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MeghnaA

@MeghnaA

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Edited by MeghnaA - 12 years ago

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

beautiful update...pls give happy ending..😃

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

thats so beautiful...i loved those concluding lines..they just made me go weepy and smiling at how beautiful this is... couldnt have been more lovely...flawless...😳

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.OneDirection.

@.OneDirection.

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

Adorable Part ...

Totally Loved the way u conveyed everthng with ur words. Loved it ❤️
Hope to get one mre sequence . Pls ...

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anmirza

@anmirza

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

Beautiful! Please end this on a happy note =)

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Nitya

@ChanandlerBong

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

👏 *****Bow **** , ****claps******

I wont ask you for a happy ending !! Pls write what you have planned further 😛

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MaankigopiMadhu

@MaankigopiMadhu

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

Please please please please ... HE IS COMING BACK, RIGHT ?? RIGHT ?? 😡 Make him .. for some of us are faint hearted and cannot take it any other way 😭.. CANNOT, YOU HEAR !!! 😡 Just love it :D ❤️

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sridevi

@sridevi_n

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

Beautiful one. in that you have described the feelings and longing of geet waiting for maan to be return from war. here u described the feelings of maan who is going to go for war and didn't know if he will return or not.