Maneet FF: Lost, Part 4, pg 32 on July 28 - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: angel-ki-shona

koi faida nahi nataunki karke Maan nahi milneh wala😆😛


jhoot mat bol...warna how come u have a BG😡😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: angel-ki-shona

awww you better mein bhool hi nahi doonghi I will spam you thread if I have to do that to get attention from miss popular😛


Its never gonna happen that I forget that I have a devil as a friend😉

❤️😳😃..

.u r most welcome to spam the spread otherwise too SB
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: angel-ki-shona

ohhh dehk babbie me was all ready but cherry backed out saying double update kya hota hai now you decide how is lazy😛

Acha ji who says Mel kush hai Mel is hell jealous that you just started writting and your zillion yimes better. Dukh mein mel will not write at all😛
hawww cherry called me bad😭😭😭


leh Babbie ko decide karne ki kya zarurat hai when me accepting that I am lazy😛😆

awww...mein apse better hoon, u r too much devil...ab next update mein pata chal jayega, I mean confirm hojayega ki, no one can beat u..u r d best. Aur haan bahane mat banna updates dene se dur rehne ke liye

awww...u crying, me sry,..ab nautanki band kar, u know how much I admire my SB😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: angel-ki-shona

kamini😡hai nah glared free form Mel😡

nahhh Kaha nah mera maan sirg mera hai😡😆
Haina meri great cherry kah great writting skills ka asra hai😆
So am I write😆
PHIR THANK😡
😡don't challenge me I will acteuly do it to make you upfate soch leh mental hoon or holidays hain😆


Glare...koi nahi Maan nahi toh tera hi sahi after all u might have taken training from him haina😉😆

Tu right hai..pata nahi😆😆

okayji me waiting..I want double updates of all your wrk, ab do din mein jo update kiya hai woh issme include nahi, issliye abhi tujhe aur zyada kaam karna padega😈😈😈
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: preeti555

awesome part
loved maan narration about his family


thank you dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: angel-ki-shona

😆Milli Babbie
I am telling you let her come uski ghair nahi😡😆


Hey girls, me here😊...mujhe bhulakar aap log gayab hogaye😆😆

Kya karegi Mel...BG se darayegi, if so I am all ready😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothikrish

oops sorry sorry sorry for late comment.
well well coming to the update it was awesome... i just loved maan's pov.
The way maan told about his family members is nice, his 2 siblings are very diff from maan.
Wonder why maan hates his mom.. strange..
and one more strange thing is he is comfortable a tiny miny bit is with his grandpa.. yar totally totally diff maan... loving very much..
please update soon...
i am eagerly waiitng.. u r online too 😃
continue sooonnn 😃


hi dear,

even I was thinking where is comment but now me happy

I am happy that Maan's pov is at least a little interesting for all😛😃

sure will do dear

thanks for commmenting


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Posted: 12 years ago

thank you😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 1
awesome...
cont soon...


thanks😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

(thanks for the sweet banner Jyothi)

PART-2

I, amidst sun setting in, along the strong clashes of waves, joyful laughter of children, fun of teenagers, romance of lovers, am taking a walk trying to gain some time for myself from work, outing, family, friends

Today indeed was a tiring day for me with all the work brewing up with no limit, but its the time where I enjoy and forget all the worldly things and get engrossed in work where I do not need to pretend.

And now enjoying this calmness and a different silence I forgot the time till I saw the sky turning dark and the waves getting higher making me realize that I need to head back home. I just couldn't miss my dinner. It's a tradition that all should be there for dinner just to keep us from drifting apart and to share our day's adventure and talk, talk and talk.

And with a tired sigh as I turn around I saw my cute frnds, Prakash and Priya…God I tell u they just can't stop fighting for silliest things on earth…now I wonder what it could be and walk up to them

Geet: Hi guys

Prakash & Priya: GEEETTT!!!!!!

SUN TOHHH

Geet (closes her ears and says): Tum dono chilana band karoge, mein tumhare pass mein toh hoon…kisi din tum dono ki awaaj se mere kaan (ears) phat jayenge.

