MG OS#15: Jiss Pe Hum Mar Mitay (Completed) - Page 5

Originally posted by: nilu710

Beautifull it was... Really liked it... The way the story formed... Beautifully written dear...

Thank you

thank you so much nilu...
so happy to see u enjoyed it...
n thanx for liking the writing style... :D

Originally posted by: nishnal

Story brought tears in my eyes truly...loved each n every emotion...I felt touched...thanks for this wonderful story wid new concept...amazing... 👏 👏 👏 plz add me to ur buddy list...n can I get the link of ur other stories I would Lyk to read them too...!!

thank you so much dear...
glad that os could touch your heart...
i added u in the list...
n hope u will like other os's too...:D

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

The end was not at all boring buddy.But I wud say it was perfect.Dont you think We have lots of "different" stories to read.Every now and then I love to read the fairy tale ending wala stories.They are magical like this OS.Loved it.

thanku do much sampa for such supportive comments...
n glad this fairytale kind of stories make you happy...
i just dont write fictional things...i want to attach them to reality too...n hope my thoughts reaching to u guys too...
:D

Originally posted by: NANDY_BRU

i really loved it

amazing story

the way you have written add essence to the story

i loved geet's character

finally maan changed

loved it

thanku nandy dear...
so so happy that my writing did justice to this story in ur eyes...

hugs

Originally posted by: mounacuty

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">yet another superb os from urside ...i seriously lost all my words to praise u dear...speechless😳</font>

thanku dear...
u always support me...n that really raise up my moral eaxh time...
happy to see u liking this Os too... <3

awesome dear...
wow so lovely...
very nicely written...

Ah-Mazing OS dear 😃
Was missing ur OS so badly. 😳
I love loved loved it 😳 🤗
Beautifully written. 👏
Love this kind of concept. And jealousy tracks are my fave. 😆
Poor geet she had to act being the girlfriend of the man she loves.
I absolutely loved her outburst after the party. 👏 she declared him that she was about to be raped and she loves him wooow. 👏
Maan became a majnoo. Very well deserved. 😡 😆
Aww geet got this wonderful chance to showcase her talent. 👏
Ooops maan interrupt their fake kiss and replaced it by a real one. 😉 👏
Loved his confession. 😳
Awww to his lovely proposal. 👏
Ansolutely loved and enjoyed it. 👏
Thanks for writing it. Love ur concept and amazing ideas. Please do write more. 😳 🤗

😊 Beautiful os. Loved it.

Originally posted by: sonu4ever

Ah-Mazing OS dear 😃
Was missing ur OS so badly. 😳
I love loved loved it 😳 🤗
Beautifully written. 👏
Love this kind of concept. And jealousy tracks are my fave. 😆
Poor geet she had to act being the girlfriend of the man she loves.
I absolutely loved her outburst after the party. 👏 she declared him that she was about to be raped and she loves him wooow. 👏
Maan became a majnoo. Very well deserved. 😡 😆
Aww geet got this wonderful chance to showcase her talent. 👏
Ooops maan interrupt their fake kiss and replaced it by a real one. 😉 👏
Loved his confession. 😳
Awww to his lovely proposal. 👏
Ansolutely loved and enjoyed it. 👏
Thanks for writing it. Love ur concept and amazing ideas. Please do write more. 😳 🤗

thanku so much dear...
was busy with the fic...so couldn't write any os before...
jealousy tracks are my fav too...😉
yup...geet had enough of his arrogance...so she burst out...
haha...majnu tau usay banana hi tha na😆😆
i will surly write more further on😳🤗

lovely os just like a fairy tale...