my teacher (II) c index for (III) - Page 77

Originally posted by: yappingduck

u r scaring me... if the surprise is bhayanak, i am going to make u write another update till u give me a feel good feeling...i am not going to bed, with all kind of scry scenarios goign around in my bird brained head... so the next update be better accha one, otherwise, be ready for my talwar attack.😡

Why this Geet & Maan are so judgmental about each other...they just presume things without going into the depth & burn in their created hell fire...in fact have same characteristics especially when it concerns each other😊

Originally posted by: palindrome

Hmm..chapter started with beautiful "shair" of "Lady Ghalib"{Naureen}...I would like to confess,i used to consider🤗"shero shayari" cheesy before stumbling upon naureen's "shairs" on Avi's thread..They are classic in their own way..I don't know whether she writes them of her own or they are from some book but I totally love them...!!!! and I really thank her for giving me this pleasure..thank you naureen...!!!

Coming to the chapter-

Geet's monologue ..

As usual,it presented the sheer brilliance of your writing,Reet..!!! Each letter perfectly portrayed geet's emotions and her mental state at present and during those moments of intimacy...!!!

You know,since i had started reading this story,i have always wondered what is so special in your "writing??"which makes a reader glued to it..Finally last chapter made me understand,what is that special thing??? Its the beautiful portrayal of emotions of characters of the story..You have presented the "Hospital scene" in two different versions..In previous chapter,you presented the scene with Maan's perspective as well as a person's{writer's actually} perspective,who might have witnessed everything standing there ,wearing an invisibility cloak ofcourse...😛 and in this chapter,you presented the entire sequence with Geet's perspective..!!! I always wanted to know that whether geet noticed hurt and anger in maan's eyes when she told him ,vikas had touched her there??? and bang..!!! you told that in this chapter...!!! Being able to write littlemyself,I can understand,how difficult is it to think from each character's point of view and how difficult is to portray it..At one moment,you become Maan and at one moment,you have to think like Geet..!!!


and during this interchanging,you looses the track of right and wrong..What is right for geet becomes wrong from maan's pov and vice versa..Complications become more complicated when you have to take care of "reader's" expectations too...!!!

..and then comes a point,when writer's looses the "reins" of story and its the "characters" only which drive the story further of their own...!!!!

phew..I am sorry for all this "Ram katha" but I could not stop myself..Hope it would make some sense to you..and if don't then ignore my ramblings dear..!!! All i wanted to say that,you are very hardworking and fabulous writer..I would always admire the hard efforts you are putting to write this story and giving us such long long chapters...!! a BIG hug to you for that...!!!🤗

I think,i have already said alot, and i should stop now other wise comment super lengthy ho jayega...!!!!😆 You know,my story's updates are shorter than the comments i give on this thread...🤣

but jate jate,thoda toh bol ke jaungi...

Anant and Geet's meeting was umm..emotional form geet's side..Geet loves her grandpa alot..i wish that old man would have valued her selfless love 😡I am really glad that geet did not agree to leave the hostel..I already knew,she won't be able to leave after those lessons from her teacher...!!! Arjun heard only last bit of their conversation..Hope it would not create any misunderstanding further..They are all ready suffering from alot of misunderstandings...!!!

Mr.Sahay is struggling with the information,he had accidentally got... I am liking him more and more with each chapter..He is a good man...!!!

Nurse Melinda's appearance was a good surprise. Her words had actually given much strength to geet to bear all this and fight against it..After hearing her story,geet might have felt,the strong lady standing near her had endured much more than her..!!!

ok entry of Mr."you wanted me???",made me giggle..😆 He is good player of words..Actually they both are..!!! When Geet asked him to ask melinda to send lunch for her,I was like,why she is saying so???😕 I did not understand she was indirectly telling him that she had eaten and he should eat now..Girls are really complicated...She could have said all this directly too...!!!😕

Maaneet's "nok jhok" was entertaining and very cute..Reminded me of old GHSP days...!!!😃

and At last..

What a "deserving" punishment that Vikas had got...!!!👏.👏👏.👏👏.👏.👏.👏 It actually calmed my heart..!!!

Bravo to group of girls for taking this step and punishing him publicly..!!! This should be the actual punishment for every "rapist" in this world...😡

A standing ovation to the "writer" who made "Su and team" to do all this...!!!👏.👏.👏.👏

Hmm..so we have two "Hazel eyed" characters here..and I am confused whom i like most..Being a girl,i love the guy more...😉😆..!!!

Bas..ab mein samachar smapt karti hoon...!!!😃 Baki agle chapter ke baad..

PS-"dia was finally being accustomed with satya's talking style ..he never addresses her .just startles from behind "

You detailing of the characters always amazes me,reet...!!!!😃

okay ..
** gulp **

mam .. u successfully turned me speechless .

i had read your msg so many times yesterday after the net went off . as i had this page open in front of me.and yet couldnt get enough

about what you have said .. its difficult to stand in both their shoes and feel exactly what they are feeling ..that is really really difficult ..i m still trying ..hell confused . and hell irritated with myself . never ever gonna write this kind of complicated fic again .
god .. !
lol .. i didnt know what kind of job i was doing ..i dont know still now ...comment please definitely after the next chapter ..cause i had literally pulled out my hairs typing that part .
writtng is my addiction . i had successfully left it behind when i got into final year. wasnt able to handle study career marriage and writing . so had to put it on hiatus indefinitely . but you know its something deep inside me keeps bugging me trying to come outside .. like i will be relived it i could get rid of the plot ..and the only way was to write it . after writing 3 parts of my teacher i couldnt stop myself from logging in and post in IF.

palin ..u r being humble . i have read your work recently from mobile . i will comment tomorrow . thank god i wasnt trying write at that time .because it would have sucked .
beauty ..!
the plot was made totally different the way you made it .

emotions ..! well often i wonder if i overdo it ..
dont know myself ..but you must be knowing ..
you are the judge here .

thank you palin ..acknowledgement in such way .. its really keeps up my confidence and this fic alive


@ dia satya !- ahh i loved ur quote.

hey bhaggu yeh arjun geet ka kya hoga...he calls she blasts...she calls he blasts...back to square one dono

i find SIR word very dangerous these days... it makes all the difference between themm

grrr..this maaneet never open their heart and talk..asume..oh god pls kick them😆😆wonderful update.pls cont soon..

wow i really wanted geet to see him in that state...glad that she did...awesome part...cannt wait to s the surprise...update sooon

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