Priya (pushing prakash away and closing his mouth says): Yaar woh sab chodh…mein kya keh rahi thi…haan…tu mere side hai samjhe

Prakash (get rids of Priya hands and says): Nahi woh sirf mere side legi samjhe tum

And they glare at each other and were about to start their fight when Geet interrupts them and asks what happened

Priya: This psycho is calling me names…to hell with that he called me Bojo in front of everyone…it was so embarrassing

Geet (with soft chuckle says): Haan toh he calls u that often in front of everyone

Before Priya could say anything Prakash chips in with

Bilkul…dekh Geet itni choti se baat ke liye usne mujhe Ash kaha…saying so he gives angry glares at Priya

Priya (gritting her teeth): Geet...tumhe pata hai who everyone…everyone as in all the board members and my colleagues

Prakash: Same goes here Bojo…how could u call me Ash in front of them

Priya: First of all, stop calling me that and its u who started it off…couldn't you just agree with my points which were of course very much valid and better than your stupid ideas.

Prakash: Oh…please..don't fly so high dear……..and it continues as if I just doesn't exist there

I tell u they are the sweetest people and best frnds one could have in their life…they are my childhood buddies. We have been together in all ups and downs, sorrows, happiness, every moment of our lives…and they are the only people who know my secrets too…

We studied together till our 12th, but then I opted interior designing and they medicine…still we meet every day at this time to catch up…well it was most of me trying to stop nonsense fights of this cute couple…yes u got me right they fell in love 2 years back, engaged 6 months ago and are to be tied in a couple of months in the spiritual and eternal bond of marriage

They are working in Khurana Hospitals and have gained respect and appreciation for their hard work and dedication.

P&P: Geetuuu….are u listening to us

Guess like I really need to end this...and taking a deep breath I gear up to hear their "great" reasons

Geet: Yes

P&P (say together): From now on, u r on my side

G: For what

Priya: Of course u calling him Ash

Prakash: Of course u calling her Bojo

I was a bit amused as to how they get the same words at the same time

And I was like WHAATTT and shake my head and moved from there ignoring their calling or say yelling at me for leaving it unanswered…they aren't arguing or angry to have their wonderful names being out but wanting me to call them so, so that they can get a chance to tease each other as they wouldn't get that opportunity at the hospital as they are too engrossed in taking care of patients to hear out these things from their colleagues.

Well Bojo and Ash really makes me laugh and nostalgic…bringing those sweet moments of past when we were 9 years old

Priya (comes running to their frnds): Bojo…bojo…bojo

Prakash & Geet: Huh??? What are u saying Priya

Priya: Arre I heard it somewhere..don't bother..but see isn't it different..bojo…wowww…so from now on u guys gonna call me so.

I used to wonder what is the meaning of it and what was so intriguing about it that she wanted us to call that…but that desire died when she was 15 and hated that word to core after we learnt the root of it, but Prakash couldn't leave the chance and was ended up being tagged as "Ash"

Well with these thoughts I drove away and am finally home.

After having my dinner amongst all chatter, I am once again left out with thoughts of how my days are going without any life and life without any purpose, but after a hell tiring day I don't want to get emotionally drained too, so I took my earphones to sway in my dream world where there are no worries, just ambitions and belief of happy life ahead despite of all hurdles, which I lost to hope in my real life.

By the way, I guess I haven't told u about myself.. well I am Geet….Geet Handa, have done my interior designing and am currently assistant to my boss, Varun Mittal, in "Serene Life."

I live with my parents, Suresh and Suhasini Handa, along with my elder sister, Soniya (26-year-old), and younger brother, Vikas (21-year-old).

Everyone say that I am lucky to have parents who support, guide, love and respect me and my wishes…which I wonder how real is it…still I couldn't deny the fact that I find calmness and warmth in their presence, which I hate to the core.

My di has completed her MBA finance and works as a financial advisor for Kapoor Industries…she is very beautiful thus many admirers, but a spoil brat, loves parties, pubs, try to have night-outs at every opportunity…but they never affect her work. I love her determination, dedication and hard work despite of my hatred or say jealousy towards her.

We just don't get along well…thanks to our sky high egos, her dominance and my stubbornness

My sweet bro, Vikas…very cool, funny, loving person…he is like a fresh breeze to my otherwise lifeless existence…a perfect charmer but no harm…doing his CA…he is the one with whom I love to spend my time.

Well, this is my small family along with my office where my life is revolving nowadays, but I just want the next 2 days to pass off quickly to complete my ongoing project and I can go back to my joyful life with frnds.

And with these thoughts I turn to my dreams with music to soothe me.

Finally done, hope you all will like it

(SB you owe me double updates of all your work😆😳)

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