The Seven Year 'Hitch' [2] - Chp 11/ Pg 53

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Avi , Mayyo take your time... aaram se... 😊

No issues at all... 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

👏👏👏I have been through some of these issues with friends who are having relationship problems and I have to applaud you for the way you have portrayed this. Especially the last part where she acknowledges her failure too in this circumstance.

It is the rule of nature that changes occurs. The pulsating mad passion of youth, the slight mellowing with children and responsibilities, the career that demands more than a lover at times all are phases and cycles that a relationship goes through. The toughest is when the person who could not stop thinking about you does stop thinking about you. Every marriage goes through this phase at different levels of severity. Geet and Maan are at the level where one is in total denial where as the other is ready to give up but can't.

Caring and nurturing takes time. Thinking about someone and making their small wishes and dreams come true takes effort. Giving of oneself takes willingness. I have always felt that unless you have the time and want to make the effort and are willing you should not get married or be in a relationship. There is no way to keep a partner happy like that.

They need new ways to reach each other. Make things matter for each other. As his father said build the edifice together again.

I am stunned by the intelligence with which you write Onir. In all sincerity I have never ever found a writer who is so in touch with their characters and their pain. The raw actions of each reflect their feelings and you have formed them cohesively without use of vulgar or abusive language or any clichs.

Amazingly well written update...

Only flaw I see is that none of my demands are being met...😆

Soon I hope...😉

Thanks for updating...

Superb job.👏

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Awesome writing.

Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago

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tamannA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

update maan confrontation to geet and geet pouring her pain yes maan in his work schedules taken granted his family and drifted far away from them now geet don't want to involve further in breaking her heart more

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: dqno1

white and blue combo... 😳

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: dqno1

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: tamanna1391
update maan confrontation to geet and geet pouring her pain yes maan in his work schedules taken granted his family and drifted far away from them now geet don't want to involve further in breaking her heart more

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Thanks... 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

this is just wonderful update...

painful but whatever Geet said is true...

normally couples can't voice it out because they don't have courage and those who get courage ended up in divorce...it happens in normal couples life after some yrs into marriage that everything becomes routine and after sometime more that routine becomes habit...then couple lived with each other out of habit not love...

waiting for next part...

what will be both's decision...I think they should extract solution instead of breaking the bond...

thanx for pm...

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111priyan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

beautiful update
finally all the suppressed feelings came out
wonder what will maan would do now how they gonna make it work. after all this how they gonna rebuild what they had before