The Seven Year 'Hitch' [2] - Chp 11/ Pg 53 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
nice one...i need to read it once again with a proper peace of mind which i dint get at alll...
it was a lenghtyy one Onir...glad that they spoke to each other...😊😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update

she has reached the break point yet she is not breaking
her pain is deep now and lets see how maan works on it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb update

it is nature rules with the time passes people change their priorities change

same is happened with maan & geet

but maan is not d only one to be blamed somewhere geet is also wrong to keep this thing to her. she should let him to know where their relation is moving ahead

and now she wants to live with this flow or say routine of their life

every married couple or people who r in relation face this phase in their life. i had seen my parents too.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6



this is just wonderful update...

painful but whatever Geet said is true...

normally couples can't voice it out because they don't have courage and those who get courage ended up in divorce...it happens in normal couples life after some yrs into marriage that everything becomes routine and after sometime more that routine becomes habit...then couple lived with each other out of habit not love...

waiting for next part...

what will be both's decision...I think they should extract solution instead of breaking the bond...

thanx for pm...


Thank you! 😊
Yes couples do face such situations ... you will have to wait to see what these two do to restore their relation...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: 111priyan

beautiful update
finally all the suppressed feelings came out
wonder what will maan would do now how they gonna make it work. after all this how they gonna rebuild what they had before

Thank you! 😊

Trust me they will make it work ... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: kiran_rati

poor geet

superb one
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear

Thank you! 😊

Will try to continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
part 8
awesome...
poor Geet...
Maan has been neglecting for so long...
now what is he gonna do?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: dqno1

👏👏👏I have been through some of these issues with friends who are having relationship problems and I have to applaud you for the way you have portrayed this. Especially the last part where she acknowledges her failure too in this circumstance.

It is the rule of nature that changes occurs. The pulsating mad passion of youth, the slight mellowing with children and responsibilities, the career that demands more than a lover at times all are phases and cycles that a relationship goes through. The toughest is when the person who could not stop thinking about you does stop thinking about you. Every marriage goes through this phase at different levels of severity. Geet and Maan are at the level where one is in total denial where as the other is ready to give up but can't.
Caring and nurturing takes time. Thinking about someone and making their small wishes and dreams come true takes effort. Giving of oneself takes willingness. I have always felt that unless you have the time and want to make the effort and are willing you should not get married or be in a relationship. There is no way to keep a partner happy like that.
They need new ways to reach each other. Make things matter for each other. As his father said build the edifice together again.
I am stunned by the intelligence with which you write Onir. In all sincerity I have never ever found a writer who is so in touch with their characters and their pain. The raw actions of each reflect their feelings and you have formed them cohesively without use of vulgar or abusive language or any clichs.


VERY WELL SAID
THERE DOES CROP A FEELING OF COMPLACENCE, TAKING FOR GRANTED AND A SENSE OF CARELESSNESS IN EVERY RELATION AFTER SOME TIME
SOME WEATHER THE STORM WHILE SOME DRIFT APART
ONE HAS TO START FROM SCRATCH TO REBUILD THE RELATION
HOPE MAAN IS ABLE TO UNDERSTAND AND BOTH ARE WILLING TO TRY AGAIN
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: honeygrape

nice one...i need to read it once again with a proper peace of mind which i dint get at alll...

it was a lenghtyy one Onir...glad that they spoke to each other...😊😊

Thanks! 😊
Take your time ... I know its quite lengthy read it aaram se whenever you can. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sdlife19

nice update

she has reached the break point yet she is not breaking
her pain is deep now and lets see how maan works on it

Thanks! 😊

Maan will work on it & Geet too has to work on it. 😊

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