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Posted: 12 years ago
Yayy! 😊

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Hmm ... quite a lot happening all together but I'm loving it.

The reaction of Arjun, Geet and everyone on seeing the punishment met out to Vikas was quite varied but ultimately it was contentment that justice was met. Arjun was stunned but somewhere the reality sunk in that the conscience was just needed to be stirred for girls to take up such action that even his statement couldn't cause, and he did feel pride of his students for the way they stood together for justice and a girl's honour however bitter they might have been towards her. You know now some bitterness I had towards her fellow students seems to be ebbing away somewhat. She was mad at him for the afternoon fight and so was he yet both just tended to swift & lean towards each other when a slight disturbance came their way... one to ask for comfort & warm support while the other to willing provide for it. Her tensing seeing a crowd gathered and him being tuned to her needs coming in a jiffy to encircle her in his embrace giving her the needed support she will crave for that too without asking 👏

"He was her only shelter no matter where she was..." Beautiful and spoke for both of them. That whatever be the situation unconsciously & deep within they know of the universal fact that they have only each other to hold onto. She feared seeing Vikas in front of her that his helpless and unworthy self didn't come into picture for her, but she relived her nightmare & freshened her raw wounds. Just showing that the victim is victimized more ... but yet she had her personal saviour for her who will never let her succumb to her fears. Maan will never ever be that Geet who fears facing that good for nothing worm.

Felt bad for Dia... but I know she is stronger much stronger than Geet can ever be in this matter. She is very mature but then she has her own vulnerabilities. Anyone would have been bitter & hurt with all that has dished out to her from the very start and not only in love matters. So it is but natural for her to feel bitter for Geet whom she considers has got all that she has ever desired but had to always fight it out for her self but Geet without asking has got it but in her view Geet doesn't value it not knowing that each person has their own baggage and Geet too has her own past that has caused to her to behave so towards her blessings as she has her insecurities and not able to know that it is all hidden from her making her feel so unworthy & incapable of love so pure & unconditional.

Dis is person according to me who is bitter because of whats he has faced in life with the struggles but yet never backed or bowed down. She is a gem of a person and Satya is going to be lucky to have her who is so pure of heart but is not able to express herself as she knows to express her love through hurt & pain but nevertheless feels deeply for her loved ones. She expresses so her love because she never has had that support to whom she can lean onto on let her feelings free without being the one who has to stand strong. So she fears to be the one who needs others support or kind words because then she will be vulnerable and will be expecting sleepless support from the other and if she doesn't get it she won't be able to take it. She feels sad to be unknowingly in league of being supposed husband snatcher but then Satya calms her in his own dhasu unique way. Satya ishtyle. 😳

"love doesn't mean you have to hurt all persons whoever comes your way..." Hayee love .. Satya blurted out unconsciously he feels for her & someday may want her to feel. His this line comforted her in a way shielding her vulnerable resisting self. And then he shows her a beautiful aspect of her own self in contrast to her own bitter words for self... Husband snatcher, rude, bitter.... and his you're honest & breathtakingly beautiful. I'm so loving these two.

I liked how the girls supported Geet yet made ti clear that they just support against the crime and not her own blunder of accusing someone, but yet the hope was there she is giving a chance to earn her own respect by self.

Geet-Arjun still have a lot to tend to & heal each other.

That SIR is going to be haunting & breaking them both till its in between them. All her insecurities & fears are centered around this word... she wants that ruby his acceptance & forgiveness but doesn't want to voice it in her own self doubt & inner demons. While he is a teacher of a language but in language of love he is dependent on actions and not that forth coming with words. He feels his actions should reassure her and making her confident of his love but fails to realise that his angered words pushed her away the only love filled words can bring her near & closer forever. He can use words in anger but fails to use words in love.

I liked how he slept only when he knew she would be safe as Vikas was in a punishable state getting part of his due.

Vikas 😡😡😡 IDIOT CREEP WORM still initially felt happy & proud that girls were touching him how disgusting and low he can fall. Yet I loved each bit of hsi suffering, humiliation & torture he was met with. 👏 He was helpless ready to bow down to the girls to have pity on him, good ready to bow in front of a gender he taught he could trample upon on move ahead freely.

Dev... Oh okay. I'm not forming opinions about him but liked his role so far. But he is causing the needed thawing between these two souls who always need someone to act as a catalyst as they are otherwise in their own world either of guilt or hurt causing communication gaps and hurt anger pushing them away.

Lets see what is there for Geet-Arjun now.

