Edited by BULBUL.A - 12 years ago