MG SS ~An Unexpected Life~ IMP Note pg 76!!! - Page 4

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nice prologue
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nice cs
ab part 1 jaldi se update karo plzzz

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PART 1

In Mumbai, Handa house

A small but a beautiful house with two rooms having a small garden in front.. It has many plants and beautiful flowers blooming..

Rano:Geet beta, jaldi aao nasta ke liye...uff eh ladki kabhi bhi time per nahi aati.. yeh sab aapke wajhe se hua hain ji, jab bhi dekho aap uski side lete ho.. bighad gayi hain aapki beti

Raj: Arre rano tum subhs subha kyu chilla rahi ho.

Geet: Good morning dad, kya hua mama ko itna gussa kyu aaya hain

Raj: woh kya hain na geet abhi tak koi uska khana nayi khaya hain na isliye..

Geet: oh toh aaj naya recipe try kiya hain kya..

both of them hi-fi each other and geet winks at her dad..

Rano: haan haan dono baap beti udao mera mazak.. main bhi dekhti hoon geet tum kya karogi shaadi ke baad.

raj becomes sad and caress geet's hair

Raj: koi baat nahi rano, geet ko kuch mat kehna waise bhi do ya teen saal mein ye apni sasural chali jayegi

Geet: dnt worry papa, main shaadi hi nahi karoongi bus aapke aur mama ke saath rahoongi..

Rano wipes her tear and says bus bohot ho gaya ab dono breakfast kijiye..

This is their daily routine teasing each other, laughing and having fun.. Raj drops geet to her college and goes to his work.

In Delhi, Khurana mansion

A beautiful mansion having a huge garden with fountain in front of the mansion.. A big and elegant chandelier is in the hall.. Royalty and elegance is oozing from the mansion.

Daadima is sitting in the hall and reading newspaper while meera and naintara are in the kitchen supervising the breakfast...

Meera: ma breakfast is ready..

Daadi: (stern face) hmmm sabko bulaye (and goes to the dining hall)

naintara comes to hall.

meera: yeh ma ko kya ho gaya subha subha itna gussa

naintara just giggles..

Meera: oh ab mujke pata chala, tum do ke dimag mein kuch khichidi pak rahi hain..

Yash , Dev and annie are sitting for the breakfast

Maan comes and sits... As usual he is speaking on phone regarding his business and shouting on someone

Daadi: what is this maan yeh ghar hain tumhare office nahi jo tum itni jor jor se chilla rahe ho..

Maan ignores his daadi's drama and starts eating..

Daadi: Naina aap gift laye hain. (everyone calls her as naina)

Naina: ji daadima

Yash: kiske liye ma?

Annie: arre dad bhool gaye kya kal mishra uncle ke bete ki shaadi hain..

Meera: Annie tumhare papa bhude ho rahe hain isliye kuch yaad nahi reheta..

everyone giggles and yash glares..

Daadi: waise maan humne jo envelope diya tha aapne dekha kya

Maan: daadima aap jante hain ki mujhe saadi nahi karni aap kyun mujhe taang karte hain.

Daadi: beta sapna acchi ladki hain.. pata hain naina mere saare friends jab apni bahu ke baare mein baat karte hain mugje kitna bura lagta hain...

naina: woh to hain daadima.. veerji mujhe jethani kab milegi?

maan: bas kijiye dono...

annie: bhai, mere saare college friends aape marte hain.. agar aap bole to mein kisi ko aapke liye set kardu...

everyone starts laughing maan just glares and goes away..

In Khurana Constructions

Maan: adi noida wala project ka status kya hain.. tumne Mr. Chopra se baat ki..

Adi: ji sir lekin..

Maan: lekin kya adi...

Adi: maine unhe bohot samjaya ki woh apni galti maan le par woh apni zid par kadhe hain..

Maan gets very angry and shouts

Maan: aadi... humhare company mei jo loss hui hain unke wajhe se hua hain... mujhe woh insaan sadak par chaiye, uske saare business barbad kardo.. samje...

Adi: lekin sir itna sa galti ke liye...

Maan: tum mere baat manoge ya mei tumhe sadak par le aao...

Adi agrees and goes away

NOTE: pls tell how is it, my first ff very nervous


Edited by sandymg - 12 years ago
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Again me first😃
Wow ..this is amazing...
You described it very well 👏

luv u maan...
what an attitude ⭐️loved it..
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"Maan:tum mere baat manoge ya mei tumhe sadak par le aao"
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Sare aam dhamki😆
Really liked his attitude yaar...
Great going buddy😊
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Will be waiting for next part😊
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amazing update
loved it
geet is so bubbly and sweet
maan hayye I love this maan oops MSK
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Good start Sandy
Keep it up

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