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priyanka

@doublecross

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#231

just read
and i loved it
amazing work
yet another amazing story
from a gifted writer
please continue soon
waiting eagerly

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Dona

@Donnaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#232

sab samajh gaye mohi

update k liye waiting

update soon

n mere likes ko maaf kardena

net marr gaya hai

so like kaam nai karing

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maanshi

@maanshi

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: BULBUL.A
READ TO UNDERSTAND STORY WITH DEPTH

NOTE AND INFORMATION

1. I AM NOT USING ANY particular surname IN THIS FF SO DON'T USE RAJPUT FOR GEET AS I WANT TO FREE MY MIND SO I IMAGINE A PLACE Rajbhumi and will call her 'viragana".

2. almost all king behavior is same their rituals their education and style but scene is always different as like padmni and jodha both are brave but they both are different their story is different.

3. here both are hindu so this ff is no near to jodha akber.

4. this is not a revenge story also.

5. there will most of the scene will belong to inside palace of maanveer as i didn't like war scene so much.

5. i know by mistake in banner i gave name as rajput but ignore it.

6. i know maan 20 wifes left u in big shock but if i am writing this period drama than this is a important part.

7. read with your own wish and comment also only if you like it but silent readers plz dont ask question from me and pm me or demand for updat as this is only my loyal reader right.

Thank you

update in night

CHAPTER 1
CHAPTER 2
CHAPTER 3

i had so many exception with this story hope my like again reached as my other FF

got it

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#234

m not comparing with jodha-akbar...m liking it...not only liking it loving it...

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Mitu

@Mituag

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#235

READ TO UNDERSTAND STORY WITH DEPTH

NOTE AND INFORMATION

1. I AM NOT USING ANY particular surname IN THIS FF SO DON'T USE RAJPUT FOR GEET AS I WANT TO FREE MY MIND SO I IMAGINE A PLACE Rajbhumi and will call her 'viragana".

2. almost all king behavior is same their rituals their education and style but scene is always different as like padmni and jodha both are brave but they both are different their story is different.

3. here both are hindu so this ff is no near to jodha akber.

4. this is not a revenge story also.

5. there will most of the scene will belong to inside palace of maanveer as i didn't like war scene so much.

5. i know by mistake in banner i gave name as rajput but ignore it.

6. i know maan 20 wifes left u in big shock but if i am writing this period drama than this is a important part.

7. read with your own wish and comment also only if you like it but silent readers plz dont ask question from me and pm me or demand for updat as this is only my loyal reader right.

Thank you

update in night

CHAPTER 1

CHAPTER 2

CHAPTER 3

i had so many exception with this story hope my like again reached as my other FF

CHAPTER 4

This is a purely imaginary Fiction, nothing is related to history even some place is also not exist on earth. someone have problem pm me than.

Maan again sat on his singhasan (chair).. and all artists greeted him and left from there.. and maanveer turned her full attention on his new interest object.. who is still trying to kill him with glares.

[both poems are my property]

Naar chanchal vo angaro se bhare naina,
Shurveer rajkumari vo uska kya khana,
Jale de jaha dekhe le krodhit hokar,
Aor pigla de vo jaha dekhe le laja kar,
Do naina uske,
Muskara diya mujhe gayal karke,
Chaine chura le gaye uske vo do naina!!!

English translation

naught eye filled with fire,

brave princess what i say about her,

if she saw in anger turned another into ashes,

if she say in shyness than she is able to melt stone

two eye

her eyed smiled after taking my peace

her eye took my all peace!!!

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Story has been moved to blog

precap: what will maanveer do now and are you really thing. he is changed or this is a junoon for bending geetangli?

thanks for likes and comment

i really want to see this FF to reached 300 like Dulhan and My innocent doll

Edited by -Mitu- - 10 years ago

DO NOT COPY THIS POST AS THIS IS EXCLUSIVE TO INDIA FORUMS

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valli30

@valli30

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#236

me first 😊
Awesome update
maan amazed by geet's attitude and her bravery
As its first time someone stood infront of him without any fear and that to girl which is increasing maan's curiosity
Me eargely waiting for next part

Edited by valli30 - 12 years ago

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shri12

@shri12

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#237

fabulous dear maan is more attracted towads geet for her bravery and respect for her also can be seen in his words

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#238

first time maan must have seen a fearless girl..thats what making him curious on her..

nice part

geets bravery..loved it

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#239

wow lovely update.. oh god im falling for my king maan so much.. i want u maan.. te way geet challenging my maan and te way he is admiring his sherni was so lovely.. te way he smirking making his geet to irritated , but her challenge was so lovely.. but my maan placed her father in front of her.. now he will make her to bend.. i know my devil maan..i love te update