Why do I feel the surprise is with them confronting each other & him putting the ruby in her fingers... 😳 (I am being hopeful but I want it to be a sweet & desired surprise... 😉)

Continue soon... 😃

Edited by Onir - 12 years ago
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Read the first half!
Loved that Geet got to see Vikas being punished. Her hesitance to look towards him, the girls uniting to support her and making her acknowledge that he can't do anything to her. I loved that..
Her standing with her class mates still questionable but at least she is not loathed. They are with her and support her in her struggle.. that gave me peace...
Her statement that the girls gave her support when the police couldn't 👏👏
This will go a long way in her healing...
Dia, I could have cried for her here. That must be the most painful... Satya understands her and pulls her out of it with his statement...I am loving them too..😳😳
Arjun Sir calling...
Answer the phone Reet... don't leave me hanging...
😆😆
Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 27

First part of the chapter included Geet's reactions to Vikas punishment and dia's pain and "Satya's slip of tongue or i must say,slip of "heart"...😉😊
As usual everything was perfectly portrayed..Geet's fear on seeing him again and her clinging to her only support..No matter how much anger she had in her for him,but atlast she would seek his support only..Its an unconscious reaction..just like,when we feel ourselves in some kind of danger or we are about to fall,"Mummyyy...or Maaa..." comes out of our lips without any conscious effort...!! and here arjun is all the relations that she has in her life...!!!
Rashi,payal,alia,su,zaria and dia...Kudos to them for their "support" to Geet..!!!
Coming to Dia's pain...Her reactions ,her mean??umm..no..insensitive words to Geet were natural outcome of the pain ,jealousy and despair she might have felt at that moment...!! Thank you Reet for bringing Satya in the picture..They deserve each other..!!!
Whole Dia-Satya conversation can be used to tell some one Dia's character...!!! you know,i was sharing this story with my younger brother some days ago and I was unable to put Dia's character in words..!!! I just said,she is geet's rival but still she is my favourite...!!!! but you have described her perfectly in this conversation dear...!!!

Dia u r blunt ..not rude . u feel for people in your own way . people thinks u r selfish . but u r not..

This line by satya..describes her perfectly...!!! You are brilliant with words,reet..You have a words for every situation,every emotion and every character in this story..!!!
I think,i would never get tired of singing your praises...😆
.👏
and these words of satya..U r honest ..and breathtakingly beautiful !,They perfectly told what his heart wants...!!!
Apart from these,i loved these words from dia too..
I m with you because you DON'T deserve this..
your oneliners are always gems...!!!!
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Geet's interaction with Aliya and Rashi..I loved the "straightforwardness" of their words here..They accepted their fault of deciding the geet's punishment of their own to forbid her from all the common places..,yet they did not hesitate to state geet's mistake of false accusation...!!!
However,when they used the word "Indecent" for the relationship between Arjun sir and geet,I felt slight anger and pinch...I know they were right with this word because of limited knowledge they had about maaneet's relation but still i could not stop myself from feeling bad..I felt like yelling,there is nothing "indecent" in their relation...😆
However geet's reply to them was full of despair ,pain and subtle anger...!!!
This part made me wonder,how would rashi and aliya have reacted if geet's answer was in yes..!!!😕 Would their respect for Arjun had disappeared suddenly??? We,indians,do have "judgemental genes" in our genome since homosapiens were evolved...🤣
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Arjun's call to Geet and her outburst..!!! I think,that was needed..she might have felt light after yelling all that..!!!
She needs "verbal assurance" from him since day one..She wants him to tell his emotions in words like she does..Her love confession to him is still fresh in my mind...!!! Her words were pure and very daring,I must say..!!!
In this need of words from him,she is ignoring his "actions" which are screaming his love...In their case,Action does not speak louder than words,i guess..!!!
I wish,Arjun had asked her to stop calling him sir but then everything would have fallen in place,fir story aage kaise badhti...😆
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Vikas condition...
oh I felt so calm after reading that..Now he must have understood the humiliation and fear,that geet might have felt then..!!! He deserves to b die hungry and thirsty,in his own excreta..!!!😡
Again kudos to you for stating his feelings so perfectly👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.That dog was happy being naked among girls once...😡 How could you define a villain's mentality so well,reet..just tell me how..???
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Last part had geet's mature talk with Dev..She had been always clear with words and this time too,she did not hide anything from dev except her and arjun's relationship..and i understand the reason behind,she herself is pretty unsure about it...!!!
Dev came out as a sensitive and adorable person...As i have stated earlier,his care and concern for geet is genuine..I admire him for his decision of keep waiting for her on his own risk..!!! He too needs good life partner just like dia...!!!!
ok arjun sir's jealousy and possessiveness...Reet,You never let Maan and geet to go out of their characters...No matter what,how much understanding and maturity arjun portrays as a teacher,he can't help himself with his possessiveness as lover..He could not bear to see his love touching dev's hand..I love how he shouted at everyone who came into his way after witnessing geet with dev in cafeteria..He was jealous with capital j...!!!😆

