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Smily

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Posted: 11 years ago

#721

awesome update

geet ko abhi thodi si der hui hai apne mayke mein aur abhi se maan ko miss kar rhi hai

geet is sooo innocent

luvd it

continue soon

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frehman82

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Posted: 11 years ago

#722

Lovely update ...
enjoyed it alot...
eagerly waiting for next...

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drashti88

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Posted: 11 years ago

#723

sooo sweet update valli. thanks for it. waiting for the next.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#724

lovely update! Poor Maaneet! Geet does nt wanna go! Maan assures her! Geet nt realisin her feelings! Maan is so sweet! update soon! Well written

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#725

part 16
awesome dear...
lovely...
so everyone is thinking Maan and Geet consummated their marriage...
Geet is so innocent...
and hope Maan protects her every time...
nice one...
cont soon dear...

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#726

Valli dear i forgot to say this for the previous update dear...
thank u so much for the dedication...
and that Deepa Darling is reminding me of
DD as in Dhrasti Dhami,
DD as in Dhak Dhak,
DD as in Delhi Dreamy and
DD as in Dramebaaz Daadima...

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Dona

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Posted: 11 years ago

#727

part 15 n 16
loved it
maami ek baat kar rahi hai n geet dusri baat ka answer de rahi hai
awesome

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srikantharaja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#728

iting for full update plz soon thanks ur great writer plz update thanks keep up ur great all those who are silent plz like comment so ve can get great update so plz everyone encourage the writer ... \ GOOD ENCOURAGE IS A WRITER GIFT SO PLZ EVERYONE PLZWRITER UR SUGGESTION AND LIKE AND COMMENTS appriciate the writer hard work p so plz udpate update update next part plz thanks 😃

a writer should be encorage by the fan to get gooing with the writing so plz encurage and like comment to be reconize thanks

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maanshi

@maanshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#729

part 15

awesome lovely part

maan take initiative n made convo with geet n told her about his full life n feelings n expectation ... from his humrahi
n also made geet comfortable with his loving touch n importance of this to as partner ... but geet not told about her much nor fulfilled his desire n slept

maan is so sweet n so lovingly told geet about all ... love it
most lovely moment when geet felt happy as maan told her he love her
that was so heart touchy ... her desire to be love by some one
great writing ...
love it

part 16

full with family n friends beautiful moments
maaneet moments was lovely
geet didn't want to go .. but ...

in geet mayka ll que her n geet told all about HER family/sasural proudly thanks to maan

hehehe...mami ask about pain n geet mistook as love bite pain...

want geet to know about real relation ...