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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

44. A Melody gone wrong-

Oh this was painful... very sad ending to such a beautiful and dream filled person.
It so disappointing when you are so broken within that choosing giving up your life seems easier. I am never a supporter of suicide and it's difficult for me to accept when someone does so, I will never understand Naina's choice here but yes I do agree that it's her choice and decision, and each of it leads to different paths. I guess she was left with no hope... one can live with difficulties but loss of hope kills your soul... and living soulless is a punishment.
She was a n escapist and yet I never saw this coming, she calls herself coward and yet dreamt... she lived in fear but yet managed falling in love which she never named but still cherished and lived... Only I feel sad that she opted to die in love rather than live and fight for it... She fought for her Mom at the tender age of 18 in her own logical teenager way ... but then she didn't live at all... giving a guilt filled life for her mom.
Her dad ... somehow I don't feel any empathy for him. nor any hate... actually no emotion for him.. cause he at the start was okay with the thought of even killing her if she caused any nuisance.. but then her death due to suicide left him with nothing... not even his false pride, nor his so called respect in society. He was always a fake man and used his morals of life to justify his acts ..he was already paralysed way before in his thoughts when he treated his family the way he did... Naina's Death just caused his paralysis to manifest physically... the hand and strength that he used to demonstrate authority and cause fear ... was left powerless with the act Naina committed. Just sad that, only if her act was something else such as standing for her self and other women in her family may be things would be different.
But I guess Meghana could at least be saved form all of it ... and it must be destines so.
I really felt bad for Tweety... she must not have seen this coming, so painful. At least before she was only not knowing her friend's whereabouts but now the loss is so great and the grief will be more as she was the one who was left out ... Scared for her relation with Geet now.


This is why you are called as Doc!!!!

Any person can make a point..but you imprint a beautiful image and perspective in the hearts!!!👏

You analyze each and every relation, feeling and nuances so intimately.. .. i feel so happy to be here!!! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

43. Nursing his wounds-

I love this passionate and amused Maan. 😆 His one liners are deep and I can't help feeling so great about it. He hits a cord each time.
He somehow always tends to hurt her through some form of heat 😉 and then he is the one who comes to comfort her with his warmth.,... bechari Geet will die of warmth. 😆
Anyways... This update was all Maan. ❤️ He's too good... AND the last line just blew me completely "Don't care for me so much, cause when I do... I can't stop" 😲 Lovely. Just shows how he craves for Love ... his whole life he has lost so much and so many dear ones that he's afraid getting close only to be hurt later... but as Tanvi said before you can't help when your heart desires something.


@ italics

Oh Doc..

Dont make us crave for your analysis and writing so much, cause when i do... i can't stop!! 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
45. Torments -1 :
Tweesha.. it must be so difficult for her. She a strong girl who ahs a care a damn attitude projected towards the world. But within she is actually a small girl who mourns over the detah of even a pup... how much intensely she must be feeling about the death of her dear friend... that too a friend she actually lost so many years back... there must be some many times in the years gone by that she must have wondered why only she was not knowing about her friend's whereabouts, she must have even felt lonely loosing out on both her friends in the same period of time. She must have also felt so angry and might have even hated Naina for a moment or two when she just didn't have any answers ... without even realising that her friend is dead... whom she was hoping she would meet someday sometime. Bad for her.
Vicky my love... he is so good ❤️ Only he can take care of this Tweety... he can absosrb her pain and take all her shit and yet never go away form her when she's so lost to the world.
Waiting for more on them.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz


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Oh Doc..

Dont make us crave for your analysis and writing so much, cause when i do... i can't stop!! 😛

Oh Kittu ... seriously, you turned the wordings towards me 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thread 3 Kids!
I never thought I will live to see this day😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

41: Tera Naam Ishq-

Oh my This update left me speechless. It was so beautifully woven that I kept reliving all the moments here. There was depth and symbolism in each act of theirs.
Starting from the balcony itself where they first met and fought to them reaching this phase of life where there's tenderness when they see each other. She trying to give his belonging back to him and ends up being within his embrace as his beloved treasure... where she belongs. 👏
His acceptance after all the turmoil he's gone through to keep pushing her away. He comes to soothe her from her nightmares where as she gives him a sleep with no worry or pain after years of craving for it. In a way this night both of them came to live through something that had shackled them from long and something just eased even if for few stolen moments b ut they did live a life that their heart desires.
Indeed their feelings can be aptly named as Love.
Her nightmare scares me ... has she witnessed something happening to Sameer or something else in her past??? ... This part keeps coming either in her dreams or whenever she lets her subconscious surface during times of vulnerability.


@maggie - you owe Doc!!

None ... i mean none can make your writing so beautiful except her!!!


I love this chapter so much... its just beyond beautiful..and full of love.. and here she is with her wonderful words !!! wowww 😳


"Don't tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass."
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Posted: 10 years ago
46. Starting over-
Oh yes they're starting over *Jumping with joy* 😃
Tanvi... I'm liking her more and more each time. She's just awesome... her observation and the way she understands the things going around her ,... be it her shooting star or her brother she just is too good with her ways of handling everything. RIshta sach mein purana hai 😉
Maan Asked her "Go out with me" oh my my 😳
But I guess seeing a girl who is always so guarded with her emotions and so shy, laughing so whole heartedly without a care in the world would obviously leave him speechless .. and make him blurt out things he actually desires.
Credit completely goes to the mother-son duo ... they are wonderful... Cupid for Maan and Geet 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
fab update! well written! Tweesha is shattered! she is so hurt! she is not as string as she portrays herself 2 b! Vicky goes after her! They argue! she lets out her pain!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Avi's pics accompanied by the magic of Bratty's words and below it Doc's beautiful summarizations
What heaven is this dear god.
Please let me die in peace here.
The pics and Doc's comments have added a whole new dimension to Bratty's words
You ladies amaze me every time with your ingenuity, each and every time👏

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Posted: 10 years ago
47: Torments - 2:
Loved Vicky as always ... I want him for me. Please 😳
Tweesha is so badly hurting... she's a danger to self... and only Vicky can heal like he did years back when she lost something dear to her.
She indeed is trying to be an eel trying to escape from him... but he too won't let her go. She's trying everything within her to separate her self form the pain but can't manage pushing him away ... as she has given him the right to be there for her... I like how both the couples within the same time frame but at different places are trying to thaw the ice within the girls which one incident years back left them scarred.
Vicky isn't letting her go and forcing her to vent it out on him... I guess the playful and sometimes passionate him can only let Tweety face the pain that Tweesha is trying to forego.
She was trying to be the Rock who even when faced with storms doesn't soften but he is trying to be the fire who by his passion and love is trying to melt her insecurities away... 👏
And she did melt somewhat ... though not in his presence as he gave her, her space and privacy that she wished from him but yet made her be aware that he's just few steps away to hold / run back to whenever she would want to.

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