Geet's craving for his love was quite evident in the phone call...poor girl was pained alot because this time he did not even inquire about her medicine and food...!!!
Simple and mundane things and big misunderstandings... Kudos to the writer who is weaving this tale so beautifully with these two means..!!!!👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.
love you dear..!!!🤗

PS- agle chapter ka "samachar prasaran" kal...😆
Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
REET POST THIS IN THE CHAPTER
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Posted: 12 years ago
hope the surprise is not a nasty one...i am just fervently praying for both of them to understand each other, rather than jumping to conclusions about each other... it pains to see them apart and when one takes a step forward, they end going back to square one...
the vikas matter was handled superbly..
and i love the satya-dia angle... hope dia realises that she is hoping against hope , if she expects maan to reciprocate her feelings forgetting all about geet..she needs to move on...

dev was again portrayed as one adorable character...the lines uttered by him were mindblowing and just melt your heart...he is one good soul, who deserves all the love ...

i love the spunky girls, they make me feel proud. they have come together, keeping aside their prejudices, differences and have given a befitting punishment to vikas...

the only thing that leaves me sad is there is no improvement in maan and geet's relationship... its status quo...hope to see them clearing their misunderstandings and stop making stupid assumptions about each other...
looking forward for the next update😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
i dont think i can take any of more surprises unless it is a pleasant one...

or even them fighting one on one will do...😆
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Wow!
So much more came...😆
Geet blasting Arjun!! Loved it... he always plays it safe not opening up himself to her and now she is done with the guessing game...I am glad she did it. She is getting back to the old Geet.. her being broken and depressed was too sad. I like the fire she shows. Seems like the meds are working...😉
Anger is a form of haq that she feels she has on him...😳
Dev came out as a nice thoughtful intelligent guy! I really liked him although I feel sorry for him. What a shocker for him to think of her in this way and now have to bear witness to her pain.
Arjun coming in at the wrong time to see them. of course... Dia being there too!! Even in his anger, he does not fail to protect her from the reporters. ❤️ that about him.
Vikas.😡... What a fitting punishment for the scoundrel🤣🤣 Loved it...
PLEASE continue soon...
Next time if you say and hour and don't come back, I'll come after you...😆😆😆
Thanks for updating...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: yappingduck

hope the surprise is not a nasty one...i am just fervently praying for both of them to understand each other, rather than jumping to conclusions about each other... it pains to see them apart and when one takes a step forward, they end going back to square one...
the vikas matter was handled superbly..
and i love the satya-dia angle... hope dia realises that she is hoping against hope , if she expects maan to reciprocate her feelings forgetting all about geet..she needs to move on...

dev was again portrayed as one adorable character...the lines uttered by him were mindblowing and just melt your heart...he is one good soul, who deserves all the love ...

i love the spunky girls, they make me feel proud. they have come together, keeping aside their prejudices, differences and have given a befitting punishment to vikas...

the only thing that leaves me sad is there is no improvement in maan and geet's relationship... its status quo...hope to see them clearing their misunderstandings and stop making stupid assumptions about each other...
looking forward for the next update😃




oh you have no idea what i have planned for !!!

jor ka jhatka jorse lage ga ...sampa ke language me

oops .. !


did i say some thing !
😛
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Originally posted by: dqno1

Wow!

So much more came...😆
Geet blasting Arjun!! Loved it... he always plays it safe not opening up himself to her and now she is done with the guessing game...I am glad she did it. She is getting back to the old Geet.. her being broken and depressed was too sad. I like the fire she shows. Seems like the meds are working...😉
Anger is a form of haq that she feels she has on him...😳
Dev came out as a nice thoughtful intelligent guy! I really liked him although I feel sorry for him. What a shocker for him to think of her in this way and now have to bear witness to her pain.
Arjun coming in at the wrong time to see them. of course... Dia being there too!! Even in his anger, he does not fail to protect her from the reporters. ❤️ that about him.
Vikas.😡... What a fitting punishment for the scoundrel🤣🤣 Loved it...
PLEASE continue soon...
Next time if you say and hour and don't come back, I'll come after you...😆😆😆
Thanks for updating...🤗





grr... cant reply .. if i type another word i might spill it .
i m going to post that u offered in next chapter .

ha ha ...
no no ..
..if my net connection doesn't fail me ..i m updating within 11.30
still confused about the length !
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Originally posted by: Amour_Reet




oh you have no idea what i have planned for !!!

jor ka jhatka jorse lage ga ...sampa ke language me

oops .. !


did i say some thing !
😛



u r scaring me... if the surprise is bhayanak, i am going to make u write another update till u give me a feel good feeling...i am not going to bed, with all kind of scry scenarios goign around in my bird brained head... so the next update be better accha one, otherwise, be ready for my talwar attack.😡

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